Aag !!!!!!!!

by NSK143 on July 11, 2004, 04:58:51 AM
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1.Aag si Lag jahti hai jub Naam koi tumhara layta hai
Hum tho soch ker hi mar jahtey hain jub naam koi tumhara layta hai

2.Tum se duur ho ker bhi jeena par raha hai
yeh zahar ka gout pina par raha hai
Sochtey hain kabhi kay mar hi jahe
Per tera soch ker jeena par raha hai

3. ishq mein mat socho kitna pyar kerna hai
jitna bhi kerlo pyar phir bhi zara kam lagna hai




1. Samne nahi to kiya Meri rooh mein tho shamil ho aap
Aaine mein nahi to kiya meri aakhoon mein tho laazim ho aap


2. duniya kay hazaaro situm sehraha hoon
Bus eik teri hi aas per jeeraha hoon


3.Qabar per leta tha mara nahi tha phir ku gaarda
Mein tho tere Intezar mein leta tha phir ku gaarda
Aap kay hillane per hilla bhi tha mein phir ku gaarda
Ab gaard hi diya jo aap nah ab utt ker chale bhi jaho
Ab gaard ker roote aur tarapte ho tho phir ku gaarda



Tum


Tum kiya ho mere liyeh Huh?Huh???


Tum Mohabbat ho
Tum Ibbadat ho
Tum Chahat ho
Tum Shararaat ho
Tum Masoom ho
Tum Kaamsin ho
Tum Nazuk ho
Tum Ghazal ho
Tum Subha ho
Tum Dhalti Shaam ho
Tum Raat Ki Chandni ho
Tum Khuaab ho
Tum Duwa ho
Tum Dawa ho
Tum Ishq ho
Tum Musq ho
Tum Pyaas ho
Tum Nayaab ho
Tum Haaya Ho
Tum Phool ho
Tum Badal ho
Tum Sawan ho
Tum Aag ho
Tum Pani ho
Tum hawa ho
Tum Ansoo ho
Tum khushi ho
Tum zindagi ho
Tum Bandagi ho
Tum Dharken ho
Tum Sakoon ho
Tum Kasam ho
Tum Yaar ho
Tum Pyar ho
Tum Dost ho
Tum Pakizah ho
Tum Geet ho
Tum sangeet ho
Tum saaz ho
Tum Awaz ho
Tum Khamoshi ho
Tum Deewangee ho
Tum Awargi ho
Tum Khubsuraat ho
Tum Sachayi ho
Tum Kismat ho
Tum Intezar ho
Tum Jaan ho
Tum Imaan ho

Tum Tum Tum Meri jaan ho Nsk



Aashiq hoon mein teri Aashiqi chahta hoon
Mohabbat hai tu Meri Thordi wafa chahta hoon
Sath rehna hai,tere Dil mein thordi jahga chahta hoon
Jo margaya mein pehle,Apne sath Tera maakbara chahta hoon



2. Kerti hai jo mohabbat tho bhag mere sath
Marti hai tu mujper tho bhag mere sath
Darti nahi kisi sey tho bhag mere sath
Sath jo mere chaho tho bhag mere sath


3.Mohabbat ko Mohabbat sey samjaho tum
Yeh bohot nazuk hai zara pyar dilbehlaho tum
Kero gi naraaz mohabbat ko to jii na paho gi tum
Bohot tarpo gi aur aant mein mar jaho gi tum

4. Humse duur ho ker kasie jeetey hogay tum
Kitna tarapte hogey ,kitna roote hogay tum

5. Itna na tarpo kay meri jaan chali jahe
itna na rooya kero kay meri aakhein surrk hojahe



Aag jo dil mein lagi hai woh tujko dekhani hai
Aaj apni puri kahani tujko aram sey sunani hai
Sunker puri tumhein yeh andaza lagana hai
ishq Mera tere aashiqo mein kis number pay aana hai



Teri yaad aayi aur dil tarap uttha aaj phir
Teri kuch baat yaad aayi aur dil tarap uttha aaj phir
Teri woh mulakat yaad aayi aur dil tarap uttha aaj phir
Teri eik aada yaad aayi aur dil tarap uttha aaj phir
Teri Gali sey guzana yaad aaya aur dil tarap uttha aaj phir
Teri Yaad phir Yaad aayi aur yeh dil tarap uttha aaj phir



2.meri zindagi mein tho bus raat hi raat hai abhi mazze kahan
Abhi sahar hone mein baki zara waqt hai abhi mazze kahan


3. Hum neh tho ab peena hi chord diya aane kay baad
Zindagi neh ab jeena chord diya aane kay baad
Ji tho jahe zindagi per kasie jeeye hum
tu nah humse jo Aachanak milna hi chord diya
Bhag jahta tho Zindagi shayad sawar jati meri
Bhagne ka bol ker tu nah jo bhagana hi chord diya


4. Woh jaane ka manzar na bhul paahunga mein



Woh tera seene per saar rak ker roona yaad aata hai
Woh tera roote roote mujhe Hasana yaad aata hai
Woh tera aakhri bar milna yaad aata hai
Woh mera chup kay tere ghar sey nikalna yaad aata hai


guzara hi nahi hai ab tere bina
kahi guzar hi nah jahoo mein tere bina




Teri suraat kay siwa kuch bhata nahi
Teri mohabbat kay agay ab mein kuch chahta nahi


Yaad teri jub aati hai aag si dil mein lagjahti hai
Kis tarah bhujhe gi yeh aag jo bina matchis kay jal jahti hai


Itna rooya hoon teri yaad mein kay ab soona hi chord diya
Itna tarpa hoon teri pyaas mein kay ab jeena hi chord diya

Kosish kerta hoon roz kay aaj aur jeesakoon
Jeene ka soch ker hi teri yaad aagayi
Aate hi teri yaad phir jeena hi chord diya


Lik tho doon tujhe apne dil ka haal Sahar
per sochta hoon likhoon tho kaise likhoon
lik diya tujko jo apna dil ka haal
Sunte hi mere dil ka haal kiya hoga haal e dil tera
Yeh sochkay hi Sochta hoon kia likhoon apne dil ka haal




Dil tak mere tere dil ki ek awaaz aati hai
Aaj phir teri mujhe bohot yaad aati hai
pata nahi kaise guzar rahi hogi zindagi ko tu
teri zindagi ka soch ker mujhe teri zindagi yaad aati hai


Khayal koi aaye to khojahtein hain
aankhon mein dard ho to rojahtein hain
neend waise to nahi aati humein sahar
khayaloon mein tum aaogi yehi sooch kar so lete hai



Eik tere chehre sey yeh dil kabhi bharta nahi
Eik tere chehre Pay koi aur chehra jagta nahi
Eik tera chehra meri nazaroon sey hahta nahi
Eik tera chehre Jisko mein ab bhulsakta nahi


In zulfoo ko ruppatey kay peeche na daalo
qayamat dhati hain yeh zulfein Tere chehre pay


Apni zulfoon ko na bhanda kero sahar
Itna zulm o situm na humper dhaya kero sahar
Hum tho aashiq hain sahar teri aadaho kay
Ab apni aadahein humse na chupaya kero


Eik woh hain jo tamano kay dusmaan hi bane rahe
eik hum hain jinhe ehsaas e tamana bhi na huwa




eik choti si ghazal aap logo kay nazar

Yaad


Dil ki gheriyo say eik awaz aayi hai
Shayad aaj phir tujhe meri yaad aayi hai
Meri yaad mein tum kahin khona jahna
Meri yaad mein tum kabhi mujhse khaffa hona jahna
Jaanta hoon bohot din sey mein nah baat nahi ki
Kahin yeh soch ker mujhse Judda hona jahna
Waqt mujhe waqt nahi dayta,zindagi mujhe zindagi nahi dayti
Teri yaad mujhe jeene nahi dayti,Tera pyar mujhe marne nahi dayta
Sirf yeh soch ker galti ko mere maaf kerna tum
Mein teri mohbbat ki waja say ab tak zindaa khada hoon


(i hope u guyz like it) Throw ur comments let me know wat ya pplz think abt my work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankz


Mohabbat mein Sari haahdein par chahta hono
Bus eik bar aur tera Dedaar chahta hoon
Has ker sahoon ga zulm o situm duniya kay
Bus eik bar hath mein apne tere mein hath chahta hoon





Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2004, 10:43:04 PM »
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Umm..

Man It is soooo Long.. I have gone throught half of the post yet.. so My these comments are for half..

What I found.. You love some from heart..and that is your inspiration to make you wrote all abve.. Man keep it up..

But frankly , I don't like the  Idea of "Bhag mere Saath"
Anyway... Your TUM is really good..
Look for my more commnets .. ie for other half soon..

One suggestion.. If it could  be divded among 2 or 3 post then you could get good review.. Anyway you can keep that in mind for future..  Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2008, 01:47:57 PM »
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tum kya ho mere liye muje bohat pasand aaya jo dil me aaye liho jis tarah har gane wala mohd rafi nahi hota phir dil se gata hain aur khush rehta hain usi tarah har sher likhne wala ghalib to nahi ho sakta par likh ke khush ho sakta hain write for yourself.

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