Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Dhadkan Rook Jayegi...........Touhid

by Mohammad Touhid on December 05, 2011, 04:44:57 PM
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Dosto aaj ek aisi nazm pesh kar raha hoon jise khud se mehsus kar maine likha hai..
jo shayad har kisi ke zindagi me kabhi na kabhi ye manzar wo ehsas aaya hoga..

kisi ko khone ka darr, door jane ka gham..  tearyeyed
aur na jane ek ankahi si baat., jo bas dil me hi rehti hai..

ishe lafzo me pirone ki bas ek chhoti si kosis..  shukriya.. Usual Smile



Na Jaa Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,

Yaado Ko Tere Gale Se Bhi Na Laga Paunga Mai Kabhi.,
Kisi Se Na Mila Paunga Jinhe Wo Aankhe Bhi Jhook Jayegi..,

Waada Kar Ke Mera Sath Tu Zindagi Bhar Nibhayegi.,
Ehsaso Ke Samundar Me Mujhe Bas Tu Nazar Aayegi..,

Bas Khayal Se Hi Kaanp Uthta Hai Ye Rooh-O-Zism Mera.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi.

Fakat Tujhse Dil-O-Jaan Se Pyar Bahut Karta Hai 'Touhid'
Tere Sath Tab Tak Hai Ye Jab Tak Zindagi Sath Rahegi.,

Naa Ja Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2011, 06:20:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob,Touhid saheb.
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2011, 06:28:01 PM »
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Dosto aaj ek aisi nazm pesh kar raha hoon jise khud se mehsus kar maine likha hai..
jo shayad har kisi ke zindagi me kabhi na kabhi ye manzar wo ehsas aaya hoga..

kisi ko khone ka darr, door jane ka gham..  tearyeyed
aur na jane ek ankahi si baat., jo bas dil me hi rehti hai..

ishe lafzo me pirone ki bas ek chhoti si kosis..  shukriya.. Usual Smile



Na Jaa Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,

Yaado Ko Tere Gale Se Bhi Na Laga Paunga Mai Kabhi.,
Kisi Se Na Mila Paunga Jinhe Wo Aankhe Bhi Jhook Jayegi..,

Waada Kar Ke Mera Sath Tu Zindagi Bhar Nibhayegi.,
Ehsaso Ke Samundar Me Mujhe Bas Tu Nazar Aayegi..,

Bas Khayal Se Hi Kaanp Uthta Hai Ye Rooh-O-Zism Mera.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi.

Fakat Tujhse Dil-O-Jaan Se Pyar Bahut Karta Hai 'Touhid'
Tere Sath Tab Tak Hai Ye Jab Tak Zindagi Sath Rahegi.,

Naa Ja Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,

wah tauhid sahab wah--

baht khoob ehsaas bayan kie--

mohabbt ke sachhe ehsaason se bharpoor aapki ye kalaam
hume bht bht pasand aai--

daad kubul karen
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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2011, 06:29:07 PM »
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Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke ahsaas O khayaal kafi masoom se haiN..
kafi achche khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Allaah aapke us saathi ko humesha aapke saath rakhe
Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile          

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Bahut khoob,Touhid saheb.

shukriya siddiqui ji... Usual Smile
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wah tauhid sahab wah--

baht khoob ehsaas bayan kie--

mohabbt ke sachhe ehsaason se bharpoor aapki ye kalaam
hume bht bht pasand aai--

daad kubul karen

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aise hi sath dete rahe...
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Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke ahsaas O khayaal kafi masoom se haiN..
kafi achche khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Allaah aapke us saathi ko humesha aapke saath rakhe
Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         



Parwaaz Sahab Aadaab.. Usual Smile

dili khushi hui ki aapne apne itne achhe comments diye.. Usual Smile

bahut bahut shukriya janaab... Usual Smile

aise hi sath nibhate rahe.,
khush rahe.. Usual Smile
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Dosto aaj ek aisi nazm pesh kar raha hoon jise khud se mehsus kar maine likha hai..
jo shayad har kisi ke zindagi me kabhi na kabhi ye manzar wo ehsas aaya hoga..

kisi ko khone ka darr, door jane ka gham..  tearyeyed
aur na jane ek ankahi si baat., jo bas dil me hi rehti hai..

ishe lafzo me pirone ki bas ek chhoti si kosis..  shukriya.. Usual Smile



Na Jaa Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,

Yaado Ko Tere Gale Se Bhi Na Laga Paunga Mai Kabhi.,
Kisi Se Na Mila Paunga Jinhe Wo Aankhe Bhi Jhook Jayegi..,

Waada Kar Ke Mera Sath Tu Zindagi Bhar Nibhayegi.,
Ehsaso Ke Samundar Me Mujhe Bas Tu Nazar Aayegi..,

Bas Khayal Se Hi Kaanp Uthta Hai Ye Rooh-O-Zism Mera.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi.

Fakat Tujhse Dil-O-Jaan Se Pyar Bahut Karta Hai 'Touhid'
Tere Sath Tab Tak Hai Ye Jab Tak Zindagi Sath Rahegi.,

Naa Ja Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,


KHYAAL ACHA HAI TAUHID SB
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Dosto aaj ek aisi nazm pesh kar raha hoon jise khud se mehsus kar maine likha hai..
jo shayad har kisi ke zindagi me kabhi na kabhi ye manzar wo ehsas aaya hoga..

kisi ko khone ka darr, door jane ka gham..  tearyeyed
aur na jane ek ankahi si baat., jo bas dil me hi rehti hai..

ishe lafzo me pirone ki bas ek chhoti si kosis..  shukriya.. Usual Smile



Na Jaa Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,

Yaado Ko Tere Gale Se Bhi Na Laga Paunga Mai Kabhi.,
Kisi Se Na Mila Paunga Jinhe Wo Aankhe Bhi Jhook Jayegi..,

Waada Kar Ke Mera Sath Tu Zindagi Bhar Nibhayegi.,
Ehsaso Ke Samundar Me Mujhe Bas Tu Nazar Aayegi..,

Bas Khayal Se Hi Kaanp Uthta Hai Ye Rooh-O-Zism Mera.,
Tu Chali Jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi.

Fakat Tujhse Dil-O-Jaan Se Pyar Bahut Karta Hai 'Touhid'
Tere Sath Tab Tak Hai Ye Jab Tak Zindagi Sath Rahegi.,

Naa Ja Ke Tere Jane Se Saanso Ki Ladi Toot Jayegi.,
Tu Chali jayegi To Ye Meri Dhadkan Bhi Rook Jayegi..,


Bahut Bahut Khoob Touhid Ji

Khoobsurat Khayalaat!!!Ek Aashiq Ka Apne Mehboob se Door Hona Ka Darr Kaafi Jhalakta Hai Iss Kalaam mein..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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KHYAAL ACHA HAI TAUHID SB

bahut bahut shukriya janaab... Usual Smile
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Touhid Ji

Khoobsurat Khayalaat!!!Ek Aashiq Ka Apne Mehboob se Door Hona Ka Darr Kaafi Jhalakta Hai Iss Kalaam mein..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Tah-e-dil se aapka shukriya Khwaish bhai... Usual Smile

aise hi sath dete rahiyega,,,
khush rahe.. Usual Smile
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These pieces relaly set a standard in the industry.
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 tearyeyed
really awesome sayari..
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tearyeyed
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thank u so much shivam ji.. Usual Smile
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