Phir wahi raat ayi hai!

by salma786 on March 12, 2009, 11:27:21 AM
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Aj phir wahi raat laut ayi hai,
Chand ke noor ne wahi baat dauhrayi hai!

Jab teri bahon ke ghere me kat ti thi raten,
Hoti thi tujhse pyar bhari mulakatein!

Chand ka noor jab chehre pe mere girta tha,
Tu mere noor ko dekh dekh pyar se muskata tha!

Jab bhi juda hote the hum waqt ke takaze se,
Tu chand me dhudta tha mujhe kisi bahane se!

Tu nahi hai aaj par teri yaadein ab bhi baki hai,
Wajood nahi hai tera par noor ab bhi baki hai!

Gam to hai tere na hone ka; madhoshi ab bhi chayi hai,
Raat phir laut hai ayi; chand me aj bhi teri parchayi hai!


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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2009, 11:31:25 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Salma jee..  Applause Applause
Parchayi ko hi apna mante rehgaya Rahim,
Uss shaks ko dhundne nikla hi nahin ghar se...
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2009, 11:38:49 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Salma jee..  Applause Applause
Parchayi ko hi apna mante rehgaya Rahim,
Uss shaks ko dhundne nikla hi nahin ghar se...

Shukriya Rahim ji
Apne do hi line me bahut kuch kehdiya Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2009, 11:46:17 AM »
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Ur most welcome Salma jee...Haan do lines main bahaut kuch kehna chahta tha...Actually Im bad at writing two liners but Im learning and Im glad to know that U understood what I wanted to say...
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Ur most welcome Salma jee...Haan do lines main bahaut kuch kehna chahta tha...Actually Im bad at writing two liners but Im learning and Im glad to know that U understood what I wanted to say...

It shows ur a master in writing two lines Thumbs UP
M glad that u wrote it in ma thread notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2009, 03:25:54 PM »
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Aj phir wahi raat laut ayi hai,
Chand ke noor ne wahi baat dauhrayi hai!

Jab teri bahon ke ghere me kat ti thi raten,
Hoti thi tujhse pyar bhari mulakatein!

Chand ka noor jab chehre pe mere girta tha,
Tu mere noor ko dekh dekh pyar se muskata tha!

Jab bhi juda hote the hum waqt ke takaze se,
Tu chand me dhudta tha mujhe kisi bahane se!

Tu nahi hai aaj par teri yaadein ab bhi baki hai,
Wajood nahi hai tera par noor ab bhi baki hai!

Gam to hai tere na hone ka; madhoshi ab bhi chayi hai,
Raat phir laut hai ayi; chand me aj bhi teri parchayi hai!



Very Nice Salmaji
Bahoot Khoob Likha
 Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut khoob Salma jee..  Applause Applause
Parchayi ko hi apna mante rehgaya Rahim,
Uss shaks ko dhundne nikla hi nahin ghar se...

Nice One Rahim Bhai
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2009, 03:38:33 PM »
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Shukriya Pank ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2009, 03:40:11 PM »
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It shows ur a master in writing two lines Thumbs UP
M glad that u wrote it in ma thread notworthy
notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy I tell you I am just learning two liners...Im inspired by Faraz's two liners...

Applause Applause ApplauseNice One Rahim Bhai
 Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Pank bhai...
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