aaj is dil ko kya hua jaata hai...

by Gesu on January 05, 2006, 07:59:14 AM
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Aaj is dil ko kya hua jaata hai,
Mera tha abhi tak jo aur ka hua jaata hai,
Zulf bhi ziddi hui bandhne ko tayyar nahi,
Kehti hai is aashiyane mein kisi ko aaj bulaya hai,
Aankh bhi kehti hai kaajal ka aaj kaam nahi,
Haseen nazaaron ke liye kisi ko aaj bulaya hai,
Kaan bhi boley yeh  jhumka aaj na bhaata hai,
Unke hothon se apna naam sunn ne ko pyasa hai,
Kalaayion ko bhi aaj kangan se iteraaz hai,
Haath jo thamenge woh to kangan ki kya saugaat hai,
Payal  bhi kahe aaj mera kaam kya hai,
Hum kadam ne tumhare to aaj aana hai,
Aaj na jaane dil ko kya hua jaata hai....
Abhi tak jo tha mera kisi aur ka hua jaata hai....

Gesu ka dil!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2006, 11:49:14 AM »
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helloooooooooooooo yeh sab yoindians ke liye!!!!!

yeh sab yoindians ko kya hua jata hai,
humne shuru kiya naya thread aur koi nahi aata hai,
kal se lagayenge choclate is shayari mein ,
shayad haale dil sunkar ke sab bore huey jatey hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2006, 11:57:07 AM »
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aaj is dil ko na jane kya hua jata hai ....

sama hai behka behka dil deewana ho jata hai ....

samander me chaiyi hai mahubbat ki masti .....

dol rahi hai patwar sang pyar ki kashti........

aab to halle dil baya kerne ki khawish rahi jati hai ....

tujhe hai milna aab janam bhar k liye ....

bus 2 palo ki bandish baki hai ........
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2006, 03:51:59 PM »
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lo gesu ji aapne pukara or hum chale aaye.................  :oops:
veri nice Gesu ji and tushar bhai...............

Aaaj pata nahi kyun ye dil phir se deewana hua jata hai,
Kehta hai baar baar mujhse ki,
Uski gesuon ki chaon me sone ko jee chahata hai,
Kehta hoon ise mat kar phir se wahi galti,
Par kambakht Dekh k Use phir se Dil machal jata hai.........
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2006, 06:55:52 PM »
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aaj kal tu dil ko sambhala nahi jata
dil ko chupaya nahi jata
dil ke baat bhi na chupaye re saki
kya karen isse kambhakht dil ko jalaya bi nahi jata
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2006, 07:29:46 PM »
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Bilkul hi alag sa thread....Thukrane aur naraaz hone par jo pratikriya hoti hain usse badi khoobi darshaya hain aap logo ne.....
Hey Gesujiii, somehow ur style of writing is very similar to Poojajii..I am not sure.....
Hats off to all u guys/gals....
Keep writing and keep posting....Love to read them all....
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2006, 07:09:49 AM »
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thanks dildaar ji and badnaam ji but kahaan pooja ji kahaan hum...waise pooja ji aap hain kahaan ajkal hum aapki acchi acchi shayari miss kar rahe hain so plz come and share some nice poetry...

Dil jo kahe baar baar kabhi such ho bhi jaata hai,
Saroor mohabbat ka kisi ke dil mein ho bhi sakta hai,
Haseen galtiyon ko dubara doharaya bhi jaata hai,
Kisi ke dil mein mohabbat ka chirag jalaya bhi jaa sakta hai...

Gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2006, 04:53:00 PM »
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Ajj is dil ko kaya hua jaata hai
Uske Chiraag se
mera ghar roshan hua jaata hai
Jhuki ankhon se
madhoshi chup nahi pa rahi
kisne pukara
yah kiski awaz hai aa rahi.....

just try to add some lines from me..Pooja's koshish Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2006, 05:06:03 PM »
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uske aane se hai chirago me bhi roshni..........

khatam hota hai her dard uske aane k badd........

sulagti rahti hai ye zindgi uske na hone se........

mit jati hai pyass uske aane k badd.......
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2006, 05:30:51 PM »
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wah wah    nice  work  all......Kapoor  Bhai...Badnam  Shayar....anjani si...Pooja  sis...Tushar....
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2006, 05:51:33 PM »
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Gesu, pooja, tushar, badnaam all vryyyyy nice written!!!

Aaj meri ankhoin mein roshni hai
Aaj mera chehra pe muskan hai
Aaj mera achal lehrara hai
Aaj meri chooriyan kahanak rahi hai
Aaj meri payal nach rahi hai
Akhar aaj mera pyar jo aah raha hai
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2006, 05:34:58 AM »
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wow pooja aap aaye bahar aayi!!!!! bahut hi badiya!!!! warna hamare thread mein kucch kami si thi!!!!!!!!!! nice lines

Gesu...
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2006, 05:42:39 AM »
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Aaj is dil ko kya hua jaata hai ,
Socha tha unhe na ho haal-e-dil bayaaan,
Per mere hothon per ikraar-e-rang nazar aata hai,
Socha tha nazrein jhuka loon ke unka aks nazar na aaye,
Per palkon ka bichona kiske liye hai yeh nazar aata hai,
Gesuon ko bhi shararatt yeh aisi sujhi hai,
Ud ud ke unko bulawa diye jati hain,
Dil to pehle se hi kaboo mein nahi hai mera,
Dhadkan bhi har zor se shor machaye jaati hai,
Aaj is dil ko kya hua jaata hai..

Gesu's DIL...............................
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2006, 05:56:31 AM »
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aaj is dil ko ek khawab dekhai deta hai .....

kuch kehta nahi koi magar kuch humko sunai deta hai ......

dhundta hai dil kisiko manta rehta hai in khawabo ki mehfil me..........

her dushman bhi aab aapna sa dekhai deta hai ,......
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«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2006, 06:06:43 AM »
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wow gr8 tushar ji!!!!!!!! bahut hi badiya!!!!
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