Adbhut Aavedan.........AnAAm

by ANAAM on August 03, 2011, 01:05:56 PM
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 icon_flower love7 love9 love4 Adbhut Aavedan love4 love9  love7icon_flower


Vaasanti sandhya ne lee anggdaayee
Nisha ko nimantran who dey  aayee
Sapno ko bhee mila sneh aamantran
Neeravta ne bhi jamkar failaaye pankh

Beete na they raat k pehar-do-pehar bhee
Ayse mein gal-bheeyon ka haar liye
Priye lata sam lipat gayi tum mujh se
Dekh drishya wo Chand bhi muskuraya tha

Chandni k haathon aashirwaad bhijwayaa tha
Nayan ban gaye they aaj mere jaise Chakor
Ghanton tak kabhi Amber tou kabhi Bahon me
Apne Chand ko apalak neehaarta raha mein

Phir kheechkar meri hatheli ek ungli se
Raat aadhi “Pyaar” jab tumne likh diya
Prem-milan ka adbhut aavedan tumne kar diya
Bahon me apne pyaar se tumne mujhe bhar liya

Rakht prawah dhamniyon me achanak badh gayaa
Ang-ang apna esshphuurit ho jaise machal gayaa
Dhadkane bhee madhyam se ab teevra hone lagi
Saansey bhee jaise mast pawan see chalne lagi

Tere Uuneende nayno ne ye kaisa jaadu kar diyaa
Labon ne chhu labon ko mujhe madhosh kar diyaa
Seene selag jab tumne mujhe khudko samarpit kiya
Sach Kamdev ka aasan bhee dekh hume dol gayaa
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2011, 05:01:57 PM »
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khumaar hi khumaar se bharpur aapki ye kavita anaam ji...dil k taaron ko jhankrit kar gai...man me ajeeb se ehsaas jag gaye...
ek bht hi khubsurat aur romaani peshkash hai ye aapki..yunhi likhte rahiye..aur man lubhate rahiye humnaam
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2011, 07:10:26 PM »
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Anaam jee Aadaab!

Kafi achchi kavitaa kahi hai aapne janab.. Usual Smile

Vasanti sandhyaa ne lei angdaayi'
Nisha ko bhi wo nimantran de aayi.. "

kiaa kahen bahut khoob aapki kavi kalpana behad
achchi hai ... kavi jitna kalpanik likhe
utna hi khubsurat lagta hai.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye....
khush O aabaad rahiye...
khudaa Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2011, 02:00:56 PM »
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Aapka bahut bahut aabhaar Anamika ji....Aap bas essi tarah houslaa badhati rahiye
hum aapka mann lubhaate rahenge ye waadaa raha ji..... icon_flower icon_flower

khumaar hi khumaar se bharpur aapki ye kavita anaam ji...dil k taaron ko jhankrit kar gai...man me ajeeb se ehsaas jag gaye...
ek bht hi khubsurat aur romaani peshkash hai ye aapki..yunhi likhte rahiye..aur man lubhate rahiye humnaam

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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2011, 02:02:30 PM »
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Parwaaz ji aapke comments ka tou har kavi ko intezaar rehta hai....
Aapka bahut bahut Dhanyawaad ji..... icon_flower icon_flower

Anaam jee Aadaab!

Kafi achchi kavitaa kahi hai aapne janab.. Usual Smile

Vasanti sandhyaa ne lei angdaayi'
Nisha ko bhi wo nimantran de aayi.. "

kiaa kahen bahut khoob aapki kavi kalpana behad
achchi hai ... kavi jitna kalpanik likhe
utna hi khubsurat lagta hai.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye....
khush O aabaad rahiye...
khudaa Hafez Usual Smile         


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