Aansoo

by JHEEL on November 21, 2009, 12:18:32 AM
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AANSOO


Kuch is tarha meri ankho mein basy hein Ansu
Hont chup hein to zuban ban k sajey hein Ansu

khud hi dy kar meri Ankho mein yah sary Ansu
Poochta hai key baata kisney diya hein Ansu

Faarq itna sa hai chaahat mein meri aur uski
usko khushia hi milen mujhko mily hein Ansu

Jisko her ghum sy bachaya tha meri chahat ny
Aaj us shaks ney Ankho mein diye hein Ansu

Dekhty kia ho meri Aankh sey niklaa Ansu
Ankh meri ha magar us key sajy hein Ansu

Khud to aram sey wo mujhko bhula betha ha
jiski chahat ki saza mein yeh miley hein Ansu

Yeh meri ankh nahi raait ka sehra hai jahan
khushk ankho mein kali ban k khely hein Ansu

Apny jis hath sey likha tha usey sari umar
kup kapati usi ongli sey meety hein Ansu...






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«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2009, 02:01:43 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Jheel ji,very touching n mindblowing creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2009, 11:01:52 AM »
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Nice One Jheel Ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2009, 01:25:48 PM »
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Bahut Khoooooooob Jheel Ji.. Yunhi Likhte Rahiye.. Applause



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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2009, 03:32:25 PM »
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thnx madhu ji, rishi ji, mann ji
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2009, 03:39:51 PM »
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very touching poetry........... bahot khoob jheel ji.
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