Shabd Sarita Ban Behte Hain......Koyal

by KOYAL46 on August 11, 2010, 08:20:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 12, 2010, 12:57:53 PM »
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thank u so much Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 11, 2010, 12:18:05 PM
Wah Koyal sis.bahut baddiya likhi aapne.great and heart touching creation.excellent.lovely lines by Kapil ji.aap dono ne bahut khoob likha. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: August 12, 2010, 12:59:04 PM »
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Wah Koyal ji wah... jawaab nahi aapke bhi jawaab ka.. bahut achcha likha hai aapne...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

apne baahon ke ghere me tumko chhipa lu main,
tumhaari aankhon ke aansoo ab mitaa du main,

na to ab aankh gili hogi aur na dil royega,
mohabbat se tumhaare har ghum mita du main,

bahaana nahi hai ki tumhaare kareeb hoon main,
dil ki aankhon se dekho dhadkano me hoon main,

kehti ho ki thandi hawayein tumhe tadpaati hain,
tum kaho to in hawaaon ko bhi rok du aaj main,

banke dulhan tayyar rehna le jaunga tumhe main,
tumhaare hi saath ab to ghar basaunga main....


Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 11, 2010, 01:22:58 PM
Aansuon se bujhtee nahi ab ye tadap
Dhul jate hai jo bhi likhti hu Shabd

Baarish tou chhupa legi mere ashru
Par dil kee bechainee ka kya karu

Kehte ho durr ho kar bhi durr nahi
Par ye bahaane tere hume manjoor nahi

Bahoon me saanso me mehsoos karti hu
Par ye thandi pawan maayoos karti hai

Ab aur na banaao tum bahaane
Aa-jaao jaldi se mujhe le-jaane
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«Reply #17 on: August 12, 2010, 12:59:49 PM »
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Thank u so much Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 11, 2010, 01:33:44 PM
mastam reply klaskar ji..... :clapping: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: August 12, 2010, 01:01:09 PM »
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Arey Kasak ji ... aap to bura maan gayi... agar aap aisa kahenge to main aaj se maun vrat dhaaran kar lunga... kyun .. kar lu...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 11, 2010, 01:35:33 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
ek aur dhamakedaar reply...
sachchi gudiyarani..ye kapil ji ko tum hi chup kara sakti ho...warna to non stop bolte rehte hain ye
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«Reply #19 on: August 12, 2010, 01:02:19 PM »
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...... Shukriya Smardia ji.....!!!

Quote from: smardia on August 11, 2010, 05:17:38 PM
Lagta hai Ekta kapoor k serial ki tarah jo sab k se shuru hote hain......
yahaan yoindia me bhi......KASAK...KOYAL....KAPIL  he chha gaye hain........

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«Reply #20 on: August 12, 2010, 01:03:07 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 11, 2010, 06:19:40 PM
Very well written Koyal di..bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kapil Dost, bahaut acha reply diya hai apne bhi.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: August 12, 2010, 01:11:17 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 12, 2010, 01:01:09 PM
Arey Kasak ji ... aap to bura maan gayi... agar aap aisa kahenge to main aaj se maun vrat dhaaran kar lunga... kyun .. kar lu...!!!


maun bhalle hi rakh lo klaskar ji...
lekin ye shayri likhna na chhodna....
hum aapko inhi se jante hain...
ye silsila yahin na rokna....
baat to waise bhi likhkar hi karte hain aap ...
bas ye ungliyan type writer pe chalate rehna
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«Reply #22 on: August 12, 2010, 02:01:11 PM »
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Kalakaar ji aap ki tariff karne k shabd nahi paas hamaare.....
Hum tou bas apni desi bhasaa me sidhi baat karte hain...


Ab kya kahu mein sanam tujhko
Baato.n se reejhate ho mujhko

Pehle kehte they aasmaan k taare tod laaunga
Ab aaj hawaaon ko bhi rokne ka dam bharte ho

Dekho science meine bhi padhi hai
Dil k koi bhi aankh nahi hoti hai

Tum apni in kavitaaon se na bharmaao mujhe
Wahaan kya gul khila rahe ho bataao mujhe

Chhuti tumhaari paas hui hai ya nahi batlaao mujhe
Nahi kar sakte baat boss se tou baat karvaao mujhse



Quote from: klaskar on August 12, 2010, 12:59:04 PM
Wah Koyal ji wah... jawaab nahi aapke bhi jawaab ka.. bahut achcha likha hai aapne...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

apne baahon ke ghere me tumko chhipa lu main,
tumhaari aankhon ke aansoo ab mitaa du main,

na to ab aankh gili hogi aur na dil royega,
mohabbat se tumhaare har ghum mita du main,

bahaana nahi hai ki tumhaare kareeb hoon main,
dil ki aankhon se dekho dhadkano me hoon main,

kehti ho ki thandi hawayein tumhe tadpaati hain,
tum kaho to in hawaaon ko bhi rok du aaj main,

banke dulhan tayyar rehna le jaunga tumhe main,
tumhaare hi saath ab to ghar basaunga main....
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«Reply #23 on: August 13, 2010, 12:55:27 AM »
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chalte chalte mere ye geet yaad rakhna,
kabhi alvida na kehna, kabhi alvida na kehna,
bich raah me Kasak ji, bichhad jaayen kahin hum agar,
mere ye geet gungunaate rehna, kabhi alvida na kehna...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 12, 2010, 01:11:17 PM
maun bhalle hi rakh lo klaskar ji...
lekin ye shayri likhna na chhodna....
hum aapko inhi se jante hain...
ye silsila yahin na rokna....
baat to waise bhi likhkar hi karte hain aap ...
bas ye ungliyan type writer pe chalate rehna
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«Reply #24 on: August 13, 2010, 08:01:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... aap shabdon ki parwaah mat kijiye.... aapne mera post padh liya yahi bahut hai.. shukriya... aur aapne bhi apne natkhat andaaz me bahut badiya likha hai... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!

sach kehta hoon jaana main tumhe bahut yaad karta hoon,
tumse milne ke liye bhagwaan se roz fariyaad karta hoon,

jaane kis baat ki narazgi hai mujhse tumhaare bhagwaan ko,
milne nahi dete tumse main unse roz shikaayat karta hoon,

rishton me baandhke humein, usne jismon ko dur kar diya,
tumse milne ke liye main roz ek nayi koshish karta hoon,

tumhaari hi tasveer ko har pal seene se lagaaye rakhta hoon,
jaana, maano ya na maano, main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...


Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 12, 2010, 02:01:11 PM
Kalakaar ji aap ki tariff karne k shabd nahi paas hamaare.....
Hum tou bas apni desi bhasaa me sidhi baat karte hain...


Ab kya kahu mein sanam tujhko
Baato.n se reejhate ho mujhko

Pehle kehte they aasmaan k taare tod laaunga
Ab aaj hawaaon ko bhi rokne ka dam bharte ho

Dekho science meine bhi padhi hai
Dil k koi bhi aankh nahi hoti hai

Tum apni in kavitaaon se na bharmaao mujhe
Wahaan kya gul khila rahe ho bataao mujhe

Chhuti tumhaari paas hui hai ya nahi batlaao mujhe
Nahi kar sakte baat boss se tou baat karvaao mujhse
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«Reply #25 on: August 13, 2010, 08:06:36 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 13, 2010, 12:55:27 AM

chalte chalte mere ye geet yaad rakhna,
kabhi alvida na kehna, kabhi alvida na kehna,
bich raah me Kasak ji, bichhad jaayen kahin hum agar,
mere ye geet gungunaate rehna, kabhi alvida na kehna...


nahin kahenge klaskar ji aapko alwida nahin kahenge

roz naye chehre nigaah me aate hain
roz koi naya phool chaman me khilta hai

lekin kuch log yun aa jate hain zindagi me
jinse taa umra rishta juda rehta hai....
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«Reply #26 on: August 16, 2010, 01:26:46 PM »
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Shukriya Kasak ji....!!!

hamaara rishta yun tumse jud sa gaya hai,
ki tum ab humein apni si lagne lagi ho,

tum nahi hoti to tumhe dhunda karte hain,
ab tum mujhe kuch khaas lagne lagi ho...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 13, 2010, 08:06:36 AM
nahin kahenge klaskar ji aapko alwida nahin kahenge

roz naye chehre nigaah me aate hain
roz koi naya phool chaman me khilta hai

lekin kuch log yun aa jate hain zindagi me
jinse taa umra rishta juda rehta hai....
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«Reply #27 on: August 22, 2010, 01:03:12 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat aur bahut hi pyare se ehsaason se piroya hai aapne rachna ko ...koyal Ji......bahut khoob rahe sabhi ashaar ... dil ko choote hue ...yunhi likhte rahen....aage bhi ...dil se daad !

duaaon ke saath...
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