Aaena Hai Dil Mera "Khwaish"

by khwaish on November 03, 2010, 08:22:39 AM
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«Reply #30 on: November 07, 2010, 06:15:19 AM »
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Tariff ka shukriya ji.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Mann-bhai.....miss tou hum bhi bahut karte hain un sab ko....bahut pyaara likhte they sab.....Mahiya urf Shikha ki tou baat he aur thee...
Delhi jaisi ek milan-goshti ka aayojan karna chahiye...Raajveerji-Admin ko Vikkyji  kehiye naa aap.... hello2 hello2 hello2

Shokhiyon Mein Ghola Jaaye, Phoolon Ka Shabaab
Usmein Phir Milaayee Jaaye, Thodi Si Sharaab
Ussme milaao phir Pooja, Divya, Nikhaar, Ranjana,
Punam, Chitra, Shikha, Shally In Sab ki kalmo ka pyaar
Phir hoga jo nashaa tayiyaar....khumaar he khumaar....
Wahi hai meri Anamika-di ke kalam ki dhaarrrrrr.....
Mann dekhna kahin tum ho na jaao....shikaar...
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Quote from: Mann on November 04, 2010, 02:36:27 PM
Koyal Sis.. Behad Shukriya is Sweet Si Taareef ke liye.. Jitni Pyaari tum Ho Utni Hi Pyari Tumhari Baaten Hain.. aur Haan.. Pooja, Divya, Nikhaar, Ranjana, Punam, Chitra, Shikha, Shally In Sab ko Kafi Miss karta hoon.. Inke sath Likhne Ka Maza hi kuch aur Hota Hai..!! Waqai wo Waqt Bahut Miss karta Hoon..!!

Aur Tumne Yeh Chaar Line bhi Behad Khubsoorat Likhi Hain...  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Tere Bahakne Se Yeh Mausam Aur Sard Ho Jaayega,
Phir Tujhe Aagosh Me Liye Bagair, Raha Na Jaayega...

Barfeele Fiza Ke Jhoke Phir, Chedenge Mere Jism Ko,
Teri Saanson Ki Garmaaish Bin Phir Raha Na Jaayega...!!




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«Reply #31 on: November 07, 2010, 09:02:57 AM »
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Hahahaha.. Wah wah wah.. Kya baat Hai Koyal Sis.. Lajawab Joda hai har Naam.. aur Bahut Accha bhi likha hai.. Waqai Yeh wo log hain jinki Yo ko Humesha Kami Khalti hai.. !!  icon_thumleft

Par Yeh Raajveer Bhai aur Admin to samajh aa gaye... Par yeh Vicky Kaun Hai.. ? Vicky to Main khud Hoon.. ab main Mujh se hi kaise bolun.. Hahahaha.. Lekin haaan.. Ek Get-Togather Hona Chahiye.. Main Zaroor is Subject par baat karunga.. !!  Thumbs UP

Luv U sis.. Humesha Khush raho..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #32 on: November 07, 2010, 09:04:31 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 04, 2010, 02:44:54 PM
AAPKI TO JITNI TAREEF KAREN KUM HAI MAAN JI.....SUPERBBBBBB LINBES...AND FEELINGS

Anamika ji Main Tahe dil Se Aapka Shukraguzaar Hoon..!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #33 on: November 07, 2010, 09:11:23 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 07, 2010, 06:15:19 AM
Tariff ka shukriya ji.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Mann-bhai.....miss tou hum bhi bahut karte hain un sab ko....bahut pyaara likhte they sab.....Mahiya urf Shikha ki tou baat he aur thee...
Delhi jaisi ek milan-goshti ka aayojan karna chahiye...Raajveerji-Admin ko Vikkyji ko kehiye naa aap.... hello2 hello2 hello2

Shokhiyon Mein Ghola Jaaye, Phoolon Ka Shabaab
Usmein Phir Milaayee Jaaye, Thodi Si Sharaab
Ussme milaao phir Pooja, Divya, Nikhaar, Ranjana,
Punam, Chitra, Shikha, Shally In Sab ki kalmo ka pyaar
Phir hoga jo nashaa tayiyaar....khumaar he khumaar....
Wahi hai meri Anamika-di ke kalam ki dhaarrrrrr.....
Mann dekhna kahin tum ho na jaao....shikaar...
Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle




hahhahaha...mast likha hai gudiya tumne....lekin bht zyada bol gai shoni....main inn sab k samne kuch nahin hun..maine padha hai sabko and i m at the least..agar main 1% bhi inn jaisa likh paun to khudko bht lucky samjhungi...lekin thnx guddu itna pyaar dene k liye.....thnx a lot.....
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«Reply #34 on: November 07, 2010, 11:38:16 AM »
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Are Anamika ji Koyal Sahi Kaha rahi hai.. Aap Beintehaan Khubsoorat Likhti hain.. Aap Yahan Hain to Lagta hai Ek Khubsoorat Shayara Hai Yahan.. Jo Apne Alfaazon Se Har ek ko apne Sath Likhne Ko Majboor kar deti hai.. aur Poora Sath bhi deti hai..!!!

Aap 1% Nahi.. aap apna 100% Deti hain aur aapka naam Bhi in sab me Shamil hai.. Bas yuhi Sath dete Rahiyega..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Qalam Teri Alfaaz Kuch Aise Sajaati Hai,
Har Sher Mehfil Ki Bas Jaan Ban Jaati Hai....

Tu Hai To Roshan Hai Har Zarra Yahan Ka,
Bin Tere Yeh Mehfil Sooni Nazar Aati Hai....!!!




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«Reply #35 on: November 07, 2010, 11:40:54 AM »
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Vikky-bhai..... likha tha..."Raajveerji-Admin ko Vikkyji  kehiye naa aap."......ek" ko" jayada type ho gaya tha.....Samjha karo.......ye kyu socha k hum aapko Vikky  ke naam se nahi jaante....

Quote from: Mann on November 07, 2010, 09:02:57 AM
Hahahaha.. Wah wah wah.. Kya baat Hai Koyal Sis.. Lajawab Joda hai har Naam.. aur Bahut Accha bhi likha hai.. Waqai Yeh wo log hain jinki Yo ko Humesha Kami Khalti hai.. !!  icon_thumleft

Par Yeh Raajveer Bhai aur Admin to samajh aa gaye... Par yeh Vicky Kaun Hai.. ? Vicky to Main khud Hoon.. ab main Mujh se hi kaise bolun.. Hahahaha.. Lekin haaan.. Ek Get-Togather Hona Chahiye.. Main Zaroor is Subject par baat karunga.. !!  Thumbs UP

Luv U sis.. Humesha Khush raho..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #36 on: November 07, 2010, 12:08:10 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on November 07, 2010, 11:38:16 AM
Are Anamika ji Koyal Sahi Kaha rahi hai.. Aap Beintehaan Khubsoorat Likhti hain.. Aap Yahan Hain to Lagta hai Ek Khubsoorat Shayara Hai Yahan.. Jo Apne Alfaazon Se Har ek ko apne Sath Likhne Ko Majboor kar deti hai.. aur Poora Sath bhi deti hai..!!!

Aap 1% Nahi.. aap apna 100% Deti hain aur aapka naam Bhi in sab me Shamil hai.. Bas yuhi Sath dete Rahiyega..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Qalam Teri Alfaaz Kuch Aise Sajaati Hai,
Har Sher Mehfil Ki Bas Jaan Ban Jaati Hai....

Tu Hai To Roshan Hai Har Zarra Yahan Ka,
Bin Tere Yeh Mehfil Sooni Nazar Aati Hai....!!!




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ab main kya kahun.......shukriya mann ji itni izzat afzai k liye...bas koshish karungi hamesha achcha likhne ki and sth dene ki.....baki rub di marzi....
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«Reply #37 on: November 08, 2010, 03:27:19 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 03, 2010, 09:18:35 AM
Bahut hi wadiya likheya hai khwaish ji...

Thankyou Ji..

Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much!!!
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«Reply #38 on: October 19, 2011, 01:16:38 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on November 03, 2010, 09:32:41 AM
Khwaish Bhai Aap To Bas Sharminda Hi Kar dete Hain Itni Taareef karke.. Are aapki Qalam Ke Kad ke Aage Humaari Qalam Bahut Choti hai Bhai.. tongue3

Zaroor Kuch Likhunga Bhai aapne Itne Dil se Kaha hai to.. par Abhi dil Thoda Udaas Hai.. Mohabbat Ke Liye Alfaaz Nahi Milenge.. Par Jald Hi Likhunga aapki is Thread Par..!!! Usual Smile



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Aisa Kuch Nahi Vikas Bhai, Dil Se Likhi Har Cheez Khoobsurat Hi Hoti Hai, Usse Koi Tol-Mol Nahi Kar Sakta..

Zaroor Likhiye, Hum Aaj Bhi Intzaar Kar Rahe Hai icon_flower
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«Reply #39 on: October 20, 2011, 08:43:07 AM »
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Aaj jab dekha Dil k Aaene mai tou kaffi purani yaadein taazaa ho gayi......Woh bhi kya din they...
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«Reply #40 on: December 15, 2011, 01:01:28 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 03, 2010, 09:13:30 AM
Haye haye mohobat..
Bada qatilana ehsaas hai..
Main toh loot gaya iss nazm parr..
Dost baar baar parrne ko jee chaha hai..
Kya baat hai yaar..
Bahaut bahaut maza aya..
Kisi ki yaad dila gaya..
bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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Aapka tehhhh Dil Se Shukriya Dost rahim!!!! icon_flower icon_flower
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