apna banaya nahin jata

by abeera on March 10, 2006, 10:53:22 PM
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gum mein hasane walon ko kabhi rulaya nahi jatha
lehron se pani ko kabhi hataya nahi jatha
honewale ho jate hai kudh hi dil se apnae
kisi ko kehkar apna banya nahi jatha!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2006, 08:02:51 AM »
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Good One Abeera....
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2006, 09:23:28 AM »
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Very nice one Abeera.
Arz hai ..


Keh kar apna banaya bhi to kya,
Sehra mein do boond paani giraya bhi to kya,
Khairat-e-mohabbat koi kya dega,
Fakir ban haath failaya bhi to kya.
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2006, 11:59:35 AM »
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asalam alikum aryaan and preet
thanks for liking,bahut din ke baad aaye hain aryaan aap kuch naya post kijeye

jab bhi tanhai ne unko sataya hoga,
tab tab unko mera khayal aaya hoga
gum ye nahi hai ki woh bhool gayae humko
gum yeh hai ki ro ro ke bhulaya hoga!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2006, 12:00:36 PM »
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bahut khoob abeera ji and aryan ji!!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2006, 12:07:42 PM »
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thanks gesu for appreciating your poetry is also great

tapish suraj ki hoti hai
jalna zameen ko parta hai
qasur aankhon ka hata hai
tarapna dil ko parta hai

take lots of care
ALLAH HAFIZ
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2006, 01:46:44 PM »
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gum mein hasane walon ko kabhi rulaya nahi jatha
lehron se pani ko kabhi hataya nahi jatha
honewale ho jate hai kudh hi dil se apnae
kisi ko kehkar apna banya nahi jatha!!


BOhat hi Aacha Likhya hai Abeera!

Jinhein paana kismat mein likha ho...
Unhein Bandagi kar bulaya nahi jaata
Mousam ho chala hai aab Judaii ka...
Behta nahi mere Dedon se tarr abb kabhie...
Kyunki Tujhsii nawajish ko aaur rulaya nahi jaata!!!

~! Neer !~
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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2006, 03:41:12 PM »
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ji bahut sahi kaha neer ji!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2006, 10:59:30 PM »
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thanks neer and gesu .and neer i am not male i am female


kuch nasha apki baton ka hai,
kuch nasha dheemi barsat ka hai,
hamne aap yunhi sharabi math kahiyae
yeh dil par asar apkae mulaqat ka hai!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2006, 11:23:51 PM »
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Quote from: "abeera"
gum mein hasane walon ko kabhi rulaya nahi jatha
lehron se pani ko kabhi hataya nahi jatha
honewale ho jate hai kudh hi dil se apnae
kisi ko kehkar apna banya nahi jatha!!


BOhat hi Aacha Likhya hai Abeera Bhai

Jinhein paana kismat mein likha ho...
Unhein Bandagi kar bulaya nahi jaata
Mousam ho chala hai aab Judaii ka...
Behta nahi mere Dedon se tarr abb kabhie...
Kyunki Tujhsii nawajish ko aaur rulaya nahi jaata!!!

~! Neer !~


very  nice Abeera.........Nirbhay.........aap  sabhi ne  bahot acchal likha
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2006, 11:37:14 PM »
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Sorry Abeera Jee.......

And sorry to say that but u shud Mention NM in order to address the credit to appropiate.
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