<>*Oo Mere Saajan*<>

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<>*Oo Mere Saajan*<>

Tum kya gaye mere aansun bhi ab nahin behte
Na sajte hain bol mere, mere geet bhi nahin sajte

Mere sheron ki rawani bula rahi tumko sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse mere sajan

Mere jismo jaan tadapte hain tere milan ko
Meri aankhen taras gai hain tere daras ko

Mere ruuh pyasi hai tujhe garwa lagane ko sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse mere sajan

Aa jao ek bar bas sirf ek baar wapas aajao
Mere dil ki veeraani me fir shamma jala jao

Khaati hun kasam fir na karungi koi galti main sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse oo mere sajan...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2010, 10:35:46 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2010, 11:49:05 AM »
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<>*Oo Mere Saajan*<>

Tum kya gaye mere aansun bhi ab nahin behte
Na sajte hain bol mere, mere geet bhi nahin sajte

Mere sheron ki rawani bula rahi tumko sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse mere sajan

Mere jismo jaan tadapte hain tere milan ko
Meri aankhen taras gai hain tere daras ko

Mere ruuh pyasi hai tujhe garwa lagane ko sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse mere sajan

Aa jao ek bar bas sirf ek baar wapas aajao
Mere dil ki veeraani me fir shamma jala jao

Khaati hun kasam fir na karungi koi galti main sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse oo mere sajan...!!!

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roko in aansunon ko jaya na behne do
sajao bol honton pe giton ko abhi rehne do

mai aaonga tere dar pe ye wada hai mera sanam
nahi rutha hu mai tujhse jarurt na hai manane ko

bujha dunga sari pyaas mai tere in pyaase nainon ki
abhi hai waqt thoda aur inko tadapne do

milan hoga hamara bhi ruh se ruh mila dengy
milan ki bekarari me thoda dil ko machalne do

jo aaonga tere pass mai fir lout ke na jaonga
rahegi roshan shamma dil ki agar tum haath mila do

ye kasmen ye wade na khao inhen to tut jana hai
galti meri hai hamdam jara mujhko manane do



bataen AnAmika ji kaisi lagi ye

aap ki nazm ka chota sa jawab notworthy
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2010, 01:45:58 PM »
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Bhaut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... bahut khoobsurti se aapne jusai ke dard ko pesh kiya hai... bahut hi khoob...!!!


kaise batayen ki tumhaare aansu ab hamare aankhon se behte hain,
lo aaj hum bhari mehfil me tumse apne dil ki baat kehte hain,

roothe nahi hain hum tumse, ye to bas tumhaari khwaish thi,
tumhaari di hui kasam ke kaaran hi hum tumse dur rehte hain,

dar tha tumhe ki kahin badnaam na ho jao tum hamare pyaar me,
tumhaare naam ko badnaam na karne ke liye hum dur rehte hain,

chahte ho ki hum aake tumhaare veeraane me shaama jala jaayen,
kahin mere chahat me tum jal na jao isliye hum dur rehte hain,

aaj kha rahe ho kasam na karoge tum koi galti fir kabhi,
par hum to tumhaari sab galtiyon ko nadaniyaan kehte hain,

tumhaari muskaan ke liye hi to hum tumse dur hain o jaana,
anjaam-e-mohabbat pata hai, tabhi hum tumse dur rehte hain....

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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2010, 05:58:03 PM »
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Wah wah Kasak ji bahot achhi aur judai ke dard se bhari ye kavita likhi hai. Bahot achhe alfaaz ka istemaal kiya hai aur jazbaat ko bayaan karne mein puri tarah kaamyaab hai ye kavita. Daad hazir hair.
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2010, 12:45:28 PM »
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<>*Oo Mere Saajan*<>

Tum kya gaye mere aansun bhi ab nahin behte
Na sajte hain bol mere, mere geet bhi nahin sajte

Mere sheron ki rawani bula rahi tumko sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse mere sajan

Mere jismo jaan tadapte hain tere milan ko
Meri aankhen taras gai hain tere daras ko

Mere ruuh pyasi hai tujhe garwa lagane ko sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse mere sajan

Aa jao ek bar bas sirf ek baar wapas aajao
Mere dil ki veeraani me fir shamma jala jao

Khaati hun kasam fir na karungi koi galti main sajan
Kyun gaye yun ruthkar tum mujhse oo mere sajan...!!!

Its Too Good ........Kasak Ji.....bahut khoob !
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2010, 12:54:19 AM »
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Its Too Good ........Kasak Ji.....bahut khoob !

Wah wah Kasak ji bahot achhi aur judai ke dard se bhari ye kavita likhi hai. Bahot achhe alfaaz ka istemaal kiya hai aur jazbaat ko bayaan karne mein puri tarah kaamyaab hai ye kavita. Daad hazir hair.

shukriya aap sabka jinhone is koshish ko apsand kiya..thn xalot
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 12:54:59 AM »
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roko in aansunon ko jaya na behne do
sajao bol honton pe giton ko abhi rehne do

mai aaonga tere dar pe ye wada hai mera sanam
nahi rutha hu mai tujhse jarurt na hai manane ko

bujha dunga sari pyaas mai tere in pyaase nainon ki
abhi hai waqt thoda aur inko tadapne do

milan hoga hamara bhi ruh se ruh mila dengy
milan ki bekarari me thoda dil ko machalne do

jo aaonga tere pass mai fir lout ke na jaonga
rahegi roshan shamma dil ki agar tum haath mila do

ye kasmen ye wade na khao inhen to tut jana hai
galti meri hai hamdam jara mujhko manane do



bataen AnAmika ji kaisi lagi ye

aap ki nazm ka chota sa jawab notworthy

bht mast likha hai tumne bhai...dil khush ho agya...rahul akhan ho tum missing u......
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 12:55:47 AM »
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Bhaut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... bahut khoobsurti se aapne jusai ke dard ko pesh kiya hai... bahut hi khoob...!!!


kaise batayen ki tumhaare aansu ab hamare aankhon se behte hain,
lo aaj hum bhari mehfil me tumse apne dil ki baat kehte hain,

roothe nahi hain hum tumse, ye to bas tumhaari khwaish thi,
tumhaari di hui kasam ke kaaran hi hum tumse dur rehte hain,

dar tha tumhe ki kahin badnaam na ho jao tum hamare pyaar me,
tumhaare naam ko badnaam na karne ke liye hum dur rehte hain,

chahte ho ki hum aake tumhaare veeraane me shaama jala jaayen,
kahin mere chahat me tum jal na jao isliye hum dur rehte hain,

aaj kha rahe ho kasam na karoge tum koi galti fir kabhi,
par hum to tumhaari sab galtiyon ko nadaniyaan kehte hain,

tumhaari muskaan ke liye hi to hum tumse dur hain o jaana,
anjaam-e-mohabbat pata hai, tabhi hum tumse dur rehte hain....

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tumhara ye reply to maine dekha hi nahin kapil....aaj dikha ..bht hi payara likha hai aapne ji..dil khush ho gaya padhke.....
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 01:11:41 AM »
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sach me main bhi abhi padh raha hoon.. bahut pyaari poem hai... dil khush ho gaya isko padh ke... pata nahi kaise likh diya.. lag raha hai ki ab main poet ban gaya hoon... hai na ?

tumhara ye reply to maine dekha hi nahin kapil....aaj dikha ..bht hi payara likha hai aapne ji..dil khush ho gaya padhke.....
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2010, 10:03:47 PM »
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bht mast likha hai tumne bhai...dil khush ho agya...rahul akhan ho tum missing u......

mai to aap logon ke pass hu diiiiiiiiiii

bas miss hi kariye aap to

mai aap se nrj hon

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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2010, 10:21:12 PM »
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ok diiiiiiiiiiiii mai b chalaaaaaaaaaa

aur han mai aap se nrj hon so mere ko manao

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