हालात...

by Saahir10 on April 05, 2012, 08:24:10 PM
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मोहब्बत भी क्या चीज़ है,
बड़ा दिलकश हो समां , जब बात होती है...

चलाओ जब नफरत और गुमनामी की आंधी,
फिर हर एक पल अश्कों की ही तोह सौगात होती है.....

वैसे तोह अकेलेपन ने ज़र्रा-ज़र्रा हिला रखा है,
मिटा नहीं पाता तुझ पर लिखे उन पन्नों को...
तेरे चेहरे को याद करता हूँ,
तेरी यादों में ही...
बसेरा भी तो बना रखा है...........

आँखें हमेशा सूजी रहती हैं,
लोग कहते हैं रो के आया है...
किस-किस को बतलाऊँ,
प्यार के आलम में..
कैसा समा होता है....

 
रो रो कर तोह मरता ही है आशिक ....
कोई तो समझे इस दर्द को...
बेवफाई का ज़हर पीकर..
जीने की आस में  भी तोह आखों  से दर्द छलकता है.. ....
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2012, 08:33:21 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob likha hai aapne saahir ji... bahut achcha likhte hain aap ... yunhi likhte rahiye... likhne se dil ka dard halka hota hai... ye sabse achchi dawa hai tute huye dil ke liye.... keep writing... take care...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2012, 02:56:59 AM »
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Likha to aapne khoob h.
Par aapke jajbat jitne achche h utne achche lafjo me bya nhi kar paye aap.
Likhte rahe likhne se hi aapki sayari me nikhar aayega.
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2012, 06:25:40 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob sahirji....daad
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2012, 08:07:38 AM »
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thnx to all of u..
@parvana : thnx a lot fr ur suggestion..

it was written as it is..alfaaz par dhyan na diya,,agar aap log kuch sujhav de sakte hain ismein toh plz cmmnt
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2012, 08:25:52 AM »
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Accha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2012, 12:59:50 PM »
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bahut sunder saahir ji
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