YAAD (Ghazal).... "MohaN"

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YAAD

Kab nahin mujhe, unh kaa khayaal hee thaa aayaa,
Kab nahin koi main ne saawan bhi thaa barsaayaa!

Yun to saabat qadam hee thaa sadaa chaltaa rahaa,
Phir bhi qadam qadam thhokar, hee thaa khaayaa!

Khuda naa karey koi raaz bhi unh kaa afshan ho...
Kuchh yun dil phir har gham bhi thaa chupaayaa!

Kaash ke woh koi fareib naa kartey, anjaam mein,
Main ne kab nahin apnaa dil bhi thaa samjhaayaa!

Unhein bas yahii chorhh kee tarah khatakti rahii,
Aakir jaanaa hee thaa bas yahii hee thaa bhaayaa!

MohaN guzri baaten sochh sochh kyun dukhi ho,
Yahii likhaa thaa yahii unhein raas bhi thaa aayaa!

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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2016, 11:12:28 PM »
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YAAD

Kab nahin mujhe, unh kaa khayaal hee thaa aayaa,
Kab nahin koi main ne saawan bhi thaa barsaayaa!

Yun to saabat qadam hee thaa sadaa chaltaa rahaa,
Phir bhi qadam qadam thhokar, hee thaa khaayaa!

Khuda naa karey koi raaz bhi unh kaa afshan ho...
Kuchh yun dil phir har gham bhi thaa chupaayaa!

Kaash ke woh koi fareib naa kartey, anjaam mein,
Main ne kab nahin apnaa dil bhi thaa samjhaayaa!

Unhein bas yahii chorhh kee tarah khatakti rahii,
Aakir jaanaa hee thaa bas yahii hee thaa bhaayaa!

MohaN guzri baaten sochh sochh kyun dukhi ho,
Yahii likhaa thaa yahii unhein raas bhi thaa aayaa!



Mohan Sir
bht khoob ghazal likhi hai apne.
daad aur mubarakbad qubul Karen.Bhao bht ache rahe ar drd ki bayani bhi khoob rhi.

ap apne shbdon k spell pr thora sa dhyan dijie jisse apke nagmo ka lutf jada ache s har koi utha pae.

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kisee ki yaadon ne thaam rakhaa h saanson ki dor SF
    wrnaa aaj hum nahee humaree yaaden hotee!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2016, 01:17:09 AM »
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Bahot badhiya......surindarji
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2016, 02:47:34 AM »
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Bahot khooob, Lajawaab Sir, Waaaah Waaaah aur Waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Mohan Sir
bht khoob ghazal likhi hai apne.
daad aur mubarakbad qubul Karen.Bhao bht ache rahe ar drd ki bayani bhi khoob rhi.

ap apne shbdon k spell pr thora sa dhyan dijie jisse apke nagmo ka lutf jada ache s har koi utha pae.

khush rahen
muskurate rahen
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kisee ki yaadon ne thaam rakhaa h saanson ki dor SF
    wrnaa aaj hum nahee humaree yaaden hotee!!!
bahut shukria Sarfira Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2016, 02:53:56 PM »
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Bahot badhiya......surindarji
bahut shukria Shikha Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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Bahot khooob, Lajawaab Sir, Waaaah Waaaah aur Waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Hriday Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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