arz hai...

by deetri1 on May 28, 2008, 02:24:26 AM
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aaj chhoti bahar mein ek ghazal post kar raha hoon, ummeed hai aap log bardast karenge


ho hi gaya wo apna
kya dekhte ho…? sapna!

ab khooN rula deta hai
unki tamanna karna

Hum vasl meiN bhi roye
To hijr me kya haNsna

Unka taghaful paiham
Apna lagavat rakhna

Wo ladkhadana apna
Phir khud b khud sambhalna

Jo faisala karna tum
Apna samajhkar karna

Rishta na todo humse
chahe adavat rakhna

Pahle zamee ka ho ja
Tab aasmaaN par chadhna

Milna qayamat ke din
Hogi qayamat varna

Sabko khushi mil jaye
Aisi muhabbat karna

Peena pilana hoga
ek shaam humse mil na...!

Hai roz jeena mushkil
Asaan ek din marna

Hasti adam sab kya hai...?
Is pher meiN mat padna

Aghaaz kar lo pahle
Anjaam se phir darna

kuchh to asar paida ho
yuN hi ghazal mat likhna
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2008, 02:28:03 AM »
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bahoot khoob deepak ji!! yah lines bahoot achi lagi
Jo faisala karna tum
Apna samajhkar karna

Rishta na todo humse
chahe adavat rakhna

Pahle zamee ka ho ja
Tab aasmaaN par chadhna
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2008, 10:25:23 AM »
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Very nice lines deetri ..
very nice lines Pooja sis ...
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2008, 02:42:54 AM »
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Beautiful creation !
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