Wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain

by klaskar on April 10, 2010, 04:11:40 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 12, 2010, 12:24:34 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut mohabbat hain aapke alfaazon me... bahut dard hai....

aur saath hi bahut bahut shukriya ...

kuch uski adaon ka yun nasha tha humko,
ki uski yaad me raato ko neend nahi aati thi,
neend to aaj bhi nahi aati,
fark bas itna hai ki wo aaj hamare nahi hain,
wo bas hamare khwaabo me aate hain,
kya kahen aapse ki aaj wo kitna yaad aate hain,
sach me wo humein bahut yaad aate hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo guzre zamane yaad aate hain...


Bahaut acha likha hai Kapil dost phir se apne Applause

Teh dil se shukriya Kapil dost! Haan woh lamhe wakei khubsoorat the..bahaut...woh lamhon ne hi toh Rahim ko Rahim banaya hai...Jeena seekhaya hai..mohobat ka matlab seekhaya hai... par aj... sad5


Ankhein bhar jati hai askhon se,
Dil bhar ata hai dard se,
Saha bahaut hai maine pane ke bajae,
Kimat chukayi hai mohobat ki,
Sab manzoor hai ager usse paa loun main,
Wakei woh beete lamhe bahaut yaad ate hai,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...
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«Reply #16 on: April 14, 2010, 03:59:49 PM »
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bahut achhe . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: April 14, 2010, 10:57:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

bahut achhe . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2010, 01:02:39 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut mohabbat hain aapke alfaazon me... bahut dard hai....

aur saath hi bahut bahut shukriya ...

kuch uski adaon ka yun nasha tha humko,
ki uski yaad me raato ko neend nahi aati thi,
neend to aaj bhi nahi aati,
fark bas itna hai ki wo aaj hamare nahi hain,
wo bas hamare khwaabo me aate hain,
kya kahen aapse ki aaj wo kitna yaad aate hain,
sach me wo humein bahut yaad aate hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo guzre zamane yaad aate hain...


Shukriya Dost...

Dard aur mohobat ne hi toh likhna seekhaya hai...Aur haan, lavz toh apke bhi inn dono ehsaason main doobe hue hote hai...

Bahaut acha likha hai apne...Main har line ke baad wah wah kar raha tha...kya line likhi hai ke woh aj humara nahin... Applause Dil ko choo gaye dost! Applause


Taraste hai hum uski ek jhalak ke liye,
Tadapte hai hum uske dil ki chaun ke liye,
Kyun woh chorr gaya mujhe beech raaste main,
Sab itna haseen lagta tha jab woh tha saath,
Wakei marte hai hum aj kal woh zamane ke liye,
Woh beete lamhe yaad ate hai,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...

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«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2010, 03:29:57 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya bhai. Apne bhi bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai. Unki yaadon ka rang hi kuch aisa hai ki uske saamne har rang feenka pad jaata hai...

bhulaake saari duniya bas uske the hum,
saath hote the to bas haste the hum,
aisa asar tha uski baaton me ki,
har gham me bhi muskurate the hum,
aaj na to wo hai na uski baatein hain,
aur na hi hum aajkal muskurate hain,
kaise bataun tumse ae mere dost,
wo beetey lamhe bahut yaad aate hain,
sach kehta hoon Rahim bhai,
wo guzre zamane bahut yaad aate hain...

Shukriya Dost...

Dard aur mohobat ne hi toh likhna seekhaya hai...Aur haan, lavz toh apke bhi inn dono ehsaason main doobe hue hote hai...

Bahaut acha likha hai apne...Main har line ke baad wah wah kar raha tha...kya line likhi hai ke woh aj humara nahin... Applause Dil ko choo gaye dost! Applause


Taraste hai hum uski ek jhalak ke liye,
Tadapte hai hum uske dil ki chaun ke liye,
Kyun woh chorr gaya mujhe beech raaste main,
Sab itna haseen lagta tha jab woh tha saath,
Wakei marte hai hum aj kal woh zamane ke liye,
Woh beete lamhe yaad ate hai,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...


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«Reply #20 on: April 17, 2010, 04:59:33 PM »
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Applause Applause

Woh jab the humare saath toh dard tha hi nahin zindagi main,
Woh kya chorr gaye mujhe,
Aisa lagta hai ke asmaan se ghir gaya main,
Jism toh nahin mager dil zaroor tukde tukde hogaya,
Ab toh sada khamosh rahega yeh dil mera,
Aj mager ek tadapti awaz se kehta hai tujhe ae Dost,
Woh lamhe yaad ate hai,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai!!!
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«Reply #21 on: April 18, 2010, 02:48:26 AM »
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Shukriya Rahim bhai.. aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

dil ro raha tha par chehre pe muskaan thi uske,
kehna chahti thi kuch par hothon pe khamoshi thi uske,
uske un aasuon ki boonden aaj bhi mujhko dikh jaate hain,
uski wo khamoshi mere kaano me kuch keh jaati hai,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
haan dost wo guzre zamane yaad ate hain...
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«Reply #22 on: April 18, 2010, 08:02:50 PM »
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Honth khamosh rahe uske mager nigahein sab keh deti hai,
Ankhon main mohobat dikti hai mujhe,
Mager uske lab kehte hai mohobat nahin tumse,
Pata nahin kispe yakeen karoun main,
Tadap kar kehta hoon,
Woh beete lamhe yaad ate hai,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...
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«Reply #23 on: April 19, 2010, 01:38:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya dost.... aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #24 on: April 19, 2010, 06:13:20 PM »
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Shukriya Dost!
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«Reply #25 on: April 20, 2010, 05:17:21 AM »
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Bhut ache ja rehe ho dono .....
Khoob mehfil jama rakhi hai ....
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«Reply #26 on: April 20, 2010, 05:23:14 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...waise ye dard ki mehfil hai isliye jitni jaldi khatam ho jaaaye achcha hai... !!!

Bhut ache ja rehe ho dono .....
Khoob mehfil jama rakhi hai ....
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«Reply #27 on: April 20, 2010, 05:35:20 AM »
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To kar do na finish ........

Jst rembr... keep smiling alwyz
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«Reply #28 on: November 17, 2011, 09:53:30 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai     Klaskar ji........



Wo beete lamhe yaad aate hai
pal pal mujhe satate hai
tu toh chod gayi mujhko yaadon mein jeene ke liye
kabhi yeh socha kya tere bin ham jee paate hai...
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