Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

by KOYAL46 on September 15, 2010, 11:09:34 AM
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Ye Jeevan Ka Safar........

Ye jeevan ka safar bhee bada ajeeb lagta hai
Janm k rishte se bhi jyada koi ajeej lagta hai
 
Kya hai dil me jo kashish ban atak raha hai
Jaante hum,sab kuchh yahi chhut jaana hai
 
Such-dukh sathi jeevan k kya ghabraana hai
In dono ka saath jaise dhoop aur chhaav hai
 
Duriyen nahi banee baadha kabhi rishton kee
Ye tou nazdikiyo ne he hilai  neev rishton kee
 
Hona nahi mayus k ye daur bhi gujar jaayega
Bahaaro ka kafila dekh paas phir laut aayega

 
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 11:12:17 AM »
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koyal ji bahut khoob.
kamaaal ka likha .kalam tod ke rakh di hai.
 dil se likha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 12:15:42 PM »
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Aapka bahoot bahut shukriya Sureshji...... icon_flower

koyal ji bahut khoob.
kamaaal ka likha .kalam tod ke rakh di hai.
 dil se likha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 12:31:51 PM »
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bht khubsurat likha hai koyal tumne......
padhke man ko achcha laga....
zindagi ki niraasha se niklne ka ek tarika ye bhi hai samjh aaya swty....
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 12:40:15 PM »
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Aap kehti ho tou sach he hoga....koshish jaari he Anu-di...Thanks a lot.... icon_flower

bht khubsurat likha hai koyal tumne......
padhke man ko achcha laga....
zindagi ki niraasha se niklne ka ek tarika ye bhi hai samjh aaya swty....
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 01:26:05 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne Koyal.. bahut bahut khoob... bahut achcha laga padh ke aapki ye poem... bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai aapne....too good hai ji...!!!

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ye rishte hi to hain jo pareshan karte hain,
ek se judna hai aur ek ke tutne se darte hain,

khoon ke rishten bhulake bagawat karte hain,
kisi anjaan ka haath pakadke aage badhte hain,

aasaan nahi hota ki bhool jaayen saare rishton ko,
dil pe paththar rakh ke bhi log ye kaam karte hain,

kuch rishte jinki buniyaad hi aakarshan pe hoti hai,
un rishton ke liye log apna ghar barbaad karte hain,

dushman nahi hain maata pita jo humein samjhaate hain,
par fir bhi apne karam se hum unka dil toda karte hain.....
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 02:00:00 PM »
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thanks.....Kalaakaarji.... icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 06:16:32 PM »
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koyal Jee Aadaab!

Achche vichaar hai par kabhi positive bhi likha kijiye... achcha likha hai aapne daad ....

Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile           

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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2010, 12:47:12 AM »
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Ye Jeevan Ka Safar........

Ye jeevan ka safar bhee bada ajeeb lagta hai
Janm k rishte se bhi jyada koi ajeej lagta hai
 
Kya hai dil me jo kashish ban atak raha hai
Jaante hum,sab kuchh yahi chhut jaana hai
 
Such-dukh sathi jeevan k kya ghabraana hai
In dono ka saath jaise dhoop aur chhaav hai
 
Duriyen nahi banee baadha kabhi rishton kee
Ye tou nazdikiyo ne he hilai  neev rishton kee
 
Hona nahi mayus k ye daur bhi gujar jaayega
Bahaaro ka kafila dekh paas phir laut aayega

 

Koyal Ji ...... bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe aapke sabhi ashaar... zindagi ke aas-paas ka dard samete ...dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2010, 03:17:29 AM »
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Nice ji. . . Usual Smile
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