Tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun !

by shara63 on November 17, 2012, 05:13:14 AM

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shara63

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   Tanhaai ke is maqaam par yun
   koi pal bhar ko paas aae kyun

   Ghadi-do ghadi ko aakar voh
   saari zindagi ka ho jaae kyun

   Meri bebasi, meri afsurdagi
   koi is tarah mitaae kyun

   Ye meri kul jama amaanat hain
   koi bhala inhe churaae kyun

   Bade chain se guzar rahi hai bechaini
   'ainy' tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun ?

   Tanhaai ke is maqaam par yun
   koi pal bhal ko paas aae kyun ..................'ainy'


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riyaz106

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Re: Tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun !

«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2012, 07:33:58 AM »

Bahot khoob Shara ji. Bahot achha likha hai. 2nd line mein jo 'pal bhal' likha hai wo shayad 'pal bhar' hona chahiye. Daad pesh hai.


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Re: Tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun !

«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2012, 08:15:03 AM »

bahut khoob


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prashad

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Re: Tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun !

«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2012, 08:33:06 AM »

very nice


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Aarish

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Re: Tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun !

«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2012, 03:52:35 AM »

kya baa hai shara jee umda peshkash hai, mubarakbaad qubool kareN


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shara63

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Re: Tujhe ab sukoon bhae kyun !

«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2012, 04:55:57 AM »

Bahut bahut shukria Riyaaz Ashna sb...darasl mere kalam upload karne ke fauran baad shayad kuchh technical fault ho gai thi aur main revise nahi kar saki...ghalti ke liye muafi chahungi! apne sahi baat logon tak pahunch di iske liye main bahut shukr guzar hoon!