zara thahar ja ik pal------k

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u muh mod kr janewale
zara thahar ja ik pal|
dil tod kr kasme bhulakr janewale
zara thahar ja ik pal|
tujhe rokna maksad nhi
kahunga ab kuch bhi nhi|
bas zara sa thahar ja ik pal
dekh lene de teri ye surat iss pal
jis par marta tha pal pal
jisko krta tha yad harpal|
zara kareb aa
ik akhri bar gale laga
sun lene de teri dhadkano ko is pal
jeena hai fir tadapte hue har pal
zra thahar ja ik pal|
sauk se jao tum mujhse dur
gam na krunga mai
bas zra sa thahar ja ik pal
jee lene de aaj mujhe zindgi ka har pal|!
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2010, 08:47:50 AM »
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KB.......tumhari poem padhkar ye kisiko dedcate karne ka dil kar gauya.......
kai roz se iss topic pe likhna tha nahin likh pai......aj jaise pne hi shabd nazar aaye........thnx alot for sharing these felings...koshish karungi iska reply dene ki......thnx alot
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Bahut khoob Kb Ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2010, 09:19:10 AM »
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thanx Kasak..aur Harish bhai apka bhi shukriya dil se.
aap dono ne pasand kiya bas likhna safal hua mera
 
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2010, 09:37:41 AM »
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kasak---ye thanx nhi chahiye mujhe tumhara:(
koi daad waad deti to achha lgta ..
thanx a lot :Huh? chiyaaa
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2010, 09:40:33 AM »
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uffffffff.......sorryyyyy kb.....no thnx bas......
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haan ab bas....Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2010, 06:23:33 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on December 01, 2010, 08:11:46 AM
u muh mod kr janewale
zara thahar ja ik pal|
dil tod kr kasme bhulakr janewale
zara thahar ja ik pal|
tujhe rokna maksad nhi
kahunga ab kuch bhi nhi|
bas zara sa thahar ja ik pal
dekh lene de teri ye surat iss pal
jis par marta tha pal pal
jisko krta tha yad harpal|
zara kareb aa
ik akhri bar gale laga
sun lene de teri dhadkano ko is pal
jeena hai fir tadapte hue har pal
zra thahar ja ik pal|
sauk se jao tum mujhse dur
gam na krunga mai
bas zra sa thahar ja ik pal
jee lene de aaj mujhe zindgi ka har pal|!
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sukriya Manoj ji--
aapko bhi miss kar raha hu sad5
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2011, 09:13:09 AM »
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good one kb....
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sukriya Manzil ji
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Bahut khoob KB ji.apne dard ko khoobi se bayaan kiya,great creation,hats off.keep it up icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 04, 2011, 10:55:47 PM
Bahut khoob KB ji.apne dard ko khoobi se bayaan kiya,great creation,hats off.keep it up icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
sukriya madhu ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2011, 12:10:46 AM »
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gud one
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Quote from: sarfira on September 02, 2011, 12:10:46 AM
gud one
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