Shabd Sarita Ban Behte Hain......Koyal

by KOYAL46 on August 11, 2010, 08:20:26 AM
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Nayan  niranter  nirjher  se  jharte hain
Kaise likhu shabd sarita ban behte hain

Haaye Allah ye kaisi judaayee hai
Dil k baadalo se baarish aayee hai

Kat-te nahi din ye kaisi tanhaayee hai
Phir se saajana  aaj teri yaad aayee hai

Lete nahi sudh Piya kyu humko bhulaayaa hai
Aate nahi kyu mere rom-rom ne bulaayaa  hai

Nayan  niranter  nirjher  se  jharte hain
Kaise likhu shabd sarita ban behte hain
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2010, 08:40:43 AM »
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Wah! Koyal Ji Kya baat hai
Bahut sundar sabdo.n se piroyaa hai is peshkash ko
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2010, 09:30:13 AM »
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Ek alag andaaz, ek nayi taazgi, ek nahi soch, ek nahi rachna... wah Koyal ji wah.. kya kehne... aapki in shabdon ki sarita me hum doob se gaye hain... bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne...!!!

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ehsaason ko shabdon ki maala me piro lo tum,
apne aansuon se apne tadap ko dho lo tum,

ye baarish jo aaj na jane kyun deewani ho rahi hai,
is barish ke paani me apne aansuon ko chhipa lo tum,

dekh nahi sakta main tumhe kabhi rote huye,
mat ro aur, zaraa khud ko sambhaalo tum,

dur hoke bhi main ek pal bhi tumse dur nahi hoon,
dil ki aankhon se mujhe dekho, aur baahon me bhar lo tum,

ye jo doori hai jismon ki hai, aatma ki nahi,
pyaar agar hai to apne saanson me mujhe mehsoos kar lo tum...
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2010, 12:12:06 PM »
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Thanks a lot Rajesh-ji.....I value your appriciation......

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 11, 2010, 08:40:43 AM
Wah! Koyal Ji Kya baat hai
Bahut sundar sabdo.n se piroyaa hai is peshkash ko
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2010, 12:18:05 PM »
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Wah Koyal sis.bahut baddiya likhi aapne.great and heart touching creation.excellent.lovely lines by Kapil ji.aap dono ne bahut khoob likha. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2010, 01:22:58 PM »
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Aansuon se bujhtee nahi ab ye tadap
Dhul jate hai jo bhi likhti hu Shabd

Baarish tou chhupa legi mere ashru
Par dil kee bechainee ka kya karu

Kehte ho durr ho kar bhi durr nahi
Par ye bahaane tere hume manjoor nahi

Bahoon me saanso me mehsoos karti hu
Par ye thandi pawan maayoos karti hai

Ab aur na banaao tum bahaane
Aa-jaao jaldi se mujhe le-jaane




Quote from: klaskar on August 11, 2010, 09:30:13 AM
Ek alag andaaz, ek nayi taazgi, ek nahi soch, ek nahi rachna... wah Koyal ji wah.. kya kehne... aapki in shabdon ki sarita me hum doob se gaye hain... bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne...!!!

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ehsaason ko shabdon ki maala me piro lo tum,
apne aansuon se apne tadap ko dho lo tum,

ye baarish jo aaj na jane kyun deewani ho rahi hai,
is barish ke paani me apne aansuon ko chhipa lo tum,

dekh nahi sakta main tumhe kabhi rote huye,
mat ro aur, zaraa khud ko sambhaalo tum,

dur hoke bhi main ek pal bhi tumse dur nahi hoon,
dil ki aankhon se mujhe dekho, aur baahon me bhar lo tum,

ye jo doori hai jismon ki hai, aatma ki nahi,
pyaar agar hai to apne saanson me mujhe mehsoos kar lo tum...
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 01:32:43 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 11, 2010, 08:20:26 AM
Nayan  niranter  nirjher  se  jharte hain
Kaise likhu shabd sarita ban behte hain

Haaye Allah ye kaisi judaayee hai
Dil k baadalo se baarish aayee hai

Kat-te nahi din ye kaisi tanhaayee hai
Phir se saajana  aaj teri yaad aayee hai

Lete nahi sudh Piya kyu humko bhulaayaa hai
Aate nahi kyu mere rom-rom ne bulaayaa  hai

Nayan  niranter  nirjher  se  jharte hain
Kaise likhu shabd sarita ban behte hain


marwelous creation koyal....
bht hi pyari kavita hai ye......mastam hai bilkul.......
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2010, 01:33:44 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 11, 2010, 09:30:13 AM
Ek alag andaaz, ek nayi taazgi, ek nahi soch, ek nahi rachna... wah Koyal ji wah.. kya kehne... aapki in shabdon ki sarita me hum doob se gaye hain... bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ehsaason ko shabdon ki maala me piro lo tum,
apne aansuon se apne tadap ko dho lo tum,

ye baarish jo aaj na jane kyun deewani ho rahi hai,
is barish ke paani me apne aansuon ko chhipa lo tum,

dekh nahi sakta main tumhe kabhi rote huye,
mat ro aur, zaraa khud ko sambhaalo tum,

dur hoke bhi main ek pal bhi tumse dur nahi hoon,
dil ki aankhon se mujhe dekho, aur baahon me bhar lo tum,

ye jo doori hai jismon ki hai, aatma ki nahi,
pyaar agar hai to apne saanson me mujhe mehsoos kar lo tum...

mastam reply klaskar ji..... :clapping: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2010, 01:35:33 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 11, 2010, 01:22:58 PM
Aansuon se bujhtee nahi ab ye tadap
Dhul jate hai jo bhi likhti hu Shabd

Baarish tou chhupa legi mere ashru
Par dil kee bechainee ka kya karu

Kehte ho durr ho kar bhi durr nahi
Par ye bahaane tere hume manjoor nahi

Bahoon me saanso me mehsoos karti hu
Par ye thandi pawan mayoos karti hai

Ab aur na banaao tum bahaane
Aa-jaao jaldi se mujhe le-jaane




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ek aur dhamakedaar reply...
sachchi gudiyarani..ye kapil ji ko tum hi chup kara sakti ho...warna to non stop bolte rehte hain ye
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2010, 01:36:26 PM »
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It was really a good effort and Love you see you many efforts in Yoindia and your love towards poetry.. Good Going Koyal !

As a sis I would like to say .. whenever you write make sure you are writing in a single language... If you writing something in hindi make sure whole creation must be in hindi same goes to other languages.
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2010, 02:32:48 PM »
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Madhu-di aapka bahut bahut shukriya......your words always encourage me....
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 11, 2010, 12:18:05 PM
Wah Koyal sis.bahut baddiya likhi aapne.great and heart touching creation.excellent.lovely lines by Kapil ji.aap dono ne bahut khoob likha. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2010, 04:48:43 PM »
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Thanks a lot Divya-di....I wil definitely take care to see that I don't mix words from different languages........but ye hindi-urdu mai tou bahut se words common he lagte hain sophi-di......
Thanks.....



Quote from: Sophi on August 11, 2010, 01:36:26 PM
It was really a good effort and Love you see you many efforts in Yoindia and your love towards poetry.. Good Going Koyal !

As a sis I would like to say .. whenever you write make sure you are writing in a single language... If you writing something in hindi make sure whole creation must be in hindi same goes to other languages.
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2010, 05:09:01 PM »
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Koyal-ji nihaayat he khoobsurat rachnaa......sunder shabdo ka anuthaa prayog...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 11, 2010, 08:20:26 AM
Nayan  niranter  nirjher  se  jharte hain
Kaise likhu shabd sarita ban behte hain

Haaye Allah ye kaisi judaayee hai
Dil k baadalo se baarish aayee hai

Kat-te nahi din ye kaisi tanhaayee hai
Phir se saajana  aaj teri yaad aayee hai

Lete nahi sudh Piya kyu humko bhulaayaa hai
Aate nahi kyu mere rom-rom ne bulaayaa  hai

Nayan  niranter  nirjher  se  jharte hain
Kaise likhu shabd sarita ban behte hain
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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2010, 05:17:38 PM »
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Lagta hai Ekta kapoor k serial ki tarah jo sab k se shuru hote hain......
yahaan yoindia me bhi......KASAK...KOYAL....KAPIL  he chha gaye hain........

Good show U Three...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2010, 06:19:40 PM »
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Very well written Koyal di..bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kapil Dost, bahaut acha reply diya hai apne bhi.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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