woh ku na saka

by FArah on August 01, 2007, 11:51:14 AM
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hum os k naqsh negha pr chelty rahy
jo hamary sath ek pal nhi chal saka

najany ku mujh ko os pr bharosa ha
woh ay ga lakin woh na a saka

hamay zndgi bhar jin lamho ka intazar ha
woh  khubsurat  pal ek bar na a saka

hamy tu phoool sy ly kr chandni na kaha ha
tu mat ro woh kis waja sy nhi a saka

lakin a dil tujh ko os pr yakeen ku ha
mager A bahar yh tu bat woh ku na a saka

Phool k nazaroo ma khaza k weranoo ma
ma na hr pal jis k intazar ky woh ku na a saka
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2007, 12:20:03 PM »
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wah
bohot acha likha apne farah ek baar aur
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FArah
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2007, 10:42:56 AM »
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thanks to u.


a dil tu itna rota ku ha
apni ankho ko askhoo sy debota ku ha
yaqeen ha mujh apny dil pr
phr askho sy dil ko debota ku ha
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2007, 11:05:02 AM »
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thanks to u.


a dil tu itna rota ku ha
apni ankho ko askhoo sy debota ku ha
yaqeen ha mujh apny dil pr
phr askho sy dil ko debota ku ha


ye to repetition ho gayi.. hai naa. ek hi baat dono lines keh rahi hain Usual Smile


apko bura to nahi laga, bas aisa laga isliye bol diya
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FArah
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2007, 11:22:22 AM »
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nni bhai mujh bora nhi laga.
plz point out my mistake.
thanks 2 u

A dil tu on ko yaad kerta ku ha
dard sy pyr h tu rota  ku ha
yaqeen h mujh apny dil pr
phr khud ko ashko ma debota ku ha

ab right ha
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2007, 03:49:40 PM »
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Verey nice Farah Usual Smile
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FArah
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2007, 10:18:56 AM »
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thanks TAlat 4 ur courag
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