Aap, Chand Aur Main..!!......Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on June 04, 2012, 08:57:45 AM
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Kayi Mausamo Se Guzri Meri Mohabbat Tanhaiyon Mein,
Doondte Rahe Aasman Mein Apni Manzil Chand Aur Main..!!

Kaha Tha Usne Ke Saath Hoon Tumhare Har Shab Sanam Mein,
Karenge Nazara Tumhara Aasman Se Chand Aur Main..!!

Dil Ne Har Karvat Par Mehsus Kiya Aap Ko Apne Pehlu Mein,
Khwabon Ki Har Rehguzar Mein Saath Hote Hai Aap Aur Main..!!

Pura Chand Hai Kitna Khubasurat Aaj Raat Mere Aangan Mein,
Kabhi Toh Saath Chalenge Poonam Ki Raat Mein Aap, Chand Aur Main..!!

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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2012, 09:05:01 AM »
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bade achhe khyaalaat hain do-do lines men space diyaa karo achhaa presentation rahegaa padhne men bhee achhaa lagegaa
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2012, 09:07:55 AM »
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Shukriya Saini Jee! Made the changes as well! I hope it looks better now...Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2012, 01:02:02 PM »
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WAAAAAAAAAAH SHIREEN JEE. AAPNE BAHUT ACHCHHE SE APNE KHYALON KO PIROYA HAI.
DAAD AUR RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE.

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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2012, 01:04:37 PM »
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Shukriya Anahita Jee!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2012, 07:09:02 PM »
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bohot achhi lines likhi hai...
bohot khub
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2012, 08:53:18 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat ehsaas.... bahut pyaari peshkash hai Shireen ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

dekh is poonam ke chaand ko hum aapse baat karte hain,
aapka chehra chaand me dekh aapse mulaaqaat karte hain,

mil nahi paate aapse zyaadaa iska ehsaas hai humein,
isiliye chaand ko dekh guzar apni har raat karte hain,

baith apne aangan me dekh rahe ho aap bhi us chaand ko,
aapki tarha dekh us chaand ko hum aapko yaad karte hain,

kisi raat agar baadalon se dhakaa ho aasmaan wo saaraa,
dikhaa de aapka chehra bas yahi hum fariyaad karte hain,

har raat chaaand ko dekh dekh hum aapse baat karte hain,
aapka chehra chaand me dekh aapse mulaaqaat karte hain...

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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2012, 10:22:59 AM »
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Kayi Mausamo Se Guzri Meri Mohabbat Tanhaiyon Mein,
Doondte Rahe Aasman Mein Apni Manzil Chand Aur Main..!!

Kaha Tha Usne Ke Saath Hoon Tumhare Har Shab Sanam Mein,
Karenge Nazara Tumhara Aasman Se Chand Aur Main..!!

Dil Ne Har Karvat Par Mehsus Kiya Aap Ko Apne Pehlu Mein,
Khwabon Ki Har Rehguzar Mein Saath Hote Hai Aap Aur Main..!!

Pura Chand Hai Kitna Khubasurat Aaj Raat Mere Aangan Mein,
Kabhi Toh Saath Chalenge Poonam Ki Raat Mein Aap, Chand Aur Main..!!

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justttttttttt Awesome...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Shireen ji..

One Of Your Best work..

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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2012, 10:34:40 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

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