---aa tujhe aisa pyar du---

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aa tere daaman ke chubbhte kaaanto ko
--phoolo sa sawaar dun

chah kr bhi na bhul paaye
--aa tujhe aisa pyar dun

gamo se bojheel tere zindgi ko
--aa khushiyon ka uphaar dun

na tadap na aansu baha ab
--aa sapno ko tere sanwaar dun

saja ke mehndi haato me tere
--mai apna naam utaar dun

maang me tere sinduri sa
--chaand sitaare waar dun

yakeen rakh, kar aitvaar, teri ek muskurahat ko

--mai apni jaan nisaar dun
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kisi ki beintehaan yaad me khokar maine ye likha --
galti maaf
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 04:32:56 PM »
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bahut umda bahut khub likha hai aapne aaj jo bhi likha hai KB ji... ek haseeen khwaab hai aapka... duaa hai mukammal ho jaaye...

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 04:42:13 PM »
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KB........mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm reeeeeeeeee
ye post me ittttttaaaaaaaaaaa saaraaaaaaa pyaar bhara hai jaipurwali k liye k wo padhti to sab bhul jati..........
dil se dua  k aapka har khwaaab pura ho.....
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 04:46:28 PM »
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bahoot umda bhai KB..jawab nahi aapka
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KB........mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm reeeeeeeeee
ye post me ittttttaaaaaaaaaaa saaraaaaaaa pyaar bhara hai jaipurwali k liye k wo padhti to sab bhul jati..........
dil se dua  k aapka har khwaaab pura ho.....
waise ye jaipur wali koun hai?  Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 04:51:42 PM »
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sukriya Intezaar aur Kasak.
aapki duayen sar aankhon par.
haan ye jaipurwali ke liye likha hai--lekin ye khab kabhi poora nhi hoga.
coz wo mujhse pyar hi nai krti..srf mai krta hu--wo kisi or se pyar krti h jo usko behad dukh dekr tadpaata hai--rulaata hai--
bas uski unn tadap aur aansuo ka dhyan hi ye likhwa gaya.
bas uska pyar usko mile wo khus rahe yahi dua karta hun--aaplogo ki duayen bhi udhar transfer kar dia mene Usual Smile
hum to aise hi Bahut khus rahte hai yaara--Subbu rokz re
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sukriya dosto.
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 04:54:23 PM »
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Beqaraar ji aapka Behadd sukriya.
Beqaraar ji pata nahi kyun aapke comnts dekh kar sukoon milta hai azeeb sa.
aap ka mai Bahut bada Fan hun ji.
sukriya
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 04:54:48 PM »
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yun ke ye kesa expression tha !!
Kasak------dil ki  Usual SmileUsual Smile btao
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 05:06:32 PM »
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jo dil ne feel kiya wo hi express kar diya KB....
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2011, 05:14:23 PM »
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oohhhhhh guud.
wese ek galti ho gai iss post me:(
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2011, 05:15:57 PM »
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KB jee Aaadaab!

Achche ahsaas o khayaal hai..
behad khuburat... Daad kabool kijiye..

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile          

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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2011, 09:28:32 AM »
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bahut khub bahut khub KBC....ji matlab KBji...

daad kubul karen
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wah
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Waah bahut khoob likha hai kilbill ji,,
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