Abhi Na Jaa Mere Humdum... :) (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on September 18, 2007, 04:33:48 PM
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #15 on: September 28, 2007, 05:58:55 PM »
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Thnx Roja and Shikha.....

Janam abhi kayi baaki hai.....
Tum umar beet jaane ki kya baat karte ho.....

Hai agar kia ISHQ mujhse......
Toh yeh Ruswaayian kyu bayan karte ho......

Dhadkan banke jo Dhadakta hai Dil me.....
Use Jism me Dhaalne ka kya tum Aghaaz rakhte ho.......

Bas bann Sanwar ke Utar jao meri zindagi me......
Tum kya abhi Paraye ho...jo humse apna banane ki baat karte ho.....!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #16 on: September 28, 2007, 06:13:45 PM »
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Good Reply Gaurav... tongue3
अब मैं क्या लिखूं ... Puzzled !

Ok... Let me Try...


जन्म जन्म तक हमदम मेरे साथ रहना,
मान लो इस जन्म में मेरा बस यह कहना...

अब खुशी का स्वपन ही बसायेंगे पलकों में,
एक आख़िरी अश्क़ रह गया था आँख से बहना... 

क्या श्रंगार, क्या सजावट कोरे कोरे से दिल की,
तुमको ही मान लिया हमने अपना हर गहना...

जो लिखी थी रुसवाइयाँ हमारे नसीब में,
सीख लिया है हमने उनको हंस कर सहना..

-X-X-X-X-X-X

Janam Janam tak Humdum mere saath rehna,
Maan lo is janam mein mera bus yeh kehna...

Ab khushi ka swapan hi basayeinge palkon mein,
Ek akhiri ashq reh gaya tha aankh se behna...  

Kya shingaar, kya sajawat kore kore se dil ki,
Tumko hi maan liya humne apna har gehna...

Jo likhi thi ruswaaiya humare naseeb mein,
Seekh liya hai humne unko hans kar sehna...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #17 on: September 28, 2007, 06:24:06 PM »
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WOW lovely one...and really tough to give a reply

Palkon tale ab tere kabhi hum Kajal ne behta payenge.....
Sawaar ke rakhenge tujhe Saadgi ke gehno se......
Ke pal bhar dekh ke bhi tujhe pichle sab janmo ke gum bhool jayenge......

Baithe rahenge bas saamne tere.....
Aur aankhon ke raste Dil me utar jayenge.....

Jalti rahengi aur AshiQon ki mashaale darr pe tere.....
Par hum Aatish banke tere ghar ke harr diye me jagmagayenge....!!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #18 on: September 28, 2007, 06:28:00 PM »
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Haye Oye... Shikha Behosh ho gayi... :D

Bahut pyaara likha hai (Shayar Ji... tongue3)
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Aryaan
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«Reply #19 on: September 28, 2007, 07:41:13 PM »
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Bohat umdah Shikha...
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: September 28, 2007, 08:33:17 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. tooooooooooooo goood Shikha!!

kamal ke jawab likhe hai apne BS JI!!!
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paani
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«Reply #21 on: September 29, 2007, 08:57:40 AM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Writing in this Section has always been a tough job for me.
But This one was written in just one flow... Usual Smile
It appeared like a song rather than Shayari... :D



Aise naa apne pyar ko tu bhula mere humdum,
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Samet kar bhar le mujhe apni baahon mein kahin,
Sang le chal muhabbat se bhari raahon mein kahin…
Baarish mein bheeg jaaye, aa ek baar phir se hum,
Shararaton ke saath meri, aankhon mein ho ja gum…
Bhar le nigaah mein, Naa nigaah hata mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, kabhi naa jaane ke liye,
Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diwaane ke liye…
Kar de armaan poora ki teri baahon mein nikle dum,
Yeh aakhiri ho lafz mere, ki “Tum hi ho mere Sanam”…
Bikhra mujhe, Mera khwaab na bikhra mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Koi Kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar,
Khud ko naa rok aaj, naa koi pehra laga zazbaat par…
Guzar naa jaaye raat kahin, kar ke humey gumsum,
Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam…
Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…
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AAFREEN shikha......
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: October 01, 2007, 12:26:11 AM »
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Thnx Roja and Shikha.....

Janam abhi kayi baaki hai.....
Tum umar beet jaane ki kya baat karte ho.....

Hai agar kia ISHQ mujhse......
Toh yeh Ruswaayian kyu bayan karte ho......

Dhadkan banke jo Dhadakta hai Dil me.....
Use Jism me Dhaalne ka kya tum Aghaaz rakhte ho.......

Bas bann Sanwar ke Utar jao meri zindagi me......
Tum kya abhi Paraye ho...jo humse apna banane ki baat karte ho.....!!!!


wow something very very good to read...

Tumhare aane se aangan gulzar ho gaya
Mere ghar ka mausam, mausame bahar ho gaya..
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Roja
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«Reply #23 on: October 01, 2007, 12:29:11 AM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Good Reply Gaurav... tongue3
Ab main kya likhun... Puzzled !

Ok... Let me Try...

Janam Janam tak Humdum mere saath rehna,
Maan lo is janam mein mera bus yeh kehna...

Ab khushi ka swapan basayeinge palkon mein,
Ek akhiri ashq reh gaya tha aankh se behna...  

Kya shingaar, kya sajawat kore kore se dil ki,
Tumko hi maan liya humne apna har gehna...

Jo likhi thi ruswaaiya humare is naseeb mein,
Seekh liya hai humne unko hans kar sehna...


aha... kya bath hai Shikha ji... dil khush hua. :D  :D
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tanhadil
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«Reply #24 on: October 06, 2007, 07:41:25 PM »
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wah wah wah shikha ji bahut khub
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Roja
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«Reply #25 on: October 07, 2007, 04:46:03 AM »
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Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
WOW lovely one...and really tough to give a reply

Palkon tale ab tere kabhi hum Kajal ne behta payenge.....
Sawaar ke rakhenge tujhe Saadgi ke gehno se......
Ke pal bhar dekh ke bhi tujhe pichle sab janmo ke gum bhool jayenge......

Baithe rahenge bas saamne tere.....
Aur aankhon ke raste Dil me utar jayenge.....

Jalti rahengi aur AshiQon ki mashaale darr pe tere.....
Par hum Aatish banke tere ghar ke harr diye me jagmagayenge....!!!!!


wah ... mast likha hai aapne Gaurav
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Nirbhay
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«Reply #26 on: October 07, 2007, 12:03:59 PM »
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Aafreen.

Jhuta nahi, Jazbaaton se bhara hai ye Sangam
Iss shayari mein likha hai dard-e-dil ka ~Gum
Kalam Ne likha bass yehi; Aur na Sata, Abhie Na Jaa Mere HumDum.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #27 on: October 09, 2007, 11:08:31 AM »
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Thanks a lot... Aryan, Pooja di, Paani, Roja, Tanhadil (Solly) and Neer...

Beautiful Lines... Neer... Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: October 09, 2007, 05:51:10 PM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Good Reply Gaurav... tongue3
Ab main kya likhun... Puzzled !

Ok... Let me Try...

Janam Janam tak Humdum mere saath rehna,
Maan lo is janam mein mera bus yeh kehna...

Ab khushi ka swapan basayeinge palkon mein,
Ek akhiri ashq reh gaya tha aankh se behna...  

Kya shingaar, kya sajawat kore kore se dil ki,
Tumko hi maan liya humne apna har gehna...

Jo likhi thi ruswaaiya humare is naseeb mein,
Seekh liya hai humne unko hans kar sehna...


Oye Hoye Kya Baat hai SHIKHA & GAURAV Bhai.. Dono Ek se Badh kar ek.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


Jo Kiya Hai Iqraar, Kya Samjhu Main Ise,
Samajhna Bhi Chaahun To Kaise Samjhu Ise...

Ab Tak Mohabbat Humen Door Se Tarsa Gai,
Afsaana Samjhu Ki Kahun Main Haqiqat Ise....

Likh To Diya Hai Tumne Kaagaz Pe Dil Ki Baat Ko,
Kaagaz Hi Samjhu, Ya Samjhu Main Dil Ise......

Iqraar se Pahale Jana To Hota Mere Baare Me,
Dil Ki Baat Hai Ya Phir Kahen Mahaz Kalaam Ise...

Kaise Pa Sakte Hain Hum, Husn Wale Hi Haqiqat Ko,
Ya Khuda Tu Hi Bata Aur Kya Likh Bhejun Main Ise...!!!!
Usual Smile Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #29 on: October 09, 2007, 11:23:48 PM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Writing in this Section has always been a tough job for me.
But This one was written in just one flow... Usual Smile
It appeared like a song rather than Shayari... :D



Aise naa apne pyar ko tu bhula mere humdum,
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Samet kar bhar le mujhe apni baahon mein kahin,
Sang le chal muhabbat se bhari raahon mein kahin…
Baarish mein bheeg jaaye, aa ek baar phir se hum,
Shararaton ke saath meri, aankhon mein ho ja gum…
Bhar le nigaah mein, Naa nigaah hata mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, kabhi naa jaane ke liye,
Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diwaane ke liye…
Kar de armaan poora ki teri baahon mein nikle dum,
Yeh aakhiri ho lafz mere, ki “Tum hi ho mere Sanam”…
Bikhra mujhe, Mera khwaab na bikhra mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Koi Kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar,
Khud ko naa rok aaj, naa koi pehra laga zazbaat par…
Guzar naa jaaye raat kahin, kar ke humey gumsum,
Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam…
Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…
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Jab aisi kavita padhta hu toh lagta hai ki yoindia pe nahi aakar galati karta hu mai................Sikha.....this is beautiful......Usual Smile

Karen hum kis se wafa, koi aisa dildaar toh mile,
Iss pyaar ke bazaar mein kahin pyar toh mile..

Har rishte mein kahin kuch na kuch qarar mila,
Kabhi toh humko ek dil bhi beqarar toh mile..

Jaan dene mein bhi humko kabhi gum nahi hoga,
Bas ek bar sahi par wo jaan-nisaar toh mile..Winking
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