Muje bhool jana tum...

by vinery on May 20, 2015, 01:03:49 AM
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"Tera pyaar mera gehna hai,
Aansuon se boon kar pehna hai.

Hawaa ke sath beh aana tum,
Khushboo apni de jaana tum.

Dard ban dil me reh jana tum,
Itna gam mera seh jaana tum.

Dil ban kar dhadkana tum,
Jaan ban kar tadapna tum.

Ruh me meri ghul jaana tum,
Yaadon me meri jhool jana tum.

Paani ki tarah dhul jaana tum,
Ab mujhe bhool jaana tum."
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2015, 01:06:47 AM »
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Superb very nice gooddddddddd
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2015, 01:25:51 AM »
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waah waah waah
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waaaah waaaah
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2015, 03:09:07 AM »
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that was simply amazing.
a gem.a gust of fresh air.
May God bless with more such fabulous creations.
class act. A rau as a token of thanks for penning this beauty.
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2015, 04:20:39 AM »
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Thank you so much.
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2015, 04:47:19 AM »
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wah wah,.... bahut hi khob...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause dhero daad ek rau saath ....
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2015, 05:31:01 AM »
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श्री पूजा जी,दिल के दर्द को बेहतरीन तरीके से पेश किया है ढेरो दाद कबूल करे | कुछ लब्जो/शब्दों में थोडा सा और परिवर्तन कर ले तो दिल का दर्द और अच्छी तरह से झलकेगा -आर के रस्तोगी  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2015, 06:50:23 AM »
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Quote from: jnyana91 on May 20, 2015, 04:47:19 AM
wah wah,.... bahut hi khob...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause dhero daad ek rau saath ....
Thank you so much.
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 20, 2015, 05:31:01 AM
श्री पूजा जी,दिल के दर्द को बेहतरीन तरीके से पेश किया है ढेरो दाद कबूल करे | कुछ लब्जो/शब्दों में थोडा सा और परिवर्तन कर ले तो दिल का दर्द और अच्छी तरह से झलकेगा -आर के रस्तोगी  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2015, 07:04:51 AM »
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Gud one ....par jyada dard accha nahin hota sehat ke liye Usual Smile

har kisi ki zindagi mei gham ki dhoop hai
hoti har kisi se koi na koi bhool hai
jo gujar gaya carvaan wo mera tha hi nahin
asq bahana kisi ke liye ekdum fizul hai
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Applause Applause Applause
khoobsoorat ehsaas Usual Smile
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 20, 2015, 09:58:40 AM
Applause Applause Applause
khoobsoorat ehsaas Usual Smile
Thank you so much.
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Quote from: Akash Basudev on May 20, 2015, 07:04:51 AM
Gud one ....par jyada dard accha nahin hota sehat ke liye Usual Smile

har kisi ki zindagi mei gham ki dhoop hai
hoti har kisi se koi na koi bhool hai
jo gujar gaya carvaan wo mera tha hi nahin
asq bahana kisi ke liye ekdum fizul hai
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2015, 02:18:35 PM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 20, 2015, 01:03:49 AM
"Tera pyaar mera gehna hai,
Aansuon se boon kar pehna hai.

Hawaa ke sath beh aana tum,
Khushboo apni de jaana tum.

Dard ban dil me reh jana tum,
Itna gam mera seh jaana tum.

Dil ban kar dhadkana tum,
Jaan ban kar tadapna tum.

Ruh me meri ghul jaana tum,
Yaadon me meri jhool jana tum.

Paani ki tarah dhul jaana tum,
Ab mujhe bhool jaana tum."

nice composition,ma'am
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