Aaena Hai Dil Mera "Khwaish"

by khwaish on November 03, 2010, 08:22:39 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 03, 2010, 02:52:04 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Kia khoob ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai janab.....
Bahot umdaa..... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob kahe hai ..
Dil se daad kabool kijiye....

Aise hi khoob likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: November 03, 2010, 05:36:27 PM »
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Khwaish Bhai... Lijiye Wada Poora Kiya.. Koshish Ki Hai.. Ummid Hai aapko Pasand aayegi..!!!



Ek Armaan Liye Raaton Ko, Bahak Sa Jaata Hoon Main,
Hai Tamanna Uska Aaina Ban Jana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Har Lamha Deedar Karun Uska Sajte Aur Sanwarte Hue,
Bas Isi Ek Bahaane Uska, Ho Jana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Jab Dekh Khud Ko Palken Jhuka Sharma Si Jaaye Wo,
Is Ek Ada Pe Sau-Sau Baar Marna Chaahta Hoon Main....

Jab Dekh Mujh Me Adhron Ko, Surkhi Se Sajaaye Wo,
Un Labon Pe Nishaan Apne, Banaana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Bheegi Zulfen Bikhere Jab Saamne Mere Itaraaye Wo,
Bemausam Ki Is Baarish Me Bheegna Chaahta Hoon Main....

Tanha Akele Jab Saamne Mere, Khud Kamsini Bikhraye Wo,
Us Ek Lamha Baahon Me Uski, Samaana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Ek Armaan Liye Raaton Ko, Bahak Sa Jaata Hoon Main,
Hai Tamanna Uska Aaina Ban Jana Chaahta Hoon Main.....!!!




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«Reply #17 on: November 03, 2010, 05:37:37 PM »
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Anamika Ji & Koyal Sis.. Aapne bhi Lajawab Likha hai.. Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #18 on: November 03, 2010, 05:48:15 PM »
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mannn ji...kya likha hai aapne wahhhhh..sach much khumaar chha gaya padhke..wakai khumaaar e ishq me aap lajawab ho....
best of the besttt
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«Reply #19 on: November 03, 2010, 05:52:57 PM »
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Behad Shukriya Anamika ji.. Ki Aapko Mere Ehasaas Pasand aaye..  notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #20 on: November 03, 2010, 08:46:47 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ek dum mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............. hai na .............

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 03, 2010, 11:02:42 AM

Dekh kar aks mera tere dil k aaine me
Ek surur sa chha jaya karta hai aksar mujhe

Bht haseen hun main ye gumaan hota hai
Khudpe  hi bht gurrurr aa jata hai mujhe

Lehrein tapakar saahil k paas hi aati hai jaise
Teri bahon ne yun harpal pukara hai mujhe

Chaand aasmaan ka hai fika mere husn k aage
Isily zameen ka chaand kehkar pukara hai tune mujhe

Khudko kho diya hai maine tujhse ek baar nazar milake
Teri aankhon ne wo maiy ka pyaala pilaya hai mujhe

Yakeen hai mujhe bhi ye khwaishon ka rang nikhrega ek din
Kasak apne dil ki banake tune dil me sajaya hai jo mujhe…!!!
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«Reply #21 on: November 03, 2010, 09:16:41 PM »
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Vikas bhaijan, Koyal di aur Anamika di..

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«Reply #22 on: November 04, 2010, 04:46:25 AM »
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Quote from: ~~Hriday~~ on November 03, 2010, 08:46:47 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ek dum mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............. hai na .............


thnkuuuuuuuuu dil ji.....
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«Reply #23 on: November 04, 2010, 04:46:46 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 03, 2010, 09:16:41 PM
Vikas bhaijan, Koyal di aur Anamika di..

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thnx rahim.....
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«Reply #24 on: November 04, 2010, 07:28:42 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 03, 2010, 09:13:30 AM
Haye haye mohobat..
Bada qatilana ehsaas hai..
Main toh loot gaya iss nazm parr..
Dost baar baar parrne ko jee chaha hai..
Kya baat hai yaar..
Bahaut bahaut maza aya..
Kisi ki yaad dila gaya..
bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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Tehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Dillllllllllllllllll Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim..aapne itna pasand kiya..bahut bahut shukriya aapka dost!!

Bas Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: November 04, 2010, 11:09:36 AM »
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WAH wah wah Maan-bhai...kya khoob lika hai....maan gaye ustaad....
Wo din yaad aa gaye jab tum Pooja-di k saath likhte they.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jaane-mann Tune ye kya saaj chhed diya
Dil mai soye huye armaano ko jaga diya

Darti hu kahin behak na jaaun aaj mein
Aa-aakar tu mujhe lele apni baahon mein


Quote from: Mann on November 03, 2010, 05:36:27 PM
Khwaish Bhai... Lijiye Wada Poora Kiya.. Koshish Ki Hai.. Ummid Hai aapko Pasand aayegi..!!!



Ek Armaan Liye Raaton Ko, Bahak Sa Jaata Hoon Main,
Hai Tamanna Uska Aaina Ban Jana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Har Lamha Deedar Karun Uska Sajte Aur Sanwarte Hue,
Bas Isi Ek Bahaane Uska, Ho Jana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Jab Dekh Khud Ko Palken Jhuka Sharma Si Jaaye Wo,
Is Ek Ada Pe Sau-Sau Baar Marna Chaahta Hoon Main....

Jab Dekh Mujh Me Adhron Ko, Surkhi Se Sajaaye Wo,
Un Labon Pe Nishaan Apne, Banaana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Bheegi Zulfen Bikhere Jab Saamne Mere Itaraaye Wo,
Bemausam Ki Is Baarish Me Bheegna Chaahta Hoon Main....

Tanha Akele Jab Saamne Mere, Khud Kamsini Bikhraye Wo,
Us Ek Lamha Baahon Me Uski, Samaana Chaahta Hoon Main....

Ek Armaan Liye Raaton Ko, Bahak Sa Jaata Hoon Main,
Hai Tamanna Uska Aaina Ban Jana Chaahta Hoon Main.....!!!




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«Reply #26 on: November 04, 2010, 02:23:52 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 03, 2010, 09:16:41 PM
Vikas bhaijan, Koyal di aur Anamika di..

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rahim Bhai.. Usual Smile



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«Reply #27 on: November 04, 2010, 02:36:27 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 04, 2010, 11:09:36 AM
WAH wah wah Maan-bhai...kya khoob lika hai....maan gaye ustaad....
Wo din yaad aa gaye jab tum Pooja-di k saath likhte they.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jaane-mann Tune ye kya saaj chhed diya
Dil mai soye huye armaano ko jaga diya

Darti hu kahin behak na jaaun aaj mein
Aa-aakar tu mujhe lele apni baahon mein

Koyal Sis.. Behad Shukriya is Sweet Si Taareef ke liye.. Jitni Pyaari tum Ho Utni Hi Pyari Tumhari Baaten Hain.. aur Haan.. Pooja, Divya, Nikhaar, Ranjana, Punam, Chitra, Shikha, Shally In Sab ko Kafi Miss karta hoon.. Inke sath Likhne Ka Maza hi kuch aur Hota Hai..!! Waqai wo Waqt Bahut Miss karta Hoon..!!

Aur Tumne Yeh Chaar Line bhi Behad Khubsoorat Likhi Hain...  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Tere Bahakne Se Yeh Mausam Aur Sard Ho Jaayega,
Phir Tujhe Aagosh Me Liye Bagair, Raha Na Jaayega...

Barfeele Fiza Ke Jhoke Phir, Chedenge Mere Jism Ko,
Teri Saanson Ki Garmaaish Bin Phir Raha Na Jaayega...!!




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«Reply #28 on: November 04, 2010, 02:44:15 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 04, 2010, 11:09:36 AM
WAH wah wah Maan-bhai...kya khoob lika hai....maan gaye ustaad....
Wo din yaad aa gaye jab tum Pooja-di k saath likhte they.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jaane-mann Tune ye kya saaj chhed diya
Dil mai soye huye armaano ko jaga diya

Darti hu kahin behak na jaaun aaj mein
Aa-aakar tu mujhe lele apni baahon mein



MAST LIKHA HAI KOYALIYA.....GUD GOING RE
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«Reply #29 on: November 04, 2010, 02:44:54 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on November 04, 2010, 02:36:27 PM
Koyal Sis.. Behad Shukriya is Sweet Si Taareef ke liye.. Jitni Pyaari tum Ho Utni Hi Pyari Tumhari Baaten Hain.. aur Haan.. Pooja, Divya, Nikhaar, Ranjana, Punam, Chitra, Shikha, Shally In Sab ko Kafi Miss karta hoon.. Inke sath Likhne Ka Maza hi kuch aur Hota Hai..!! Waqai wo Waqt Bahut Miss karta Hoon..!!

Aur Tumne Yeh Chaar Line bhi Behad Khubsoorat Likhi Hain...  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Tere Bahakne Se Yeh Mausam Aur Sard Ho Jaayega,
Phir Tujhe Aagosh Me Liye Bagair, Raha Na Jaayega...

Barfeele Fiza Ke Jhoke Phir, Chedenge Mere Jism Ko,
Teri Saanson Ki Garmaaish Bin Phir Raha Na Jaayega...!!




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AAPKI TO JITNI TAREEF KAREN KUM HAI MAAN JI.....SUPERBBBBBB LINBES...AND FEELINGS
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