Aaou pahloo mein yahaan, kyoun baithhey ho door?

by abdbundeli on October 18, 2008, 06:07:13 PM
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Jeewan hai yah: kyoun na ham
Jiyen isey bharpoor?
Aaou pahloo mein yahaan,
Kyoun baithhey ho door?
                        
          Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2008, 02:35:16 AM »
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Wah abd ji achha she'ar he, or baat-chit mien istemal hosake itna aasan bhi he.
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2008, 10:34:14 AM »
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Shukriyah Sayyid Randeri ji,
Yah eik 'dohaa' hai, aur bhaashhaa hai Hindustaanee Hindi, Bhaarteeya Prayadeep mein lagbhag sabhi samajhtey hain!
Hindi bhaashhaa hai saral, bol-chaal ki! Mitra!
Har pal bantey hain jahaan, mrudu shabdoun key chitra!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2008, 10:42:28 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 18, 2008, 06:07:13 PM
Jeewan hai yah: kyoun na ham jiyen isey bharpoor?
Aaou pahloo mein yahaan, kyoun baithhey ho door?
                         Ramwatiya / abd bundeli


acha hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2008, 11:58:26 AM »
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Thanks NODER ji!
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2008, 12:10:09 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji... Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2008, 12:25:54 PM »
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Thanks honeyrose ji!
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