Wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain

by klaskar on April 09, 2010, 06:41:40 PM
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Aaj wo mere paas nahi. wo mere saath nahi . par fir bhi jaane q uski yaad chhed jati hai mujhe. Ek meethi si chubhan hoti hai jab bhi wo yaad aati hai. Unhi yaadon ko jodke kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine...straight from the heart...

Wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain

tere shahar jaata tha jab main,
milne tujhse banke deewana,
bhoola nahi hoon aaj bhi wo din,
jab mili thi mujhse pehli baar,
wo teri masoom si nazar,
jaane kaisa asar kar gayi,
mujhko dekh tera muskurana,
aaj bhi wo pal yaad aata hai,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo gujre zamaane yaad aate hain,

chori chori chupke chupke,
milne jab aati thi mujhse,
nazrein churaake har kisi se,
jab tu mila karti thi mujhse,
ghanto tak hum baatein karte,
ghum aur khushiyaan baanta karte,
un palon ki kuch baatein hain,
jo aaj bhi mujhko yaad aate hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo gujre zamaane yaad aate hain,

pagal banke milta tha tujhse,
hosh na rehta tha ek pal ka,
saath jo hota tha kuch pal ka,
mere liye wo jannat sa tha,
baatein jab karti thi mujhse,
jaane kahaan main kho jaata tha,
shahad si meethi baatein teri,
jo aaj bhi mujhko yaad aate hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo gujre zamaane yaad aate hain,

sang beeta wo waqt tha aisa,
kam tha lekin tha wo pyara,
kabhi kabhi ye sochta hoon main,
kaash wo waqt wapas laa pata,
kuch palon ki khushiyaan dekar,
jaane kahaan wo aaj kho gayi,
un dino ki kuch yaadein hai,
jo aaj bhi mujhko yaad aate hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo gujre zamaane yaad aate hain...
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2010, 06:55:20 PM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil Ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2010, 06:58:32 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... aap sab ki taarife hi hain jo aur likhne k liye protsaahit karti hain... bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Wah! Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2010, 07:05:27 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2010, 07:33:32 PM »
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Kapil "kya baat hai "

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jst "KAMAL JI KAMAL"

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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 06:54:35 AM »
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Thanx a lot Neel.... bahut bahut shukriya... haan sach hai meri har kavita ek kahani hoti hai...aur main isi wajah se koshish karta hoon ki simple words use karun taaki jo padhe use asaani se samajh me aa jaye... meri kavita ko waqt dene k liye bahut bahut shukriya Neel...thanx a lot...!!!

Kapil "kya baat hai "

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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 10:25:55 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai     Klaskar ji........



Wo beete lamhe yaad aate hai
pal pal mujhe satate hai
tu toh chod gayi mujhko yaadon mein jeene ke liye
kabhi yeh socha kya tere bin ham jee paate hai...
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2010, 04:33:24 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji...!!!
Aur aapne bhi baut khoob likha hai...!!!

Wah kya baat hai     Klaskar ji........



Wo beete lamhe yaad aate hai
pal pal mujhe satate hai
tu toh chod gayi mujhko yaadon mein jeene ke liye
kabhi yeh socha kya tere bin ham jee paate hai...
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2010, 04:40:28 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Achchi Koshish Ki Hai Aapne Klaskar Ji
Haal e Dil Ko Lafzon Mein Pirone Ki


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2010, 04:54:32 PM »
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Wah Wah Kapil dost...Khamosh kar dia mujhe..mere dil ki awaz likh di apne yeh nazm main...woh beete lamhe yaad ate hai, woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...sach pucho toh yeh do lines gun guna raha hoon main...kuch likhne ko mann kar raha hai mager apki nazm itni khubsoorat hai ke main kya kahoun..khair koshish karta hoon...

Woh beete lamhe yaad ate hai,
Jab hum tum ek the,
Ghum ka pata bhi nahin chalta tha,
Zindagi teri agosh main rehti thi,
Dil khushi se jhumta tha,
Mohobat ka jaise ek nasha tha mujh par,
Mager aj toh bas,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...

Woh beete lamhe yaad ate hai,
Jab hum tum ghanton ko baatein kiya karte the,
Waqt ka pata nahin chalta tha,
Aj zindagi kate nahin kat'ti,
Jaise main ruk sa gaya hoon,
Woh daur tha jab Rahim; Rahim bana tha,
Mager aj,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...

Kya tha aur kya hogaya,
Roshni ko marr andhere main dhal gaye,
Tumhe toh hum jaise hazaron miljaenge,
Hume tum jaise kabhi nahin milega,
Tum the toh sab tha,
Aj nahin ho toh kuch bhi nahin hai,
Kuch... bhi nahin,
Yakeen mano,
Kuch bhi nahin!!
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...


Main sirf lavzon ko jhoda hai...dil ki pukar hai yeh...janta hoon, Dost ki tarha khubsoorat toh nahin likh paya mager dil se likha hai...
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2010, 05:21:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai hamari kavita ki itni jyada taarif karne k liye...aur aapke hothon pe hamare geet hain isse jyada aur kya chahiye hume.... bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa kar raha hoon main...

aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai. dil se nikli hui awaaz aur hmein pasand na aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya ? aur aap tulna q kar rahe hain. aapke beete lamhe aur hamare beete lamhe alag the. bas ek hi baat dono me ek si hai ki wo dono lamhe bahut khoobsurat the. aur un lamho ko aapne bahut khoobsurti se apne shabdon me pesh kiya hai. bahut khoob Rahim bhai bahut khoob....!!!

kuch pal yun haseen hote hain,
rokna chaho to rukte nahi hain,
ek roz wo huye the apne,
par aaj wo hamare nahi hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo guzre zamane yaad aate hain...

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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2010, 04:36:07 AM »
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Bahaut acha likha hai Kapil dost phir se apne Applause

Teh dil se shukriya Kapil dost! Haan woh lamhe wakei khubsoorat the..bahaut...woh lamhon ne hi toh Rahim ko Rahim banaya hai...Jeena seekhaya hai..mohobat ka matlab seekhaya hai... par aj... sad5


Ankhein bhar jati hai askhon se,
Dil bhar ata hai dard se,
Saha bahaut hai maine pane ke bajae,
Kimat chukayi hai mohobat ki,
Sab manzoor hai ager usse paa loun main,
Wakei woh beete lamhe bahaut yaad ate hai,
Woh guzre zamane yaad ate hai...
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2010, 09:59:56 AM »
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WAh WAh!!!!!!!!
Gud Very Very Gud both Rahim Ji & kapil .......
Too GUDDD
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2010, 01:39:52 PM »
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Shukriya Neel jee!
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2010, 02:52:41 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Neel...!!!

WAh WAh!!!!!!!!
Gud Very Very Gud both Rahim Ji & kapil .......
Too GUDDD
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