agar tu izajjat de .............

by ranjana on May 09, 2006, 02:03:41 AM
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Na jaane aaj kal kyu dil karta hai ki,

nadiyaa ki lehron ki tarah teri baahon main machal jaau,

Tere seene per mund kar ankhein...................
 
khushbu ki tarah, fiza mai bikhar jaau....

tere labo par machalta jo sagar maine dekha hai,

usme se ek oak bharun aur pee jaau,

teri najaron se barsti pyar ki barish mein,

apne tan man ko bheego aaun,

kabhi- kabhi mujhe legta hai ki main "ek chotti si natkhat boond' hoon,

aur tu ek "shant thaeri hui si jheel" hai.

agar tu ijazzat de toh.......................

toh bata , kya main tujhme kho jaau?
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2006, 02:09:14 AM »
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Good one Ranju!! 3rd line kuch ajeeb lagi hai....sad5

band ankhon mai duniya basai hai
khuli najaro se di duhai hai
samjh sako to samjh lo, kaya hai dil mai
kah diya ab, phir na kahna ki sanam harjaai hai
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2006, 02:14:25 AM »
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shukriya pooja , 3rd line ajeeb hai..........? :?: mujhe apni nazar mein yah bhi pyar ka ek khubsurta andaz laga , plz aap bataye yadi koi aur line hai aap bata sakti hai thanks..........


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band ankhon mai duniya basai hai
khuli najaro se di duhai hai
samjh sako to samjh lo, kaya hai dil mai
kah diya ab, phir na kahna ki sanam harjaai hai

nice.........
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2006, 02:22:44 AM »
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.... Tere seene per mund kar ankhein
khushbu ki tarah, fiza mai bikhar jaau....


yah line kaise lagi.... 3rd line ki jagah....

apki apni feelings hai... and sorry agar apko boora laga ho........ lekin "seene ke jungle " yah jungle word kuch ajeeb sa laga!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2006, 02:28:45 AM »
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keep it up ranjana... nice going... but jungle.. is it hindi or english...

har nadi behte hain sagar ke oar...
har thithli ke udan phoolon ke oar...
kyon na main chaloon teri oar...
is duniya mein mera koi nahin aur...




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Na jaane aaj kal kyu dil karta hai ki,

nadiyaa ki lehron ki tarah teri baahon main machal jaun,

tere seene ke jungle main,jangli phuloon ki khushbu ban ke bas jaun,

tere labo par machalta jo sagar maine dekha hai,

usme se ek oak bharun aur pee jaun,

teri najaron se barsti pyar ki barish mein,

apne tan man ko bheego aaun,

kabhi- kabhi mujhe legta hai ki main "ek chotti si natkhat boond' hoon,

aur tu ek "shant thaeri hui si jheel" hai.

agar tu ijazzat de toh.......................

toh bata , kya main tujhme kho jaun?
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2006, 02:38:51 AM »
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dear Pooja.........bura are yah bhi koi bura maanne ki baat hai,yahan abhi ham sab sikh hi toh rahe hain ,aur aapki lines mujhe bahut pasand aayi......plz aap apne suggestion asi hi dete  rahe.........

shukriya

with love

ranju
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2006, 02:48:01 AM »
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shukriya mrkotians
 
aapki likhi lines bahut sundar hai.........

har nadi behte hain sagar ke oar...
har thithli ke udan phoolon ke oar...
kyon na main chaloon teri oar...
is duniya mein mera koi nahin aur...

bahut khub........
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2006, 03:34:23 AM »
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very nice everybody..

Suggestion and understanding thats YOINDIA all about I love My YOINDIA.........

Ranju you have written very good and as usual Pooja and MRK always good.......
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2006, 03:38:47 AM »
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boonde baarish ki ho ya payar ki
smane ko sagar hi dhundhti hai
ek shhant ek gehra sagar......
gar tum samjh sako agar tum maan sako
dil mera ek sagar aur aanke sagar jaisi.....
na payar ki kami hai isme na choti choti boonde
se bane atha sagar main aansuo ki
jo chahe le lo main to yahin tha yahi rahunga.....
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2006, 04:04:58 AM »
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boonde baarish ki ho ya payar ki
smane ko sagar hi dhundhti hai
ek shhant ek gehra sagar......
gar tum samjh sako agar tum maan sako
dil mera ek sagar aur aanke sagar jaisi.....
na payar ki kami hai isme na choti choti boonde
se bane atha sagar main aansuo ki
jo chahe le lo main to yahin tha yahi rahunga.....


bahut sundar vikas ji ........aaj toh aapne hame lajawab kar diya.........

tere goad mein sar rakh kar,
tere agosh mein chip kar
teri aankhon mein kho kar
aaj fir ek baar ........
sirf ek baar......
chirnidra mein  sone ko dil chahta hai.......
tere pahlu mein simat jane ko jee chahta hai.n/m
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2006, 05:50:28 AM »
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Thanks and good one Ranju again.

Na chaho jis par kud ko yakeen na hao
sapne dekho par bhuja ke diye na soya karo
zamana bahut sangdil hai sanam
main to hun awara tum apni fikar zayada kiya karo
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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2006, 06:31:57 AM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ranju ji, pooja ji, vikas ji, mrk...
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2006, 06:45:51 AM »
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shukriya Gesu ji..........
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bahut hi khoobsurat ranju ji, pooja ji, vikas ji, mrk...


Thanks GESU JIIIIIIIII
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«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2006, 06:59:57 AM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ranju ji, pooja ji, vikas ji, mrk...


Thanks GESU JIIIIIIIII


 :cry: galti ho gayi.. vikas tongue3
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