Abhi Na Jaa Mere Humdum... :) (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on September 18, 2007, 04:33:48 PM
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Writing in this Section has always been a tough job for me.
But This one was written in just one flow... Usual Smile
It appeared like a song rather than Shayari... :D



ऐसे ना अपने प्यार को तू भुला मेरे हमदम,
होने को है सुबह, ना और रुला मेरे हमदम…

समेट कर भर ले मुझे अपनी बाहों में कहीं,
संग ले चल मुहब्बत से भरी राहों में कहीं…
बारिश में भीग जाए, आ एक बार फिर से हम,
शरारतों के साथ मेरी, आँखों में हो जा गुम…
भर ले निगाह में, ना निगाह हटा मेरे हमदम…
होने को है सुबह, ना और रुला मेरे हमदम…

एक बार तो आ घर मेरे, कभी ना जाने के लिए,
आ रोक दें यह वक़्त यहीं, दिल दीवाने के लिए…
कर दे अरमान पूरा कि तेरी बाहों में निकले दम,
यह आख़िरी हो लफ्ज़ मेरे, “तुम ही हो मेरे सनम”…
बिखरा मुझे, ना ख्वाब मेरा बिखरा मेरे हमदम…
होने को है सुबह, ना और रुला मेरे हमदम…

कोई किस्सा छेड़ के प्यार का, मुझे जगा तू रात भर,
ना खुद को रोक और ना ही पहरा लगा ज़ज़्बात पर…
गुज़र ना जाए रात कहीं, कर के हमें गुम सुम,
रहने दे अभी कुछ और देर यूँही प्यार का भ्रम…
और ज़रा सी देर ठहर, अभी ना जा मेरे हमदम…
होने को है सुबह, ना और रुला मेरे हमदम…

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Aise naa apne pyar ko tu bhula Mere Humdum,
Hone ko hai subah, Naa Aur rula Mere Humdum…

Samet kar bhar le mujhe apni baahon mein kahin,
Sang le chal muhabbat se bhari raahon mein kahin…
Baarish mein bheeg jaaye, aa ek baar phir se hum,
Shararaton ke saath meri, aankhon mein ho ja gum…
Bhar le nigaah mein, Naa nigaah hata Mere Humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Naa Aur rula Mere Humdum…

Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, kabhi naa jaane ke liye,
Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diwaane ke liye…
Kar de armaan poora ki teri baahon mein nikle dum,
Yeh aakhiri ho lafz mere,  “Tum hi ho Mere Sanam”…
Bikhra mujhe, Mera khwaab na bikhra Mere Humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Naa Aur rula Mere Humdum…

Koi Kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar,
Naa Khud ko rok aur naa hi pehra laga zazbaat par…
Guzar naa jaaye raat kahin, kar ke humey gumsum,
Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam…
Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa Mere Humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Naa Aur rula Mere Humdum…


....Shikha....
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2007, 09:45:41 PM »
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Shikha

Bahut achche =D> =D> =D>

Yeh last paragraph is ultimate. :D
Kabhi humein bhi aisa ehsaas hua tha.
Beete pal yaad aa gaye. :wink:

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Koi Kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar,
Khud ko naa rok aaj, naa koi pehra laga zazbaat par…
Guzar naa jaaye raat kahin, kar ke humey gumsum,
Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam…
Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2007, 11:21:03 PM »
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Sach main bohot pyaara likha hai Shikha....mann kiya ise music ke saath koi gaaye :D
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2007, 11:41:08 PM »
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Tum khud gaa lo ... achcha khaasa gaana jaanti ho Puzzled ! tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2007, 07:03:23 AM »
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wow shikha ji baut baut khub likha hai aapne
its really just like a song
actually hum bhi apni shayari ganne ke tarz pe banate hain
but u done a gr8 gr8 job
keep it up this flow
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2007, 10:23:10 AM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Writing in this Section has always been a tough job for me.
But This one was written in just one flow... Usual Smile
It appeared like a song rather than Shayari... :D



Aise naa apne pyar ko tu bhula mere humdum,
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Samet kar bhar le mujhe apni baahon mein kahin,
Sang le chal muhabbat se bhari raahon mein kahin…
Baarish mein bheeg jaaye, aa ek baar phir se hum,
Shararaton ke saath meri, aankhon mein ho ja gum…
Bhar le nigaah mein, Naa nigaah hata mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, kabhi naa jaane ke liye,
Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diwaane ke liye…
Kar de armaan poora ki teri baahon mein nikle dum,
Yeh aakhiri ho lafz mere, ki “Tum hi ho mere Sanam”…
Bikhra mujhe, Mera khwaab na bikhra mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…

Koi Kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar,
Khud ko naa rok aaj, naa koi pehra laga zazbaat par…
Guzre naa jaaye raat kahin, kar ke humey gumsum,
Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam…
Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa mere humdum…
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum…
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2007, 05:52:57 AM »
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Thanks for liking... Rajbir ji, Talat, CoolGirl and Jagdish...
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2007, 03:32:09 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah.. Kya Baat hai SHIKHA.. Kamaal kar Diya aapne...!! Har ek Line Aur Har Ek Lafz
Behad Khubsoorat Likha Hai aapne..!! Ehasaason Ko Zubaan De Di Ho Jaise aapne......... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooooooooob... !!

=D>  =D>  =D>  =D>

Vicky
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2007, 06:26:40 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SHIKHA JI...BAHUT KHUBSOORTI SE LIKHA HAI
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2007, 05:10:31 AM »
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Thanks a lot Vicky and Khwaish.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2007, 09:27:26 AM »
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Fantastic...!!! :D
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2007, 05:33:54 PM »
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Humdum ab na hoga ruswa kabhi......
Jo tum Saath dene ka Wada nibhaogi......

Bolo Muskurati rahogi sada yoon hee......
Aur ISHQ ke dard se mooh mod jaogi......

De ke kuch iss kadar Saath mera.....
Apni Mohabbat ki Dastaan ko misaal banaogi.....

Humdum ab na hoga ruswa kabhi......
Jo tum Saath dene ka Wada nibhaogi.....!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2007, 05:42:28 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shikha and Gaurva...
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2007, 05:46:07 PM »
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Waah Waah Gaurav.... =D> =D>
Shukar hai.. You are back and that too with a Bang... Usual Smile


Now.. My Try :


हमदम तू रुसवाइयों से मुझको बचा ले,
मेरे करीब आ ज़रा, मुझे सीने से लगा ले...

दुनिया है तेरी, खुदाई भी तेरी, हर शै तेरी,
हम तो फक़त बैठे है, एक तेरे ही सहारे...

तन्हा चलते चलते उम्र बीत जाए ना कहीं,
मेरी तन्हाइयों को आके,  मुझसे चुरा ले...

तेरी आँखों में जहान भर की खुशियाँ हो,
तेरी राहों में खुशियों के ठहरे रहें उजाले...

देखो ना आस तोडो, ना निराश करो दिल को,
तुझको अपना माना है, तू भी मुझे अपना ले...

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Hamdam Tu Ruswaaiyon se mujhko bacha ley,
Mere kareeb aa zara, Mujhe seene se laga ley...

Duniya hai teri, khudaai bhi teri, har shai teri,
Hum to fakat baithe hai, Ek tere hi sahaarey...

Tanha chalte chalte umar beet jaaye na kahin,
Meri Tanhaaiyon ko aake,  Mujhse chura ley...

Teri aankhon mein jahaan bhar ki khushiyan ho,
Teri raahon mein khushion ke thehre rahein ujaley...

Dekho naa aas todo, Naa niraash karo dil ko,
Tujhko apna maana hai, Tu bhi mujhe apna ley...
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2007, 05:48:46 PM »
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Thank you so much Roja... Usual Smile
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