~~~Palkon per tere khwab rakh kar~~~

by jannatjahan on May 04, 2009, 10:17:38 AM
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Palkon par tere khwab rakh kar sochti rahi
mai raat bhar yun hi karwate badalti rahi
na neend thi aankhon me na dil ko sukun tha
takiye me sar chupa kar yun hi sisakati rahi
wo makhmali sparsh wo resmi ehsaas
yaad karti unhe phir tadapti rahi
wo dekhna najar bhar kar wo suljhana julfon ka
main un yaadon ki barish me yun hi bhingati rahi
har pal dil najar me rahta hai tu phir bhi
tere tohfe me teri chavi ko mai dhundhati rahi
ye yaadein ye dard ye bechainiyaan ye chubhan
din gujarata raha raat katati rahi
apni yaadon ko bistar ki silwaton me chupaye
main yun hi raat bhar tadapti sisakti rahi
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2009, 11:30:36 AM »
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nice one Jannat dear Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2009, 12:47:57 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 04, 2009, 11:30:36 AM
nice one Jannat dear Applause
Hey Thanks Dear Diya Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2009, 12:51:43 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 04, 2009, 11:41:42 AM
very nice Jannat ji...acha likha hai aapne..
Thanks Kaash Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2009, 08:28:18 PM »
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Jannat Ji Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.... Really a Nic Creation.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2009, 08:37:51 PM »
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wah ek ek line dil se nikali hui.. bahoot khoob JJ ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2009, 09:45:39 PM »
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Ati sundar peshkash hai Jannat Ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2009, 02:26:51 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 08, 2009, 08:28:18 PM
Jannat Ji Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.... Really a Nic Creation.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Thanks A lot Dear Mann ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2009, 02:38:18 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 08, 2009, 08:37:51 PM
wah ek ek line dil se nikali hui.. bahoot khoob JJ ji!!
Thanks Pooja ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2009, 02:57:55 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2009, 09:45:39 PM
Ati sundar peshkash hai Jannat Ji
Thanks Dear Harish ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2009, 03:26:43 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on May 04, 2009, 10:17:38 AM
Palkon par tere khwab rakh kar sochti rahi
mai raat bhar yun hi karwate badalti rahi
na neend thi aankhon me na dil ko sukun tha
takiye me sar chupa kar yun hi sisakati rahi
wo makhmali sparsh wo resmi ehsaas
yaad karti unhe phir tadapti rahi
wo dekhna najar bhar kar wo suljhana julfon ka
main un yaadon ki barish me yun hi bhingati rahi
har pal dil najar me rahta hai tu phir bhi
tere tohfe me teri chavi ko mai dhundhati rahi
ye yaadein ye dard ye bechainiyaan ye chubhan
din gujarata raha raat katati rahi
apni yaadon ko bistar ki silwaton me chupaye
main yun hi raat bhar tadapti sisakti rahi

Bahut khoob dear JJ
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2009, 05:49:34 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 09, 2009, 03:26:43 PM
Bahut khoob dear JJ
Thanks Dear Roja Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2009, 06:17:21 AM »
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Nice One Jannatji
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2009, 07:31:26 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 10, 2009, 06:17:21 AM
Nice One Jannatji
 Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Dear Pank ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 10, 2009, 07:42:33 AM »
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VERY VERY NICE JANNAT JI.
TOO GOOD.
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