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by Meena is back on May 15, 2006, 06:31:59 PM
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mai to bohot der baad ayi hoon yaha pe aur dekha ke many ppl r missing..kaha gaye sab? esp HumTum ji...? kaha gaye ho? Darshan to de jao  sad5  someone is missing u  sad5  lijiye kuch apke liye likha hai  :D

Nigahe doond rahi hai humsafar ko yaha,
Jab mehefil me khud ko tanha paya hai,

Apse milne ki talab dil me ghar kar gayi,
Jabse apke dil me humne apna ashiyana basaya hai,

Yuh to band ankhon se deedar kar lete hai hum apka,
Par aaj apse rubaru hone ka khayal man me aya hai,

Naaz hai mujhe bohot apki mohabbat pe sanam,
Ke duniyawalo ko nahin apne sirf hume apnaya hai,

Zamana kya door karega jo ek rooh me bas gaye,
Dooriyon ka humne har ek faasla jo mitaya hai,

Kaha hai aap, hum to intezaar me hai yaha,
Apke ane ki aas me umeed ka diya humne jalaya hai,

Naumeedi ke samundar me doob na jaye yeh diye kahi,
Aap laut ayie “HumTum” ke “Meena” ne bade pyar se apko bulaya hai!
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2006, 06:38:48 PM »
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Meena

Bahut khoob !

HumTum aata he hoga jaldi.... :D

Abhi dhoond kar laata hoon main use  :wink:

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2006, 06:42:43 PM »
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humtum apni marzi ka malik hai, kisi ko doondne se nahin ayega, par im sure meri yeh poem pad ke zaroor ayega...
poem pasand karne ke liye shukriya rajbir ji!
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2006, 06:51:22 PM »
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Agree Meena.. Aapki iss poem ko padh kar HumTum Jahan bhi hain zaroor laut aayein ge...
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2006, 06:57:31 PM »
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shukriya aryaan ji... mujhe bih puri umeed hai  :D
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2006, 06:59:52 PM »
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tau bas theek hai, iss umeed par hi tau itni badi Duniya Qaaim hai...
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2006, 07:11:42 PM »
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woh to hai...

umeed ke diye hum jalaye baithe hai,
unke ane ki aas hum lagaye baithe hai,
ayenge woh zaroor humare liye ek bar,
is yakeen me hum khud ko sajaye baithe hai!  :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2006, 08:51:31 AM »
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mai to bohot der baad ayi hoon yaha pe aur dekha ke many ppl r missing..kaha gaye sab? esp HumTum ji...? kaha gaye ho? Darshan to de jao  sad5  someone is missing you  sad5  lijiye kuch apke liye likha hai  :D

Nigahe doond rahi hai humsafar ko yaha,
Jab mehefil me khud ko tanha paya hai,

Apse milne ki talab dil me ghar kar gayi,
Jabse apke dil me humne apna ashiyana basaya hai,

Yuh to band ankhon se deedar kar lete hai hum apka,
Par aaj apse rubaru hone ka khayal man me aya hai,

Naaz hai mujhe bohot apki mohabbat pe sanam,
Ke duniyawalo ko nahin apne sirf hume apnaya hai,

Zamana kya door karega jo ek rooh me bas gaye,
Dooriyon ka humne har ek faasla jo mitaya hai,

Kaha hai aap, hum to intezaar me hai yaha,
Apke ane ki aas me umeed ka diya humne jalaya hai,

Naumeedi ke samundar me doob na jaye yeh diye kahi,
Aap laut ayie “HumTum” ke “Meena” ne bade pyar se apko bulaya hai!




TUM ne pukara aur HUM chale aaye
Tere deed ki aas liye sanam chale aaye!!!

Meena -JI hume mehfilon mein na doonda kiije ..... hum to saya hai aap ka bas tanhaii mein hume dekha kiije !! bahut khoobsurat aur pyaare andaaz se aap ne bulaya ....  to kaseey na aate hum....  kuch aap ke liye aap ki nazar kar rha hoon !!!


Chale aaye hum yha jab tumne humey pukara hai
Tere ishq mein humne apna har lamha sanwara hai

Tu gar sath hai to hum har ik zakhm ko seh lenge
Tere bina duniya mein hume jeena nhi gawanra hai

Kasam hai tere ashqon ki tujhey rone na denge hum
Teri ik muskaan pe Jana humne sara jevan wara hai

Ab tumko hi dekh ke meri saansien chalti hai sanam
Tu chand hai meri aankhon ka tu hi mera siitara hai

Na juda kar payegi hume tamam khosihey zamane ki
Sach hai yeh "Meena" ke "HumTum" sirf tumhara hai !!
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2006, 09:02:50 AM »
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=D>  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>

Meena ne pukara tha to HumTum ko to aana he tha
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2006, 09:46:37 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob meena ji, humtum ji aur majid........
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2006, 11:53:02 AM »
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wahhhhh chand(Humtum) aur chandni(Meena) ek saath aasman se utre hain.....kis planet ki yatra par gaye the aap dono?...lolzzz

shukr hai khuda ka dikhayi to diye aap ....abb roz likha karo....waise kamaal ka likha hai dono ne...jeo
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2006, 04:04:51 PM »
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Majid ji
wah wah bohot hi khub likha apne, isme mind karne wali kaunsi gal hai :D

Rajbir ji
han ji hume bhi kushi hui ke woh finally aa gaya.  Usual Smile


Gesu ji
shukriya ji shukriya, par apne to kuch likha hi nahin  Usual Smile

Nikki kuddiye
oye kuddiye, so nice t oc ya back also, aab shuru ho ja mast mast shayari likhna.  :D
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2006, 04:08:29 PM »
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Bahoot khoob meena ji....

Tamam umar zindagi se door rahe,
Teri khushi ke liye tujse door rahe,
Ab is se badkar wafa ki saza kya hogi,
Ki tere hokar bhi tujse door rahe ...


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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2006, 04:19:10 PM »
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TUM ne pukara aur HUM chale aaye
Tere deed ki aas liye sanam chale aaye!!!

Meena -JI hume mehfilon mein na doonda kiije ..... hum to saya hai aap ka bas tanhaii mein hume dekha kiije !! bahut khoobsurat aur pyaare andaaz se aap ne bulaya ....  to kaseey na aate hum....  kuch aap ke liye aap ki nazar kar rha hoon !!!


Chale aaye hum yha jab tumne humey pukara hai
Tere ishq mein humne apna har lamha sanwara hai

Tu gar sath hai to hum har ik zakhm ko seh lenge
Tere bina duniya mein hume jeena nhi gawanra hai

Kasam hai tere ashqon ki tujhey rone na denge hum
Teri ik muskaan pe Jana humne sara jevan wara hai

Ab tumko hi dekh ke meri saansien chalti hai sanam
Tu chand hai meri aankhon ka tu hi mera siitara hai

Na juda kar payegi hume tamam khosihey zamane ki
Sach hai yeh "Meena" ke "HumTum" sirf tumhara hai !!
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wah wah humtum ji..aate hi kamal ki poem pesh kar ditti, aur shukriya janab humare kehne pe jo aa gaye phir se is mehefil me  :D

shukar guzar hai hum apke "HumTum",
jo humare bulane pe aap aa gaye,
humare sath sab kush hai yaha pe,
is kadar aap is mehefil pe cha gaye!!  :wink:

aab aap pls yuh likhte rahiega. do go away now  sad5
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2006, 05:07:39 PM »
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Good to c u meena and HUmtum :D
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