Abhi nahi jaana kahi

by vimmi singh on April 07, 2013, 05:06:39 PM
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Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
Chaand bhi khaamosh hai
Usne toh kuchh suna nahi
Ye baag Sharma gayi
Phool kyun khila nahi
Tum chup kyun rahe
Kah bhi do jo kaha nahi
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi

Dil ki hai yahi justaju
Milte rahna humse yun
Tum thodi der sun toh lo
Main thodi der kuchh kah saku
Dil ki baat dil sune, kahe
 ab ye kyun ruke
Main thoda pyaar dekh lun
Inn nigaahon me abhi
Tum bhi dil naa todna
Dil se dil ko jodna
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2013, 05:41:05 PM »
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very nice vimmi ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2013, 06:26:49 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2013, 07:47:24 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on April 07, 2013, 05:06:39 PM
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
Chaand bhi khaamosh hai
Usne toh kuchh suna nahi
Ye baag Sharma gayi
Fool(PHOOL) kyun [b]khila [/color]nahi
Tum chup kyun rahe
Kah bhi do jo kaha nahi
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi

Dil ki hai yahi justaju
Milte rahna humse yun
Tum thodi der sun toh lo
Main thodi der kuchh kah saku
Dil ki baat dil sune, kahe
 ab ye kyun ruke
Main thoda pyaar dekh lun
Inn nigaahon me abhi
Tum bhi dil naa todna
Dil se dil ko jodna
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
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nice,ma'am
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2013, 09:19:19 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on April 07, 2013, 05:06:39 PM
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
Chaand bhi khaamosh hai
Usne toh kuchh suna nahi
Ye baag Sharma gayi
Fool kyun khili nahi
Tum chup kyun rahe
Kah bhi do jo kaha nahi
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi

Dil ki hai yahi justaju
Milte rahna humse yun
Tum thodi der sun toh lo
Main thodi der kuchh kah saku
Dil ki baat dil sune, kahe
 ab ye kyun ruke
Main thoda pyaar dekh lun
Inn nigaahon me abhi
Tum bhi dil naa todna
Dil se dil ko jodna
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
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good poem vimmi............!
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2013, 01:22:52 AM »
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Bahut badhiya..
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2013, 01:34:35 AM »
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veriii gud-V.S
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2013, 02:23:03 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on April 07, 2013, 05:06:39 PM
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
Chaand bhi khaamosh hai
Usne toh kuchh suna nahi
Ye baag Sharma gayi
Fool kyun khili nahi
Tum chup kyun rahe
Kah bhi do jo kaha nahi
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi

Dil ki hai yahi justaju
Milte rahna humse yun
Tum thodi der sun toh lo
Main thodi der kuchh kah saku
Dil ki baat dil sune, kahe
 ab ye kyun ruke
Main thoda pyaar dekh lun
Inn nigaahon me abhi
Tum bhi dil naa todna
Dil se dil ko jodna
Abhi nahi jaana kahi
Kaise kah diya abhi
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nice creation. Vimmi ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2013, 02:57:46 AM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


Badi hi pyaari aur khoobsurat nazm kahi hai... behad achche khayaaloN ko khoobsurat lafz diye haiN aapne..


humari dheroN dili daad O mubabrakbad kabul kijiye..
HaaN kuch correction dikhi thi hume jise  M.B jee ne point kiya hai..

Likhati rahiye.. bazm meiN aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2013, 11:30:09 AM »
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vimmi   jee....  Very   nice  poem....
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2013, 12:53:46 PM »
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bohut khub vimmi ji bohut umda
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Quote from: anmolarora on April 07, 2013, 05:41:05 PM
very nice vimmi ji

shukriya Anmol ji...
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BOHUT KHUB VIMMI JI BOHUT UMDA LIKHA HAI
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