Aa Ja Main Basa Loon Apni Jaan, Teri Jaan MeiN..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on December 03, 2012, 07:10:41 AM
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Bohat Aag Hai Mere Tanha Raat Ke Jahaan MeiN,
Dekh Lena Tum Woh Jalta Chand Aasmaan MeiN..!!

Alag Hum Dono Ki Zameen, Waqt Ki Raftaar Hai,
Mil Jana Humse Tum SitaroN Ke Karwaan MeiN..!!

Tu Hi Hai Justuju, Tu Hi Meri DuaoN Ki Hai Aarzu,
Ho Shamil Tum Meri Har Saans Ke Armaan MeiN..!!

Likh Di Hai Maine Apni Yeh Zindagani Tere Naam,
Khuda Kare Ho Zikr Mera Bhi, Teri Dastaan MeiN..!!

Mil Jao Hum Se Kuch Is Tarah Ke Kabhi Juda Na Ho,
Aa Ja MaiN Basa Loon Apni Jaan, Teri Jaan MeiN..!!

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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 07:35:51 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 08:33:38 AM »
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Wah Shireen ji bahot achhi creation hai jo alag hi asar rakhti hai. Parhkar achha laga. Daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2012, 08:38:51 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2012, 09:08:35 AM »
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Bohat Aag Hai Mere Tanha Raat Ke Jahaan Mein,
Dekh Lena Tum Woh Jalta Chand Aasmaan Mein..!!

Alag Hum Dono Ki Zameen, Waqt Ki Raftaar Hai,
Mil Jana Humse Tum Sitaron Ke Karwaan Mein..!!

Tu Hi Hai Justuju, Tu Hi Meri Duaon Ki Hai Aarzu,
Ho Shamil Tum Meri Har Saans Ke Armaan Mein..!!

Likh Di Hai Maine Apni Yeh Zindagani Tere Naam,
Khuda Kare Ho Zikr Mera Bhi, Teri Dastaan Mein..!!

Mil Jao Hum Se Kuch Is Tarah Ke Kabhi Juda Na Ho,
Aa Ja Main Basa Loon Apni Jaan, Teri Jaan Mein..!!

Shireen Hakani

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ASUSUAL  WONDERFUL..
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2012, 09:46:04 AM »
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bahut khoob shairen ji mubarak ho
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2012, 09:46:41 AM »
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bahut khoob kya bat hai
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2012, 09:54:46 AM »
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Bohat Aag Hai Mere Tanha Raat Ke Jahaan Mein,
Dekh Lena Tum Woh Jalta Chand Aasmaan Mein..!!

Alag Hum Dono Ki Zameen, Waqt Ki Raftaar Hai,
Mil Jana Humse Tum Sitaron Ke Karwaan Mein..!!

Tu Hi Hai Justuju, Tu Hi Meri Duaon Ki Hai Aarzu,
Ho Shamil Tum Meri Har Saans Ke Armaan Mein..!!

Likh Di Hai Maine Apni Yeh Zindagani Tere Naam,
Khuda Kare Ho Zikr Mera Bhi, Teri Dastaan Mein..!!

Mil Jao Hum Se Kuch Is Tarah Ke Kabhi Juda Na Ho,
Aa Ja Main Basa Loon Apni Jaan, Teri Jaan Mein..!!

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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2012, 12:15:40 PM »
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waah bohat khoob ,......bohat c daad,........
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 02:37:29 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2012, 03:56:21 PM »
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behtareen mohtarma, meri taraf se ek rau qubool farmaayen.... bas yuNhi bazm ki raunak me chara chaand lagaati raheN...
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Behtareen Shireen jee, bahut khoob. Daad qubool kareiN. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2012, 04:34:10 PM »
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bahut khoob , shireen ji . daad o mubarakbad.
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