Aadat hai Hume - shikha

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Ek alag si muskurane ki aadat hai hume,
Durd ko aankho mai chhipakar rakhne ki aadat hai hume,
Hum sabkuch luta dete hai pyar mai apne,
Kyoki Pyar ki aisi wafae nibhane ki aadat hai hume.
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2015, 07:26:27 PM »
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Very nice shikha jee.....sundar ehsaas
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2015, 08:18:07 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2015, 08:43:42 PM »
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Ek alag si muskurane ki aadat hai hume,
Durd ko aankho mai chhipakar rakhne ki aadat hai hume,
Hum sabkuch luta dete hai pyar mai apne,
Kyoki Pyar ki aisi wafae nibhane ki aadat hai hume.
 
Shikha


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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2015, 10:22:55 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2015, 01:27:32 AM »
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Ek alag si muskurane ki aadat hai hume,
Durd ko aankho mai chhipakar rakhne ki aadat hai hume,
Hum sabkuch luta dete hai pyar mai apne,
Kyoki Pyar ki aisi wafae nibhane ki aadat hai hume.
 
Shikha

bahut bahut khoobsurat waah, Shikha Jee.
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2015, 09:58:52 AM »
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Ek alag si muskurane ki aadat hai hume,
Durd ko aankho mai chhipakar rakhne ki aadat hai hume,
Hum sabkuch luta dete hai pyar mai apne,
Kyoki Pyar ki aisi wafae nibhane ki aadat hai hume.
 
Shikha



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boss!!!!!!!!

i do appreciate the concept of your idea and i believe that there is potential in you to improvise your composition in proper manner so please try to compose accordingly then it will take a  proper shape of poem and look wonderful in reading.



   ek alag see muskuraane ke aadat hai hame.N.
   ke dard ko chhupaane kee aadat hai ham.N.
  
    sab kuchh lutaa dete hain pyaar me.N hum.
    ke pyaar me.N vafaa nibhaane kee aadat hai ham.N
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2015, 12:12:48 PM »
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beautiful thinking shikha ji and very well written qalb boss..

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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2015, 04:19:43 PM »
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Thanks vinery..
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2015, 06:23:17 PM »
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Very nice shikha jee.....sundar ehsaas

Thanks aruji
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वाह वाह... बहुत खूब शिखा जी।

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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2015, 01:41:04 AM »
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very nice

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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2015, 12:50:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoobsurat waah, Shikha Jee.
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«Reply #14 on: August 21, 2015, 04:37:44 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!

i do appreciate the concept of your idea and i believe that there is potential in you to improvise your composition in proper manner so please try to compose accordingly then it will take a  proper shape of poem and look wonderful in reading.



   ek alag see muskuraane ke aadat hai hame.N.
   ke dard ko chhupaane kee aadat hai ham.N.
 
    sab kuchh lutaa dete hain pyaar me.N hum.
    ke pyaar me.N vafaa nibhaane kee aadat hai ham.N

Thanks qalbji and. Nice changes
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