<>*Muskurahut uski*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 04, 2010, 08:07:32 PM
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<>*Muskurahut uski*<>

har lamha tarasti rahi hain baahein uski
mujhe thaamne ko faili rahi ab bhi bahein uski

mere jehan me basa hai wo iss tarah
k nazar se hat.ti nahin hai mere surat uski

koi to batao koi sambhalo ab to mujhe
kyun apne hathon khatm kar rahi hun mahobbat uski

wo mere jeene ki jarurat hai koi bataye use
mujhe bht achchi lagti hain ab baatein uski

aaj main khamosh nahin reh pa rahi hun yaara
mere jine ki wajah ban gai hai ye muskurahut uski...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2010, 08:10:36 PM »
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bahut khoob Anamika Ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2010, 08:14:50 PM »
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har lamha tarasti hai baahein meri,
tumhe thaamne ko faili rahi hai ab bhi bahein meri..

mere jehan me basi hai tu kuchh iss tarah,
k nazar se hat.ti nahin hai mere surat tumhari..

tum hi batao tum hi sambhalo ab mujhe,
kyun apne hathon khatm kar rahi ho mahobbat hamari..

tum mere jeene ki jarurat ho yeh janti ho tum,
mujhe bahot achchi lagti hain baatein tumahari..

aaj main khamosh hu to sirf iss liye hun bas,
kyon ki mere jine ki wajah ban gai hai ye muskurahat teri..
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2010, 08:20:19 PM »
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rancho ji........ise aap design karte to ye aur jyada ubahr k aati....

karenge na..?
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2010, 08:20:50 PM »
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shukriya rajesha ji aapko pasand aai ye paeshkash hamari
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2010, 08:22:54 PM »
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aap kahe aur hum na kare aisa kabhi ho sakata hai.... Anamika ji...

bas kal ka intezar kijiyega.... aapki farmayish puri ho jayegi...
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2010, 08:27:35 PM »
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thnx rancho ji....aap wakai swttt hain....
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2010, 08:30:59 PM »
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aur aap to sweetness ki chalti firti murat ho....
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2010, 09:51:29 PM »
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<>*Muskurahut uski*<>

har lamha tarasti rahi hain baahein uski
mujhe thaamne ko faili rahi ab bhi bahein uski

mere jehan me basa hai wo iss tarah
k nazar se hat.ti nahin hai mere surat uski

koi to batao koi sambhalo ab to mujhe
kyun apne hathon khatm kar rahi hun mahobbat uski

wo mere jeene ki jarurat hai koi bataye use
mujhe bht achchi lagti hain ab baatein uski

aaj main khamosh nahin reh pa rahi hun yaara
mere jine ki wajah ban gai hai ye muskurahut uski...!!!

Beautiful Emotions Anamika Ji..I M Speechless!!!!!

Kin Lafzon mein aake lekhni ki tareef karoon..

Humesha ki tarah Dil Ko Chutti Hui..

bahut bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 01:26:57 AM »
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Anamika di, behad khubsoorat jazbaat..bahaut acha likha hai... bahaut acha laga parrkar..Jaise Khwaish dost ne kaha, lavz nahin tariff kay! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2010, 05:48:01 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... bahut sundar...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 05:50:22 PM »
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Bahot khoob bahot hi khoob poem likhi hai KDK ji. Ise parhkar main bhi kuchh der tak sochta rah gaya aur kho sa gaya. Phir jo khayal dil mein aaye likh diye;

Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chuupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
(riyaz)

<>*Muskurahut uski*<>

har lamha tarasti rahi hain baahein uski
mujhe thaamne ko faili rahi ab bhi bahein uski

mere jehan me basa hai wo iss tarah
k nazar se hat.ti nahin hai mere surat uski

koi to batao koi sambhalo ab to mujhe
kyun apne hathon khatm kar rahi hun mahobbat uski

wo mere jeene ki jarurat hai koi bataye use
mujhe bht achchi lagti hain ab baatein uski

aaj main khamosh nahin reh pa rahi hun yaara
mere jine ki wajah ban gai hai ye muskurahut uski...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2010, 06:01:35 PM »
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Bahot khoob bahot hi khoob poem likhi hai KDK ji. Ise parhkar main bhi kuchh der tak sochta rah gaya aur kho sa gaya. Phir jo khayal dil mein aaye likh diye;

Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chuupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
(riyaz)


Bahut bahut Khoob Riyaz Ji..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2010, 06:09:23 PM »
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Bahot khoob bahot hi khoob poem likhi hai KDK ji. Ise parhkar main bhi kuchh der tak sochta rah gaya aur kho sa gaya. Phir jo khayal dil mein aaye likh diye;

Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chuupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
(riyaz)


shukriya Riyaz ji.....
aapne 4 line s me sab kuch keh diya...
bht hi pyara ji

dil lagakar hi ye dard inaam paaya hai
tabhi labon se koi aah nikalti nahin
apne hi dil k hathon hue hain barbaad hum
tabhi kisi aur ki taraf ungli uthti nahin...
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2010, 06:12:02 PM »
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Bahot khoob KDK aapne phir se kamaal ka likha hai. Really aap bahot achha likhti hain.
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