-----/// Abhi to raat bhar baaki hai ///----- Hriday

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tumhe  dekh  len  thodaa  aur, abhi   raat  bhar  baaki  hai
abhi  saamne  hamaare   tumhaari   qaatil  nazar  baaki hai

nashaa jo chadha hai  tumhaaraa  hum  pe  dheere dheere
hosh  me  hain  hum, magar  madhoshi  kaa  asar baaki hai

ho  jaane do  humein khatm tumhaari mohabbat me zaraa
abhi  aashiqon  se  bharaa  yeh  pooraa  shahar  baaki   hai

sunaa  hai   lut_taa   hai   dil  magar   wo  lut_ta  hai kaise
dikhaane  ko  tumhe  ab  bhi hamaaraa ye hunar  baaki hai

hum leke baahon me tumhe zameen pe chaand dikhaa den
karne waalaa chamatkaar tumhaaraa ye jaadugar baaki hai

thodi  si  mohabbat  ki   baat humse tum karlo  naa sanam
sochne  ke  liye  tumhaari  abhi  to  poori  umar   baaki  hai

jalaa  ke  tumhe  raakh  kar  den  aur   khud  bhi  jal  jaaen
mohabbat ki aag  mere dhadkano  me  is  qadar   baaki hai

mar jaayeen tum  pe hum agar tum humse kehdo ye kabhi
tum  pe marne  waalaa  tumhaaraa  ye  humsafar baaki hai

*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2013, 05:17:16 AM »
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Very very very very nice
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2013, 05:38:55 AM »
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'jalaa  ke  tumhe  raakh  kar  den  aur   khud  bhi  jal  jaaen
 mohabbat ki aag  mere dhadkano  me  is  qadar   baaki hai' Applause

beshak ye hunar numaya kar diya hai aapki ghazal ne...kaafi umda peshkash hai...bahut mubaarak ho Hriday ji!
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2013, 06:00:56 AM »
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how romantic ! bahut bahut achcha likha hai aapne hriday jee. dili mubarakbad qubool kare.bahut hi rumaani ehsaas se saji hai aapki yeh gazhal
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2013, 06:03:37 AM »
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waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hriday di
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2013, 06:24:12 AM »
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bahut khoob kapil ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2013, 08:05:51 AM »
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Bohat Khub!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2013, 08:08:10 AM »
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bohat khoob,............
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2013, 11:02:50 AM »
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bahut khuub bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2013, 01:04:15 PM »
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bahoot badia hridayji
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2013, 05:14:59 PM »
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wah wah kya baat hai Hriday ji   
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«Reply #11 on: January 16, 2013, 06:09:11 PM »
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tumhe  dekh  len  thodaa  aur, abhi   raat  bhar  baaki  hai
abhi  saamne  hamaare   tumhaari   qaatil  nazar  baaki hai

nashaa jo chadha hai  tumhaaraa  hum  pe  dheere dheere
hosh  me  hain  hum, magar  madhoshi  kaa  asar baaki hai

ho  jaane do  humein khatm tumhaari mohabbat me zaraa
abhi  aashiqon  se  bharaa  yeh  pooraa  shahar  baaki   hai

sunaa  hai   lut_taa   hai   dil  magar   wo  lut_ta  hai kaise
dikhaane  ko  tumhe  ab  bhi hamaaraa ye hunar  baaki hai

hum leke baahon me tumhe zameen pe chaand dikhaa den
karne waalaa chamatkaar tumhaaraa ye jaadugar baaki hai

thodi  si  mohabbat  ki   baat humse tum karlo  naa sanam
sochne  ke  liye  tumhaari  abhi  to  poori  umar   baaki  hai

jalaa  ke  tumhe  raakh  kar  den  aur   khud  bhi  jal  jaaen
mohabbat ki aag  mere dhadkano  me  is  qadar   baaki hai

mar jaayeen tum  pe hum agar tum humse kehdo ye kabhi
tum  pe marne  waalaa  tumhaaraa  ye  humsafar baaki hai

*****HRIDAY*****



Hriday saheb,
Salaam, Aapko, aapke iss kalaam ko
Bada hi ache ashaar rahe lutfangaiz
purasraar, aur dair tak dimaagh ki
kothriyon men lehrainge, mujhe samajh nahin
aarahi thi ke kaunse ashar pasand karon aur
kiss kiss ki daad don aapko...khair pura kalaam behtereen tha.
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bahut khoob
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v.v.good  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2013, 04:21:06 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa bhaai....!!!

Very very very very nice
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