Ab ham kis sey kyaa kaheyn?

by abdbundeli on September 25, 2011, 09:23:31 AM
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Ab ham kis sey kyaa kaheyn,
Kab tak kareyn wichaar?
Wo gumsum hain, huyeen hain
Jab sey aankheyn chaar!

  - ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2011, 09:43:56 AM »
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Ab ham kis sey kyaa kaheyn,
Kab tak karey wichaar?
hain Wo gumsum se,
hueyn Jab sey aankheyn chaar!

  - ramwatiya / abd bundeli



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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2011, 12:09:22 PM »
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Thanks 'Khamosh ji!
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2011, 12:13:28 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2011, 08:09:10 PM »
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Bahoot khoob abdbundeli Sahab..!!

Kuchh koshish karta hoon main bhi..!!

Kahna-sunNa chhor do,
Chhoro sooch wichaar.!
Ab gum-sum mat baithiyo,
Hoo gain Aankhen Chaar.!



Ab ham kis sey kyaa kaheyn,
Kab tak kareyn wichaar?
Wo gumsum hain, huyeen hain
Jab sey aankheyn chaar!

  - ramwatiya / abd bundeli

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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2011, 02:13:42 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2011, 02:20:47 PM »
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Bahoot khoob abdbundeli Sahab..!!

Kuchh koshish karta hoon main bhi..!!

Kahna-sunNa chhor do,
Chhoro sooch wichaar.!
Ab gum-sum mat baithiyo,
Hoo gain Aankhen Chaar.!


Bahoot khoob bhai Pandey ji!

Ankhon-ankhon mein huyee
Jab sey unsey baat;
Tab sey aankhon mein katee
Hai meyree har raat!

      _Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2011, 07:41:41 PM »
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Bahoot khoob bhai Pandey ji!

Ankhon-ankhon mein huyee
Jab sey unsey baat;
Tab sey aankhon mein katee
Hai meyree har raat!

      _Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

Abd bundeli ji hausla afzai ke liye sukriya..!!
Silsile ko thoda aage badhake result batane ki koshish karta hoon shayad aapko pasand aaye..!!

Ankhon ke scan se
Ho gaya parda-faas;
En Ankhon mein bas gai
Surat koi khaas!


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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2011, 04:21:43 AM »
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Abd bundeli ji hausla afzai ke liye sukriya..!!
Silsile ko thoda aage badhake result batane ki koshish karta hoon shayad aapko pasand aaye..!!

Ankhon ke scan se
Ho gaya parda-faas;
En Ankhon mein bas gai
Surat koi khaas!


You're most welcome Pandey ji! Dohey likhney kee paramparaa is zamaaney mein thodee dhheelee pad gayee hai! Warnaa 'asha'ar' sey bhee taakatwar 'maadhyam' hain yeh 'abhwyakti' key! Aap key dohey manmohak hain! Aap 'nayee peedhhee' key hain, main thoda 'guzaree peedhhee kaa', bas ham mein aap mein itnaa hee farq hai! Meyrey dohon mein aapkee ruchi hai: dhanyawaad!

In nayanon ko kyaa kahuun,
Beetee hai barsaat!
Ab to jharnaa rok deyn,
Huyee raat sey praat!

             - Ramwatiya / abdbundeli
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2011, 10:52:28 AM »
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Saawan Bhadon jaa chuke,
Aaya maas kuwaar!
Sharad Sishir ki aas mein,
Baitha baanh pasaar!

abdbundeli Sahab Aap apna aashirwaad dete rahiye main kuch kahta rahunga..!!

You're most welcome Pandey ji! Dohey likhney kee paramparaa is zamaaney mein thodee dhheelee pad gayee hai! Warnaa 'asha'ar' sey bhee taakatwar 'maadhyam' hain yeh 'abhwyakti' key! Aap key dohey manmohak hain! Aap 'nayee peedhhee' key hain, main thoda 'guzaree peedhhee kaa', bas ham mein aap mein itnaa hee farq hai! Meyrey dohon mein aapkee ruchi hai: dhanyawaad!

In nayanon ko kyaa kahuun,
Beetee hai barsaat!
Ab to jharnaa rok deyn,
Huyee raat sey praat!

             - Ramwatiya / abdbundeli

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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2011, 01:59:29 PM »
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Saawan Bhadon jaa chuke,
Aaya maas kuwaar!
Sharad Sishir ki aas mein,
Baitha baanh pasaar!

abdbundeli Sahab Aap apna aashirwaad dete rahiye main kuch kahta rahunga..!!
Dhanyawaad, Pandey ji!

Shubhaasheeshh ley saath fir
Aayey hain navraatra!
Maan key mangal sparsh key,
Mitra, aap hain paatra!!

Main saadhaaran jan bhalaa
Duungaa kyaa aasheeshh?
Deyhee key sammaan mein,
Nat rakhtaa huun sheesh!

        - Ramwatiya / abdbundeli
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2011, 05:47:30 AM »
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Ab ham kis sey kyaa kaheyn,
Kab tak kareyn wichaar?
Wo gumsum hain, huyeen hain
Jab sey aankheyn chaar!

  - ramwatiya / abd bundeli

Bahut khoob ABD ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2011, 06:13:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob ABD ji


Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'mkv' ji!
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