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Aaj fir unki yaaad aayi hai 'Abhi'
aaj fir khamosh ronaa hoga~
mera dard jaan leti he woh
aaj fir be-dard hasnaa hoga~
mere ansuu dekhegi to royegi bahut
aaj fir pani-pani bhigonaa hoga~
sun leti he wo door se meri sanso ko
aaj fir dil ko khamosh rakhnaa hoga~
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2011, 06:21:29 AM » |
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wahhhhhhhhh nice......
Labon ko see liya hai, juban pathar bana li hai...............
phir use kyu meri khamoshi sone nhi deti...................
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2011, 09:07:54 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2011, 09:08:38 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2011, 09:14:53 AM » |
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wahhhhhhhhh nice......
Labon ko see liya hai, juban pathar bana li hai...............
phir use kyu meri khamoshi sone nhi deti...................
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2011, 09:15:36 AM » |
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Aaj fir unki yaaad aayi hai 'Abhi'
aaj fir khamosh ronaa hoga~
mera dard jaan leti he woh
aaj fir be-dard hasnaa hoga~
mere ansuu dekhegi to royegi bahut
aaj fir pani-pani bhigonaa hoga~
sun leti he wo door se meri sanso ko
aaj fir dil ko khamosh rakhnaa hoga~
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2011, 08:24:10 PM » |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2011, 05:38:58 AM » |
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wahhhhhhhhh nice......
Labon ko see liya hai, juban pathar bana li hai...............
phir use kyu meri khamoshi sone nhi deti...................
thnx bhaiiii.... bahut khoob likha he apne.......mast maja a agaya bhaii.. |
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2011, 05:40:23 AM » |
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kalb ji shukriyaaa....yunhi sath rahiye... |
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2011, 05:41:06 AM » |
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Good One Abhi Ji
sanjeev ji bahut dhanyawad apka .......yunhi sath rahiye.. |
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2011, 05:48:25 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2011, 05:07:17 PM » |
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bahut khub Abhi ji... bas laga ki aur kuch hona chahiye tha... jaldi khatam ho gaya... likhte rehiye... khush rehiye
Intezar !
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2011, 05:11:06 PM » |
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VERY NICE ABHI JI.....
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2011, 04:40:24 AM » |
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sukriyaaaa dosto...
keep posting..
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