Aaj ashkon ka taar toot gaya.

by Deepati on December 02, 2008, 05:21:49 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 05, 2008, 05:44:15 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 05, 2008, 05:15:31 PM
good one jas

Thanks JI


GUM ABB TOH JHEL PA RAHE NAHI
JINDAGI KYA JIYEGNEY BAKI
KU MAUT ABB TOH AATI NAHI
KAISEY KATENGEY PAL BAKI


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #16 on: December 07, 2008, 02:46:25 AM »
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Nice Jasbir Ji

Gam hai kyon har khushi kam hai kyon yeh bataa
har ghadi aankh bhi nam hai kyon yeh bataa
hamne kis jurm ki paayi yeh saza yeh bataa
dard se dil ka sangam hai kyon yeh bataa
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«Reply #17 on: December 07, 2008, 03:07:28 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 07, 2008, 02:46:25 AM
Gam hai kyon har khushi kam hai kyon yeh bataa
har ghadi aankh bhi nam hai kyon yeh bataa
hamne kis jurm ki paayi yeh saza yeh bataa
dard se dil ka sangam hai kyon yeh bataa

Deepati ji!
Waah kyaa baat hai!!
Dard hotaa na, to, beydard bhi naheen hotaa!
Garm gar hotaa naheen, sard bhi naheen hotaa!
Dard kee hee hai meyhrbaanee, ki, zindah hain ham,
Maan na hotee to, 'abd', mard bhi naheen hotaa!
                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #18 on: December 08, 2008, 05:10:03 AM »
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Shukriya Abd Ji aur Wah Wah kya khoobsurati se jawaab diya ... Bahut acha likhte hain aap  Applause 
 
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«Reply #19 on: December 08, 2008, 12:02:40 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 07, 2008, 02:46:25 AM
Nice Jasbir Ji

Gam hai kyon har khushi kam hai kyon yeh bataa
har ghadi aankh bhi nam hai kyon yeh bataa
hamne kis jurm ki paayi yeh saza
dard se dil ka sangam hai kyon yeh bata




Thanks Deepti


NA POOCHO HUM SEY DARD KA RISHTA
BHED YEH KHUL JAYEGA
MEHFIL MEH HUMSEY YEH NA POOCHO
NAAM USKA UCHAL JAYEGA


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #20 on: December 08, 2008, 03:41:03 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 08, 2008, 05:10:03 AM
Shukriya Abd Ji aur Wah Wah kya khoobsurati se jawaab diya ... Bahut acha likhte hain aap  Applause
Shukriyah Deepati ji!
Sundar man ho: sundar ko, sundar dikhtaa hai!
Shaayar to shaayar hai: sundar hi likhtaa hai!!
Deeptimaan aankheyn, sab ko sundar dikhteen hain;
Deep pradeepit ho to andhiyaaraa jhuktaa hai!!
                                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #21 on: December 08, 2008, 05:12:45 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 07, 2008, 02:46:25 AM
Nice Jasbir Ji

Gam hai kyon har khushi kam hai kyon yeh bataa
har ghadi aankh bhi nam hai kyon yeh bataa
hamne kis jurm ki paayi yeh saza
dard se dil ka sangam hai kyon yeh bata



Nice Deepati Ji
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Deepati
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«Reply #22 on: December 09, 2008, 08:01:34 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 08, 2008, 05:12:45 PM
Nice Deepati Ji


Thanks Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #23 on: December 09, 2008, 08:04:16 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 08, 2008, 12:02:40 PM

Thanks Deepti


NA POOCHO HUM SEY DARD KA RISHTA
BHED YEH KHUL JAYEGA
MEHFIL MEH HUMSEY YEH NA POOCHO
NAAM USKA UCHAL JAYEGA


JASBIR SINGH



Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

Raaz-e-ulfat ayaan na hone denge
Mahfil mein uska naam badnaam na hone denge
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«Reply #24 on: December 09, 2008, 08:11:35 AM »
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Shukriyah Deepati ji!
Sundar man ho: sundar ko, sundar dikhtaa hai!
Shaayar to shaayar hai: sundar hi likhtaa hai!!
Deeptimaan aankheyn, sab ko sundar dikhteen hain;
Deep pradeepit ho to andhiyaaraa jhuktaa hai!!
                                 - abd bundeli


ABD JI,

WAH WAH BAHUT KHOOB!!

EK BAAR PHIR SE KITANE SUNDER ALFAAZON MEIN BAYAAN KIYA HAI  Usual Smile

AAPKI KALAAM KO DAAD DETI HOON  Applause

AAP YUHIN LIKHTE JAYIYE AUR HAM PADTE JAYENGE!!
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«Reply #25 on: December 09, 2008, 08:18:55 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 09, 2008, 08:04:16 AM

Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

Raaz-e-ulfat ayaan na hone denge
Mahfil mein uska naam badnaam na hone denge

THANKS DEEPATI,
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«Reply #26 on: December 09, 2008, 12:20:12 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 09, 2008, 08:11:35 AM
ABD JI,
WAH WAH BAHUT KHOOB!!
EK BAAR PHIR SE KITANE SUNDER ALFAAZON MEIN BAYAAN KIYA HAI  Usual Smile
AAPKI KALAAM KO DAAD DETI HOON  Applause
AAP YUHIN LIKHTE JAYIYE AUR HAM PADTE JAYENGE!!
Deepati ji!
Aapko rachnaa pasand aayee! Haardik dhanyawaad!
                         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #27 on: December 09, 2008, 12:50:56 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 09, 2008, 08:04:16 AM

Bahut khoob, Jasbir Ji

Raaz-e-ulfat ayaan na hone denge
Mahfil mein uska naam badnaam na hone denge


MEHFIL MEH USKA NAAM NA BADNAAM HONEY DENGEY
HUM KISI KOH BHI USKA NAKAAB NA KHOLNEY DENGEY
PYAR KIA HAI, KARTEY RAHENGEY
KYA HUYA JOH MERA NAAM WOH SAATH NA JUDNEY DENGEY



JASBIR SINGH
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: December 09, 2008, 06:49:37 PM »
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Deepati, Abd ji and Jas nice work all!!
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«Reply #29 on: December 09, 2008, 06:50:46 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 09, 2008, 06:49:37 PM
Deepati, Abd ji and Jas nice work all!!


Thanks JI

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