~~~Ab Jaan Ban Gaye Ho ~~~

by Pooja on April 08, 2009, 08:00:58 PM
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 02:56:43 AM »
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


Aaahaaa... pehla do line padkar aap meri Jaan ban gayi ho...  Usual Smile reply karne ko dil kar raha hai.. but waqt ki kami hai...



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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 04:08:32 AM »
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Bohat khoob Pooja..
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 06:14:59 AM »
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


So sweet Pooja di.. bahoot hi pyara likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 07:27:22 AM »
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Very sweet poem, Pooja Ji !!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 08:21:03 AM »
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Bahut Hi Pyaar Se Aur Bahut Hi Pyara Likha hai Didi icon_flower,

Shally.

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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 02:21:10 PM »
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Nice One Pooja Sis,. Har baar Ki taraah,.
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 03:41:28 PM »
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Aaahaaa... pehla do line padkar aap meri Jaan ban gayi ho...  Usual Smile reply karne ko dil kar raha hai.. but waqt ki kami hai...





Thanks Roja!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2009, 03:43:13 PM »
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Bohat khoob Pooja..

Thanks Sajid!!!

So sweet Pooja di.. bahoot hi pyara likha hai aapne.

Thanks you so much Sophi!!

Very sweet poem, Pooja Ji !!!!!!!

Shukaria karndhar ji!!

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Bahut Hi Pyaar Se Aur Bahut Hi Pyara Likha hai Didi icon_flower,

Shally.




Thanks Shally!!


Nice One Pooja Sis,. Har baar Ki taraah,.


Thanks Lil bro!!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2009, 03:57:37 PM »
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


Kya baat hai Pooja Applause Applause Applause

Aajkal aapko Khumar-e-Ishq main padhna achcha lagta hai... !
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2009, 04:04:09 PM »
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Thanks Celmira.... jahan acha sath mil jaaye likhne ko... waha kalam chal padti hai!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2009, 04:50:28 PM »
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


Bahut hi khoobsurat Pooja Di..

Ek chhoti si koshish kar rahi hoon..


Meri zindagi mein rahe hamesha shaamil se hi ajnabiyon ki tarah,
pata na tha ke itne kareeb aaoge, ke mujhme hi sama gaye ho tum,

kuch dardki badliyaan kuch ashqonki barsaat kuch dinose hai lapata,
dilke aasman pe chha ke mere mausamon ki jaan ban gaye ho tum...
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2009, 05:19:54 PM »
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


Oye Hoye.. Kya Kya Bana diya aapne Apne Dilbar Ko.. Hahahahaha
Bahut Accha Likha Hai Humesha Ki Tarah..!! Applause Applause


Kis Tarah Aaun Tu Bata, Tujhse Milne Main Sanam,
Dil Hai Mera Pareshan Behad, Teri Jaan Ki Qasam...

Aankhen Bhi ab To, Tere Deedar Ki Tamannaai Hain,
Intzaar Nahi Ab Hota Zaalim, Teri Jaan Ki Qasam....

Ho Kuch Aisa, Tu Mujhme Aur Main Tujhme Sama Jaun,
Bas Main Aur Tu Ban Jayen Hum, Teri Jaan Ki Qasam..!!


**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2009, 10:54:40 AM »
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Nice One Huzaina Sis, And Mann Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: April 10, 2009, 11:25:51 AM »
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Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho

Pata na chale waqat ka, meri Subah-O-Sham ban gaye ho
Kadakti dhoop thi zindagi, ek thundi chaw ban gaye ho

De gaye ansoo jo kabhi hua karte the apno main
Tham kar ajj hath mera, meri muskaan ban gaye ho

Ruki hue zindagi ki patwaar ban gaye ho
Pahle bane hum, phir humdum, ab jaan ban gaye ho….


Bahut khoob Pooja di
kamaal likha hai aapne
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