~~~Ab kahan jaati ho...~~~

by vitasta on July 08, 2009, 06:52:13 PM
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meri duniya mehka ke ab kahan jaati ho?
mere itne kareeb aake ab kahan jaati ho?
chahat ki sehar hai par shaam ka na pata
mujhe 'Noor' se milake ab kahan jaati ho?

dil ko yun bebas na karo, toot jaayega ye
mujhe pyaar se sulaake ab kahan jaati ho?
lamhe judaai ke to guzaar diye kisi tarah
mili to nazren jhukaake ab kahan jaati ho?

'Viti' ko pata nahin ki kya sahi, kya galat
roz tum mujhe tadpake ab kahan jaati ho?
ek jhooth hi keh do ki ishq hai tumhe bhi
itni khwaishein jagaake ab kahan jaati ho?
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 07:06:08 PM »
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Wah wah Viti Ji.. Behad Pyaar Bhare Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain aapne..!! Lafzon Ko Bahut Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai..!! Mohabbat Bhari yeh Nazm Dil Ko Chhoo gai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 09:14:37 PM »
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Wah wah Viti Ji.. Behad Pyaar Bhare Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain aapne..!! Lafzon Ko Bahut Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai..!! Mohabbat Bhari yeh Nazm Dil Ko Chhoo gai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 09:40:41 PM »
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waah Bahoot bahoot Khoob Viti .. bahoot hi khoob likha hai .. Bahoot pyara ehsaas hai.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2009, 09:41:28 PM »
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waah Bahoot bahoot Khoob Viti .. bahoot hi khoob likha hai .. Bahoot pyara ehsaas hai.. Bahoot Khoob!

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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2009, 09:51:34 PM »
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pyaar ke ehsaasko bahut khubsoorti se piroya hai
pyaar bhari rachna ke liye dair sari daad kabool kijiye
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 02:49:11 AM »
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Wah Vitasta ji,excellent very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 05:29:10 AM »
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Viti Ji.. bohot achha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 05:31:52 AM »
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Bahut he pyaari hai yeh aapki pyaar bhari rachna, vitasta Ji! bahut bahut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 06:07:32 AM »
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wow kay abaat hai, kaya baat hai!!!

Full of Khumar-e-Ishaq vitasta ji...

Good creation!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 12:26:31 PM »
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BAHUT BADIYA VITASTA JI....

PYAR KA PIYAALA PILAKAR,AB KAHAN JAATI HO TUM,
KHUMAR-E-ISHQ MEIN BITAAKAR,KIUN HO JAATI HO GUM.
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 01:16:04 PM »
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Thodi der bhaitho abhi hum bhi chale hi jayege

Waqt-e-kaza ki hain ghadi ab kahaan jati ho......
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 01:59:35 PM »
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meri duniya mehka ke ab kahan jaati ho?
mere itne kareeb aake ab kahan jaati ho?
chahat ki sehar hai par shaam ka na pata
mujhe 'Noor' se milake ab kahan jaati ho?

dil ko yun bebas na karo, toot jaayega ye
mujhe pyaar se sulaake ab kahan jaati ho?
lamhe judaai ke to guzaar diye kisi tarah
mili to nazren jhukaake ab kahan jaati ho?

'Viti' ko pata nahin ki kya sahi, kya galat
roz tum mujhe tadpake ab kahan jaati ho?
ek jhooth hi keh do ki ishq hai tumhe bhi
itni khwaishein jagaake ab kahan jaati ho?

khoobsurat ghazal vitasta
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 06:47:19 PM »
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meri duniya mehka ke ab kahan jaati ho?
mere itne kareeb aake ab kahan jaati ho?
chahat ki sehar hai par shaam ka na pata
mujhe 'Noor' se milake ab kahan jaati ho?

dil ko yun bebas na karo, toot jaayega ye
mujhe pyaar se sulaake ab kahan jaati ho?
lamhe judaai ke to guzaar diye kisi tarah
mili to nazren jhukaake ab kahan jaati ho?

'Viti' ko pata nahin ki kya sahi, kya galat
roz tum mujhe tadpake ab kahan jaati ho?
ek jhooth hi keh do ki ishq hai tumhe bhi
itni khwaishein jagaake ab kahan jaati ho?

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Bohot Khoob Viti dear  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2009, 09:12:44 PM »
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meri duniya mehka ke ab kahan jaati ho?
mere itne kareeb aake ab kahan jaati ho?
chahat ki sehar hai par shaam ka na pata
mujhe 'Noor' se milake ab kahan jaati ho?

dil ko yun bebas na karo, toot jaayega ye
mujhe pyaar se sulaake ab kahan jaati ho?
lamhe judaai ke to guzaar diye kisi tarah
mili to nazren jhukaake ab kahan jaati ho?

'Viti' ko pata nahin ki kya sahi, kya galat
roz tum mujhe tadpake ab kahan jaati ho?
ek jhooth hi keh do ki ishq hai tumhe bhi
itni khwaishein jagaake ab kahan jaati ho?

Wah wah Viti... bahut khoob likha hai aapne. Daad hazir hai..
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