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punam
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palke meri band hai
yaado me jo wo base hai
wo mere liye aayenge
in nigaho ko intezaar hai
seha nahi jata ab ye tanhayi
ek pal bhi gujarna muskil hai
khwabo me se nikal ke ab
haqikat banke unhe aana hai
main kehe deti hun sab se
mere sajan ka sandesa aaya hai
wo aane wale hai...
aao ab der na karo...
ek pal ab lagta ek yug aur reha nahi jata hai...
jaan ghabraati hai sath me khushi bhi hai
aap se kya kahun kitne armaan jaage hai...
aa jao ab der na karo...
aur reha nahi jaata hai...
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2007, 11:18:53 PM » |
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good effort.
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2007, 12:54:20 AM » |
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good
keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2007, 06:14:11 AM » |
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Punam
Keep it up ! :D
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2007, 11:38:20 AM » |
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Ricky ji ,javed ji and Raj ji ...aap sab mujhe encourage kar rahe hain aap sab ko many many thanx...
aur shayad issliye main kuch likh pa rahi hun....thanx again...
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2007, 11:40:27 AM » |
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Dil me ek tasveer chupa rakhi hun
tanhayi me baate karti rehti hun
hamesha yaad aate hai wo...
unki ehsash mehesush karti rehti hun
sakhe dil pe umeed liye baithi hun
milenge hum bas yehi aass se jeeye jaati hun
mere iss haal se woh bekhabar nahi hain
unki bhi haal aisi hi hai dekh chuki hun
AA JAO AB der na karo dil hi dil me pukarti rehti hun
bechain dil ko wo aayenge samjhati rehti hun...
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2007, 11:50:36 AM » |
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Welcome to Yoindia..Punam....Bahut accha likha hai Keep it up....!!!
Karun me Gumaan uss Khushi ka.....
Jo aaj bhi mere Seene me hai......
Fisalti hai Kalam ab bhi banke Barood mere ISHQ ki.....
Intezaar se jayada Mushkil toh tujh binn Jeene me hai.....!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2007, 03:38:57 PM » |
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Welcome to Yoindia..Punam....Bahut accha likha hai Keep it up....!!!
Karun me Gumaan uss Khushi ka.....
Jo aaj bhi mere Seene me hai......
Fisalti hai Kalam ab bhi banke Barood mere ISHQ ki.....
Intezaar se jayada Mushkil toh tujh binn Jeene me hai.....!!!!!! Thanx badnaam_shayar ji..... aap k aage main kuch kahoo itna himmat nahi... aap ki kalam se nikli shayari ka kya kehena.. uska to jawab nahi... |
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2007, 03:40:22 PM » |
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saath hamara nahi utna purana
fir bhi kyun janmo se rishta hai aisa lagta hai
mile bhi nahi abhi hum theek se aaj tak
na jane kyun bin unke zindagi adhuri lagti hai....
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«Reply #9 on: May 24, 2007, 09:12:52 AM » |
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palke meri band hai
yaado me jo wo base hai
wo mere liye aayenge
in nigaho ko intezaar hai
seha nahi jata ab ye tanhayi
ek pal bhi gujarna muskil hai
khwabo me se nikal ke ab
haqikat banke unhe aana hai
main kehe deti hun sab se
mere sajan ka sandesa aaya hai
wo aane wale hai...
aao ab der na karo...
ek pal ab lagta ek yug aur reha nahi jata hai...
jaan ghabraati hai sath me khushi bhi hai
aap se kya kahun kitne armaan jaage hai...
aa jao ab der na karo...
aur reha nahi jaata hai...
very nice poonam ji iska jawab to mere pass bhee nahi hai... netra..... |
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2007, 11:17:05 AM » |
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thanx netra ji pare isse aur aap ko acha laga....
kahan ho aap puakaar ta hai ye dil dekho
jaise sadiyo se hai intezaar aap ka
wada kar ke mukar na jana
palak jhapak ti nahi intezaar me aap ka
her sapno me hai roop aap ka
mehekti hai meri duniya leke naam aap ka
aap ke siva kuch najar aati nahi
anchal philake tak rahi hun raha aap ka
iss dil ki awaaz ko ansuna na karo...
AA BHI JAO ab der na karo pukar ta hai dil leke aam aap ka..
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2007, 11:30:37 AM » |
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Good job Punam...
Keep writing like this...
best wishes
Divya
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«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2007, 02:06:44 PM » |
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thanx netra ji pare isse aur aap ko acha laga....
kahan ho aap puakaar ta hai ye dil dekho
jaise sadiyo se hai intezaar aap ka
wada kar ke mukar na jana
palak jhapak ti nahi intezaar me aap ka
her sapno me hai roop aap ka
mehekti hai meri duniya leke naam aap ka
aap ke siva kuch najar aati nahi
anchal philake tak rahi hun raha aap ka
iss dil ki awaaz ko ansuna na karo...
AA BHI JAO ab der na karo pukar ta hai dil leke aam aap ka.. aawaj lagata hai dil mera n jane kise
mahboob hai mera wo dekha nahi jise
ak ahasaas ban kar rah gya hai pyar tera
kyo ataa hai spano me mahaboob mera
bharna chata hai agoosh me dil par kise..
na jane kon hai eye malik mahaboob mera
ek bar aajao agaagosh me meri sama to jao
bhool kar is duniya ko basa do tum ashiana mera
netra..
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«Reply #13 on: May 24, 2007, 08:03:57 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Punam and Netra ji!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2007, 02:37:13 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Punam and Netra ji!!! thanks pooja ji. netra..... |
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