Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

by abdbundeli on November 19, 2008, 04:04:55 PM
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Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

            Drushhti apalak, shithil hai gati;
            Adhar pratihat, shithil hai smiti;
            Srast hai sukumaar jyomiti;
            Prakat hai adbhut manah sthiti;
Lag rahey ho aaj kuchh beychain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

            Tum rahey pahiley pahunchatey;
            Nawya divyaalok rachtey;
            Din gayaa, par, yah sakuchtey;
            Jhakoroun sey rahey bachtey!
Nirarthak hi beettee hai rain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

            Kaho, itney khinna kyoun ho?
            Sahajataa sey bhinna kyoun ho?
            Pranaya-path hai: wighna kyoun ho?
            Kshitij tak udwign kyoun ho?
Kab khileyngey fir tumhaarey wain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?  

            Kyaa karoon: kuchh to bataaou?
            Ritu madhur hai: maan jaaou!
            Wyathit hoon, sannikat aaou!
            Muskuraaou! Geet gaaou!!
Mat karo fir sey mujhey beychain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

                    - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'  
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2008, 08:00:43 PM »
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bahoot jayada gehari Hindi ho gai... kai baar parr kar samjh main ayya Abd ji!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2008, 02:31:01 AM »
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bahoot jayada gehari Hindi ho gai... kai baar parr kar samjh main ayya Abd ji!!
Pooja ji!
Most of my works are in Literary Hindi. I've just posted one for an introductory change! I hope, to find at least a dozen  Hindi-knowing readers on yoindia!
                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2013, 12:16:15 AM »
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Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

            Drushhti apalak, shithil hai gati;
            Adhar pratihat, shithil hai smiti;
            Srast hai sukumaar jyomiti;
            Prakat hai adbhut manah sthiti;
Lag rahey ho aaj kuchh beychain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

            Tum rahey pahiley pahunchatey;
            Nawya divyaalok rachtey;
            Din gayaa, par, yah sakuchtey;
            Jhakoroun sey rahey bachtey!
Nirarthak hi beettee hai rain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

            Kaho, itney khinna kyoun ho?
            Sahajataa sey bhinna kyoun ho?
            Pranaya-path hai: wighna kyoun ho?
            Kshitij tak udwign kyoun ho?
Kab khileyngey fir tumhaarey wain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai? 

            Kyaa karoon: kuchh to bataaou?
            Ritu madhur hai: maan jaaou!
            Wyathit hoon, sannikat aaou!
            Muskuraaou! Geet gaaou!!
Mat karo fir sey mujhey beychain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?
Aaj achapal hain tumhaarey nain: tum ko kyaa huaa hai?

                    - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya' 


wow yes you are right. I also think there may be many readers in this forum and read this poem aur shudda hindi ka lufth lenge. (abdbundli ji aapka naam ram prakash garg hai kya?
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2013, 02:13:40 PM »
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wow yes you are right. I also think there may be many readers in this forum and read this poem aur shudda hindi ka lufth lenge. (abdbundli ji aapka naam ram prakash garg hai kya?


Dhanyawaad Suman ji! Main English (G.R.Prakash), Hindi (Ramwatiya) tathaa Urdu (abd bundeli)mein alag-alag 'upnaamoun' sey likhtaa huun! Aap kaa anumaan theek hai, meyraa naam Ram Prakash Garg hai! Kabhi meyree profile par nazar daaliyegaa ('yo' par profile kaa aakhiree peiz)!
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