Aik khatkaa huaa, aur wo aa gaye!

by abdbundeli on February 27, 2011, 07:02:39 PM
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Raat kaali thee beyhad, magar dwaar par,
Aik khatkaa huaa, aur wo aa gaye!
Aik lamhey mein saaree siyaahee gayee;
Nain mund kar khuley, aur bouraa gaye!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2011, 07:15:37 PM »
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kya baat hai sirji--too good.
aapka likha ek line bhi ho to kamaal hota hai ji.
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2011, 07:27:55 PM »
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kya baat hai sirji--too good.
aapka likha ek line bhi ho to kamaal hota hai ji.
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Shukriyah Nirala ji!

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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 04:23:07 PM »
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Shukriyah 'manjum' ji!

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