<>*Aadat si ho gai hai*<>

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<>*Aadat si ho gai hai*<>

Sath tera paake kuch aur nikhar gai hai
Meri zindagiko ab teri aadat si ho gai hai

Subah ki hoti hai shuruwat tere sath se
Raat me tujhe dekhne ki aadat si ho gai hai

Sochti rehti hun ghanton tere hi bare me
Ab tujhe sochte rehne ki aadat si ho gai hai

Na mile tu to lagti hai kuch kami si har jagah
Tere sath jeene ki mujhe chahut ho gai hai

Koi chhin na le tujhe mujhse kisi bhi tarah
Ab iss baat se darne ki aadat si ho gai hai

Tu hi meri khushi tu hi muskaan hai meri
Tujhe hothon pe sajane ki ab aadat si ho gai hai…!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2010, 03:21:07 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob di..Kitni mohobat hai iss kalam main..MashAllah bahaut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2010, 03:47:33 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aapke is kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal behad umdaa hai jee....
par humari aur se aapko koi daad nahi milne wali ...
KyuN ki humare bataye huye tarike per nahi likha hai aapne..

So keep tring.....
Keep smiling.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile    

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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2010, 07:25:56 PM »
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aapne bade khoobsurat andaaz me apna ye poem likha hai.. kuch yaad dila diya mujhe is post ne.. kuch bahut khaas, kuch apna sa... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


mujhe bhi ab un gulaab ke pankhudiyon ko,
apne hothon se chhune ki aadat ho gayi hai,

tumhaare julfon ke ghane chaaon me jaake,
unme gum ho jaane ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

haath jab rakhta hoon apne sharir pe main,
tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

maano aaj khamoshi bhi kuch kehti ho mujhse,
tumhaare geet gaane ki chaahat si ho gayi hai,

ye aadat buri hai iska ilm hai mujhe magar,
khudko kharaab karne ki aadat ho gayi hai...
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2010, 07:41:10 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwww kapil so ramantic happy3 happy3........
maza aagaya padhke... Applause Applause Applause
ye khayal kuch iss tarah bhi aate honge na uss ladki k dil me jiski tumhe aadat ho gai hai...
dekho zara kaise hain.....

Tum sang roz bahek jane ki aadat si ho gai hai
Naye naye spne sajane ki aadat si ho gai hai

Teri bahon k majboot bandhan me kaskar
Sab kuch bhul jane ki aadat si ho gai hai

Saanson ki shehnai jab bajti hai kaanon me mere
Dulhan ki tarah saj jane ki aadat si ho gai hai

Jis tarah chute ho tum mujhe pyaar se
Khudko waise pyaar karne ki aadat si ho gai hai

Khayalon me aakar tere ee mere jaane jaan
Tujhe gudgudane ki aadat si ho gai hai….!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2010, 07:53:14 PM »
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ek dum mastammmmmmmm.... bilkul waisi hi jaisa ki hamari "Kasak" likha karti hai... mast ....
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haan sach kaha aapne kuch khayaal isi tarha ka aata hai... aur bahut achcha lagta hai un khayalon me kho jaanaa... kuch add karna chahunga main...

haan sach me kuch is tarha ki aadat si ho gayi hai,
ki ab humein khud se jaise mohabbat si ho gayi hai,

haathon ko apne baar baar dekhta hoon main ab,
unhe tumhaara samajh chumne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

hothon pe apne ungliyaan kuch is tarha ferta hoon,
unme tumhaare hothon ki narmi
mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

baahen failaa ke hawaa se baatein karta hoon main,
hawaon me tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

aaine me roz apni aankhon ko dekhta hoon main,
apni aankhon me tumhe dekhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

tum se milke kuch is tarha ki aadat si ho gayi hai,
ki ab humein khud se jaise mohabbat si ho gayi hai...
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2010, 08:01:07 PM »
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uffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff..................
kya mastttttttttttt feel hai ye......... happy3 happy3 love4 love4

chalo aage badhati hun ise hi....

Khayalon me tere rehne ki aadat si ho gai hai
Ab hume sochterehne ki aadat si ho gai hai

Halki si sihrun aur ek anjani kampan hoti hai
Ab hume iss sihrun ki aadat si ho gai hai

Sunte rehte hain teri awaaz hum ghanton tak
Ab use sunte h rehne ki aadat si ho gai hai

So jaya kartethe hum akle h kai bar tanha se
Ab tere seene se lag kar sone ki aadat si ho gai hai

Saanson ki garmahut aur wo bheeni mahek
Hume khudko usse mehkane ki aadat si ho gai hai

Hathon me jab liya tha tumne hath hamara
Uss sarasarahut ki hume aadat si ho gai hai

Hothon ko chhuke jis tarah tum madhosh kiya karte ho
Hume uss nashe me dube rehne ki aadat si ho gai hai

Khudko karke tumhare hawale hum bhul jayen
Tumme khudko kho dene ki hume aadat si ho gai hai…!!!


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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2010, 08:59:35 PM »
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mera to mast hai par aapka mastammmmmmmmmmmm....
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bahut bahut achcha likha hai aapne... too good hai ji....

tumhaari har wo baat humein achchi lagti hai,
tumse hui hamaaari har mulaquat achchi lagti hai,

kho jaate hain tumse milke tumhaare khayaalon me,
tumhe dekh tum me hi kho jaana achcha lagta hai,

khushboo tumhaare saanson ki mehsoos karta hoon main,
aur us khushboo se mehek jaana achcha lagta hai,

aadhi aadhi raat ko jo tadap uth_ti hai seene me,
use apne chaahat se bujhaana achcha lagta hai,

tumhaari dhadkano ko apne seene me mehsoos karta hoon,
aur tumhe seene se laga lena achcha lagta hai,

kai baar apne hothon se chhua hai maine tumhe,
tumhaare hothon ko chumna achcha lagta hai,

jab nashe me mere pyaar ke jhoomti ho tum jaana,
us nashe me tumhare sang jhumna achcha lagta hai,

tumhe baahon me bharke bhul jaate hain saara jahaan,
tumhaare mohabbat me gum ho jaana achcha lagta hai,

haan sach me tumhaare pyaar ko paake jaise sab paa liya,
aankh band kar ke tumhaare baahon me so jaana achcha lagta ha,

dur hoon tumse par tumhe mehsoos karta hoon har jagah,
tumhaare hi mohabbat me khoye rehna achcha lagta hai...
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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2010, 09:50:32 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        KASAK...DIL KI JI...

TERE HI KHAYALON MEIN MERI ZINDAGI KHO GAY HAI
IK PAL BHI BIN TERE MERI AANKHEN NAM HO GAYI HAI
SACH KAHETA HUN TERE BIN KUCH SOCH NAHIN SAKHTA
IS QADAR MUJHE AB TERI "AADAT SI HO GAI HAI"...
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2010, 10:17:00 AM »
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dekho anu ji orrr kapil ji aap dono milkar dusra maha kavya na ban dena~
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«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2010, 04:15:07 PM »
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hehehhe... aap kahen to hum ruk jaate hain.. kya aisi koi ichcha hai aapki ki hum na likhen ... tongue3

dekho anu ji orrr kapil ji aap dono milkar dusra maha kavya na ban dena~
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2010, 04:15:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

hhmm
Wah Kya Aadatein Hain Ji.
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aap Dono Ne
Kasak Ji Aur Hriday Ji...

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2010, 07:04:01 AM »
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hehehhe... aap kahen to hum ruk jaate hain.. kya aisi koi ichcha hai aapki ki hum na likhen ... tongue3


are sir gustakhi maaf....eisi koi ikchha nhi he sahab....hamesha yuhi likhte rahiyeee~
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2010, 09:44:51 AM »
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ok ji... shukriya... Usual Smile

are sir gustakhi maaf....eisi koi ikchha nhi he sahab....hamesha yuhi likhte rahiyeee~
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