<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>

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<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>


Bht mile sanam yunhi mujhe raahon me magar
Koi bhi humsafar ….aapsa gabru jawan nahin tha

Khokar tujhe kya kuch kho diya hai maine
Janti to thi magar…. Aisa hoga ye gumaan nahin tha

Bichhde the jab pehli bar wo dard bhulta nahin
Dil me utra tha khanjar….par uska nishaan nahin tha

Tanha tu bhi tha aur tanha yahan main bhi hun
Sab the aas pas magar…koi bhi apna yahan  nahin tha

Bewafa na  tu hai na main ye janti hun main sanam
Lakeeron ka tha khel….waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha…!!!






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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 09:21:28 PM »
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Na raho gumsum, Tuta jo khilona fir jod denge
Tum Ishara kar do, hum hawao ka rukh mod denge

U to hum nahi karte badi badi bate, per tu kahe to
 falak me tere naam ka ek chand aur jod denge

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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 11:50:41 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai kasak jee waaH mohtarmaa aapne to kamaal ki tehreer kahi hai... Usual Smile

Aapke pahele sher se aisa laga ke aap roomaniyat bhari kalaam kahne wali hai par aapne shayari ka achcha johar dikhaya ..

behad khoob kalaam kahi hai ...

Hume yeH ashaar behad umdaa lage jee Usual Smile
Dil se daad kabool kijiye Usual Smile         



<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>





Bichhde the jab pehli bar wo dard bhulta nahin
Dil me utra tha khanjar….par uska nishaan nahin tha


Bewafa na  tu hai na main ye janti hun main sanam
Lakeeron ka tha khel….waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha…!!!




Mindblowing ashaar jee keep it up...
Bahut umda likh rahi hai aap aise hi likhte rahiye...

Aapki is kalaam par aapke andaaz meiN aakar kuch kaheNge
tab tak ke liye mazarrat ... Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         





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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 03:54:36 PM »
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achha laga aapka post Kasak ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 05:44:18 PM »
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Good Kasak JI
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2011, 12:59:12 AM »
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Ajeeb se jajbaat jagaati hui aapki ess rachna ne dil ko moh liya AnAmikA ji........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Hushn ki pariyein hazaar mili rahon mai,
Par koi bhee tujh si laajawaab nahi thee

Chaha tha ussi pal tujhe bahoon mai Lena
Waqt ka wo lamhaa meharbaan nahi thaa

Har taraf mujhe tu-he-tu nazar aatee thee
Par paas tere naa aane ki laachaari thee






quote author=*KasaK*....Dil Ki link=topic=62301.msg1119583#msg1119583 date=1299080553]
<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>


Bht mile sanam yunhi mujhe raahon me magar
Koi bhi humsafar ….aapsa gabru jawan nahin tha

Khokar tujhe kya kuch kho diya hai maine
Janti to thi magar…. Aisa hoga ye gumaan nahin tha

Bichhde the jab pehli bar wo dard bhulta nahin
Dil me utra tha khanjar….par uska nishaan nahin tha

Tanha tu bhi tha aur tanha yahan main bhi hun
Sab the aas pas magar…koi bhi apna yahan  nahin tha

Bewafa na  tu hai na main ye janti hun main sanam
Lakeeron ka tha khel….waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha…!!!







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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2011, 04:11:35 AM »
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Wah Kasak ji.bahut khoob likhti hai aap.dil ko chu jaati aapke peshkash,great work.keep it up.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2011, 12:09:35 AM »
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<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>


Bht mile sanam yunhi mujhe raahon me magar
Koi bhi humsafar ….aapsa gabru jawan nahin tha

Khokar tujhe kya kuch kho diya hai maine
Janti to thi magar…. Aisa hoga ye gumaan nahin tha

Bichhde the jab pehli bar wo dard bhulta nahin
Dil me utra tha khanjar….par uska nishaan nahin tha

Tanha tu bhi tha aur tanha yahan main bhi hun
Sab the aas pas magar…koi bhi apna yahan  nahin tha

Bewafa na  tu hai na main ye janti hun main sanam
Lakeeron ka tha khel….waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha…!!!








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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2011, 11:54:08 PM »
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Too Good ....... Kasak Ji ! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2011, 04:01:22 PM »
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Na raho gumsum, Tuta jo khilona fir jod denge
Tum Ishara kar do, hum hawao ka rukh mod denge

U to hum nahi karte badi badi bate, per tu kahe to
 falak me tere naam ka ek chand aur jod denge


rajaji aapne ye reply dekhar waise bhi iss post me chaarchand laga diye.....thnx ji.....
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2011, 04:03:04 PM »
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parwaz ji aap meri poem ka postmartum karen ye ichaha har poem pe rehti hai..lekin bht kum post ko ye khush kismati naseeb hoti hai......thnx alot ji k aapne ise iss kabil samjha.....aapke comments mere liye bht value rakhte hain ji...
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2011, 04:05:48 PM »
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achha laga aapka post Kasak ji
Wah Kasak ji.bahut khoob likhti hai aap.dil ko chu jaati aapke peshkash,great work.keep it up.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Good Kasak JI
Too Good ....... Kasak Ji ! Applause Applause Applause Applause

NIRALA JI RISHIJI MADHU JI AUR RADHIKA JI THNX ALOT FOR APPRECIATING JI....
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2011, 04:07:13 PM »
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Ajeeb se jajbaat jagaati hui aapki ess rachna ne dil ko moh liya AnAmikA ji........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Hushn ki pariyein hazaar mili rahon mai,
Par koi bhee tujh si laajawaab nahi thee

Chaha tha ussi pal tujhe bahoon mai Lena
Waqt ka wo lamhaa meharbaan nahi thaa

Har taraf mujhe tu-he-tu nazar aatee thee
Par paas tere naa aane ki laachaari thee






quote author=*KasaK*....Dil Ki link=topic=62301.msg1119583#msg1119583 date=1299080553]
<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>


Bht mile sanam yunhi mujhe raahon me magar
Koi bhi humsafar ….aapsa gabru jawan nahin tha

Khokar tujhe kya kuch kho diya hai maine
Janti to thi magar…. Aisa hoga ye gumaan nahin tha

Bichhde the jab pehli bar wo dard bhulta nahin
Dil me utra tha khanjar….par uska nishaan nahin tha

Tanha tu bhi tha aur tanha yahan main bhi hun
Sab the aas pas magar…koi bhi apna yahan  nahin tha

Bewafa na  tu hai na main ye janti hun main sanam
Lakeeron ka tha khel….waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha…!!!







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KHAMOSH AWAAZ JI BHT BHT SHUKRIYA AAPKA JO AAPNE MERE LIKHE KO PASAND KIYA...
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2011, 05:04:53 PM »
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<>*Waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha*<>


Bht mile sanam yunhi mujhe raahon me magar
Koi bhi humsafar ….aapsa gabru jawan nahin tha

Khokar tujhe kya kuch kho diya hai maine
Janti to thi magar…. Aisa hoga ye gumaan nahin tha

Bichhde the jab pehli bar wo dard bhulta nahin
Dil me utra tha khanjar….par uska nishaan nahin tha

Tanha tu bhi tha aur tanha yahan main bhi hun
Sab the aas pas magar…koi bhi apna yahan  nahin tha

Bewafa na  tu hai na main ye janti hun main sanam
Lakeeron ka tha khel….waqt hum par meharbaan nahin tha…!!!








Kasak Ji.. Wah Kya likha aap ne bohout khoob.. aap ki lines toe humari Dil ki FEELINGS koe.. Ujaadh hi deta hai.. : Applause Applause

Khokar tujhe kya kuch kho diya maine,
Jaanti toe thi magar...Aeisa hoga yeh gumaan nahi tha.
Tanha Tu Bhi tha aur Tanha yahaan main bhi huun,
Sab the aas paas magar...Koi bhi apna yahaan nahi tha.   tearyeyed tearyeyed


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