Baatein!

by Ravi_Dave on February 02, 2006, 07:11:01 PM
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Aaj naa karo dil lubhaa ne ki baate,
kal wohi zakhm ban jayegi,
chedoge jab ghum ko,
chaut hi malam ban jayegi,

kar naa sakoge kisi aur se gila,
bechaini chaa jayegi,
ke har pal woh hi yaad aayegi,
karoge baate,
to baato mein khamoshi chaa jaayegi,

Aaj naa karo dil lubhaa ne ki baate,
kal woh hi zakhm ban jayegi (2)

intezaar rahega deedar ka,
aankhein aise tarasti rahengi,
chand nikalega is tarah,
ke narmi hi naa basegi,

mausam-e-bahaar mein khushboo dhoondoge,
sirf haawa mehakegi,
chaud jo woh denge,
sirf maut hi boolayegi (2)

Aaj naa karo dil lubhaa ne ki baate,
kal woh hi zakhm ban jayegi (2)!
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2006, 10:42:16 PM »
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Baatein to sabhi karte hain,
sabko kya maloom dard ka ranj,
jab baatatein hain ghum ki ek hasrat,
jo haske, shayari kehke, wah wah kar dete hain!!!

Mujhe laga yahaan Fit hoga is liye post kar diya, yeh hadsaa mere saath kuch pal pehle hi hua!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2006, 11:22:03 PM »
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Wah bahut khub likh hai RDji...

us kii baatein yaad rahiin aur us kaa lehjaa bhool gaaya
pyaasii dhartii key hontoon par mera naam nahin to kyaa
main vo baadal kaa tukrha hun jis ko dariyaa bhool gaaya..
duniya valey kuch bhi kahein apni majaborii hay
us kii galii jab yaad aaii hai ghar kaa rastaa bhool gaaya..
Yehi hai dil bar ki batein jo aaj tak mujhay yaha tak zindaa rekha!
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2006, 01:34:49 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ANU JAAN AND RAVI...


uski baato ne hamko diwaana kar diya
pyaar ke har rang aur  rup meri baato mein bhar diya
likhti nahi paati thee kabhi ek lafaz bhi mein
 uski baato ne aaj mere lafajo ko geeto mein dhaal diya
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2006, 05:10:20 AM »
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Baatein karne ka andaaz hai unka kuch aaisa
patjard mein bhi jaaise koi bahar aa jaye
woh hassde jo ek baar,aapne chand se chehre se
mere machalte dil ko phir se karar aa jaye...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2006, 05:13:10 AM »
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wah bahut khoob likha sabne..
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2006, 09:36:40 AM »
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Sukhriya sabhi ka ke aapne pasand kiya!!!

And bohat khoob BAATEIN ki sabne!!! Jokin Bohat accha likha hain
keep it going!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2006, 10:36:20 AM »
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Zubaan se baatein to nahi
Aankhon ki kuch baatein hoti hai
Waqt na jane kahaan chale jaata hai
Jab bhi unse mulakaat hoti hai..

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2006, 11:22:40 PM »
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Very Nice GesuJi!

Waqt ki baatein na chedo waqt beet jaayega,
mulakaat unse ki nahi unka phir ehsaas chaa jaayega,
woh kabhi milege humse,
yeh tamanna mein aankhen kamzor hogayi,
ke yeh umar to dard ke ranj mein hi ab chali jaayegi!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2006, 05:31:17 AM »
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shukriya aur bahut khoob ravi ji...........
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2006, 01:52:49 PM »
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Sukhriya n Ur welcome GesuJi!

Baatein sirf shabd to nahi,
ek lab-e-khamosh ishaar hai,
samaj sake sabhi to,
dil se ubharta ek pyar ka mitha ikraar hain!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2006, 01:58:10 PM »
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good one Ravi...

baatein kuch aise jo kabhi dil jorr jaaye
baatein kuch aise, jo jeevan morr jaaye
baatein wo jo tu mere sung kar jaaye
baatein wo, jo mithi ek yaad ban jaaye
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2006, 02:23:12 PM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
good one Ravi...

baatein kuch aise jo kabhi dil jorr jaaye
baatein kuch aise, jo jeevan morr jaaye
baatein wo jo tu mere sung kar jaaye
baatein wo, jo mithi ek yaad ban jaaye


wah...
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2006, 02:30:30 PM »
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shukaria Gesu !!
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2006, 03:21:19 PM »
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Sukhriya n Bohat Achhe PoojaJi!

Mithi yaad mein khoye
to aise baatein nikalgayi,
bina unke din lambe hogaye
aur chain bhari raatein kam hogayi!!!
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