<>*Aksar puchti hun*<>

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<>*Aksar puchti hun*<>

Aksar puchti hun main mere unse ee dost
gar tere badan me behte khun me
zehar ban bas jaun..
tujhe dheeme dheeme maut ki raah par
tadapta chhod jaun..
to kya tab bhi tu
yunhi mujhko chaahega...?
yunhi mujhko saraahega......?
mere pyaar me dubb kar
kya yunhi jeeta jayega..?
har pal maut ko yunhi
haske gale lagayega..?

unhone dekha mujhe
ek nazar kuch is tarah
jaise keh rahe hon k......


ee sanam...khuda kaha nahin ..
puja hai tujhe maine..
teri raza pe zindagi
teri raza pe maut hai meri..
tu saamne hai nazar k
to ye zehrili saansein bhi
amrut hain meri..
tu nahin meri
to ye jannat ki khushi bhi
jahannum hai meri..
tere liye
ye zindagi ka zehar pina
aasaan hai meri jaanam..
tere bagair na ek pal ho
ye hi mangta hun
tujhse failake  ye daaman...!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2010, 12:46:29 PM »
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bahut khoob Kasak ji... bahut pyaare sawaal aur bahut pyaara jawaab...!!!agar ye sawaal koi mujhse poochhe to main uska jawaab kuch is tarha deta...



jise tum zeher keh rahi ho mere liye wo to amrit hai,
kaise kahun main tumse ki mujhe tumse kaisi preet hai,

saanse to chalti hain meri par unme khushboo tumhaari hai,
dil to mera hi hai par usme har ek dhadkan tumhaari hai,

main to ek zinda laash tha, ab tumne jeena sikhaya hai mujhe,
bhool chuka tha khushi ka matlab, tumne hasna sikhaya hai mujhe,

ye kaise mumkin hai ki main maanlu tum meri maut ho,
tumse mohabbat ki hai maine, tum to meri zindagi ho,

koi poochhe mujhse ki mujhe meri zindagi ya tumhaari khushi pyaari hai,
haske yahi kahunga main mujhe meri zindagi dene waale ki khushi pyaari hai...
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2010, 01:09:03 PM »
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klaskar ji.....ye poem meri most fav poem hai...kuch haal unke dil ka isme bayaan hota hai aur kuch meri pareshani...
lekin aapne iska jo reply diya wo...dil ko chhu gaya...
kuch guzre lamhe kuch yadein fir aankhonme sanwar gai...
shukriya ji....

mujhe zindagi manne wale sun...
main kaise tujhe zindagi dungi
main to khud har pal bujhta diya hun
main kaise tujhe rosni dungi..

teri saanson me basi hai khushbu meri magar
main khud ek murjhaya phool hun
na  rahi mujhme ab koi khushbuu
na rang hun na koi roop hun....!!!

mujhse hi teri khilti hasi
teri har khushi hun keh raha hai tu
lekin ee nadaan zara dekh to sahi
main to khud gum se sara bor hun...!!!

mujhse nahin meri nadaniyon se pyar karne wale
main to tere gum ki ek wajah hun
na de pai tujhe kuch bhi yahan
main wo  tera bigda naseeb hun...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2010, 01:16:48 PM »
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klaskar ji.....ye poem meri most fav poem hai...kuch haal unke dil ka isme bayaan hota hai aur kuch meri pareshani...
lekin aapne iska jo reply diya wo...dil ko chhu gaya...
kuch guzre lamhe kuch yadein fir aankhonme sanwar gai...
shukriya ji....

mujhe zindagi manne wale sun...
main kaise tujhe zindagi dungi
main to khud har pal bujhta diya hun
main kaise tujhe rosni dungi..

teri saanson me basi hai khushbu meri magar
main khud ek murjhaya phool hun
na  rahi mujhme ab koi khushbuu
na rang hun na koi roop hun....!!!

mujhse hi teri khilti hasi
teri har khushi hun keh raha hai tu
lekin ee nadaan zara dekh to sahi
main to khud gum se sara bor hun...!!!

mujhse nahin meri nadaniyon se pyar karne wale
main to tere gum ki ek wajah hun
na de pai tujhe kuch bhi yahan
main wo  tera bigda naseeb hun...!!!

bht khub kasak ji

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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2010, 11:49:00 AM »
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You are always welcome Kasak ji... mujhe bhi bahut pasand aayi aapki ye kavita aur use padhte hi hum bhi flow me likh gaye... jaanke bahut achcha laga ki hamara jawaab aapke dil ko chhoo gaya... waise ek baat kehna chahunga agar guzre lamhe sukhad ho to hamesha yaad karna chahiye par agar unse dard mile to unse dur rehna hi achcha hota hai...!!!

aur bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne is baar bhi... par bahut peeda hai in shabdon me... bahut dard hai...!!!

kuch kuch bikhre huye shabdon ko jodke maine apke liye jawaab tayyar kiya hai... ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi... aapke jawaab ke intzaar me ye kuch panktiyaan pesh hain...


shamaa ke sang jal jaana to parwaane ki mohabbat hai,
kaaton ke sang khilne ki to har gulaab ki aadat hai,

mere haathon ki lakeeren badal dun agar tum mujhe mil jao,
mere kismat ki rekha main badal dun agar tum mujhe mil jao,

tumse alag na zindagi main maangu, tum sang hi main mar jaun,
maut ko haske gale laga lu main, agar tum mujhe mil jao,

sukhe huye gulaabon ko main apne ishq se rang daalun,
unme bhi main khushboo bhar du agar tum mujhe mil jao,

tumhaare hothon ko fir se hasa dun, unpe muskaan le aaun,
apne sang tumhe hasna sikha dun agar tum mujhe mil jao,

mohabbat kya hai main tumko bata dun, agar tum mujhe mil jao,
zindagi ko bhi main jeena sikha dun, agar tum mujhe mil jao...
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 12:31:48 PM »
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khubsurat....pyar se bhara hua...dil ko chhu lene wala...aur aankhen num kar dene wala reply hai Klaskar ji ye....

agar main tumhari ho gai...

dil me na koi umang rahegi
na ruuh me sukuun hoga
na aankhon me nind hogi
na tumhe kabhi chain milega

agar main tumhari ho gai to...

har raat karwat badalte guzregi
har din tadapte hue bitega
har lamha dua hogi lub par
har saans me ek toofan hoga


agar main tumhari ho gai...

har pal mangoge apne marne ki dua
har pal maut ka intezar hoga
main dard ka jeeta jagta tohfa hun
mil gaya tumhe to na fir khushi ka basera hoga


agar main tumhari ho gai...


meri nigahon me zehar
meri chaahton me sirf badnami
mere pyaar me hai dhokha
main bewafai ki hun ek nishani


agar mail tumhari ho gai...

har pal ashkon ka aankhon me basera hoga
har pal bas tumhe gum me dube rehna hoga
lub bhul jayenge muskurana sanam
khudko har pal tumhe maarna hoga..


agar main tumhari ho gai....
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2010, 12:57:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai... par itna dard kyun... kahaan se laati hain aap itna dard... par shabdon ki khoobsurti dekhiye ko bas wah kehne ka mann karta hai...bahut khoob sarkaar ... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

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mujhe kisi umang ki nahi, mujhe to teri jarurat hai,
mere ruh ko sukoon ki nahi, usey to teri jarurat hai,
mere aankhon ko neend ki nahi, tera tasavvur jaruri hai,
mere dil ko chain ki nahi, tujh sang dhadakne ki jarurat hai,

sach...mujhe sirf aur sirf teri jarurat hai...

raaton ko hum jaag bhi lenge, bas tera saath jaruri hai,
din ki tadap hum jhel bhi lenge, bas tera saath jaruri hai,
duwaon me bas tu hi hogi, jab tu mere saath me hogi,
har tofaan ko hum jhel bhi lenge, bas tera saath jaruri hai,
sach...mujhe sirf aur sirf teri jarurat hai...

maut se bhi humein dar nahi lagta, bas tere saath ki jarurat hai,
zindagi se kabhi chahat hi na ki thi, bas tere saath ki jarurat hai,
tere har dard ko main has ke seh lunga, bas tera saath jaruri hai,
khushiyon ko mai dhund hi lunga, bas tere saath ki jarurat hai,

sach...mujhe sirf aur sirf teri jarurat hai...

tere pyaar me zeher pi lunga, bas tera saath jaruri hai,
har badnaami jhel bhi lunga, bas tera saath jaruri hai,
apne pyaar se tujhe jeet lunga, bas tera sath jaruri hai,
tujhe bewafaa hone nahi dunga, bas tera saath jaruri hai,

sach...mujhe sirf aur sirf teri jarurat hai...

ashkon ko behne nahi dunga, bas mujhe teri jarurat hai,
ghum bhi tere rehne nahi dunga, bas mujhe teri jarurat hai,
muskaan hothon pe le hi aunga, bas mujhe teri jarurat hai,
khudko maarke bhi ji lunga, bas mujhe teri jarurat hai,

sach...mujhe sirf aur sirf teri jarurat hai....
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2012, 02:14:21 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 05:45:14 PM »
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itne sare clapping parwaz ji........ aur mujhe pata bhi nahin....... hayeeeee itna kuch miss kar diya maien itne dino me.... iske liye to kabse wait kar rahi thi main.... thnxxxxxx jiiiiiiiiiii
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thnx a lotttt sheel didi....
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boht khub kasak ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2012, 06:23:12 PM »
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<>*Aksar puchti hun*<>

Aksar puchti hun main mere unse ee dost
gar tere badan me behte khun me
zehar ban bas jaun..
naagin ho kyaa? Aii laa maiN to gayaa. Koi bachaa lo. Phol ke chakkar me saanp se dosti kar bithaa. Bachaa lo koi.
tujhe dheeme dheeme maut ki raah par
tadapta chhod jaun..
to kya tab bhi tu
yunhi mujhko chaahega...?
yunhi mujhko saraahega......?
Naa jee naa. Ye tadapna warapna hame nahee aataa hai. Agar tadapne waalaa hi chaahiye to kisii aur ka darwaaja khatkhataayeN
mere pyaar me dubb kar
kya yunhi jeeta jayega..?
Ye pyaa koi paanii ka dariyaaN hai. Jo dub jaao.
Wese bhii mujhe tairna wairnaa nahee aataa hai.

har pal maut ko yunhi
haske gale lagayega..?

Maut kisii khoobsurat larkii kaa naam hai kyaa.
Agar hai to gale se kyaa dil se bhi lagaa leNge.

unhone dekha mujhe
ek nazar kuch is tarah
jaise keh rahe hon k......

K... K.... MaiN koi devdaas yaa majnu nahee hoN
ee sanam...khuda kaha nahin ..
puja hai tujhe maine..
teri raza pe zindagi
teri raza pe maut hai meri..
tu saamne hai nazar k
to ye zehrili saansein bhi
amrut hain meri..
tu nahin meri
to ye jannat ki khushi bhi
jahannum hai meri..
tere liye
ye zindagi ka zehar pina
aasaan hai meri jaanam..
tere bagair na ek pal ho
ye hi mangta hun
tujhse failake  ye daaman...!!!!
OMG ye to majnu, farhaad aur kaish kaa bhi baap lagtaa hai

Kasak jee etnii dard bhari poetry pahle kabhii nahii parii.
En par mazakiyaa comment karna kitnaa mushkil thaa. Ye bas maiN jaanta hoN.
Dil ko cho gayi aapki poetry.
MaiNe aapko aaj pahlii baar para hai.
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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2012, 09:58:19 PM »
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thnx saahil
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«Reply #14 on: October 18, 2012, 09:59:45 PM »
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maasoom shehzaade... dilon ki mallika ko aapka ye andaaz e reply bada hi mastam mast laga.... umeed karti hun aap isis tarah hasi khushi mujhe reply dete rahenge aur mere likhe ulte sidhe post ka maza lete rahenge......
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