~~~Bahaana mera...~~~

by vitasta on May 20, 2009, 04:28:25 AM
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mar mitaa hai ab talak har aashiq, deewana mera
kayi zubaanon se guzra har lafz-o-afsaana mera

samajhne ki koshish na karni chaahi kisi ne lekin
kaise hua tha bairi har ik khwaab, begaana mera

maana zindagi guzaari jhoothe jalwon ki taraj par
masti mein dooba choota hai har weerana mera

han ho chali ek saanjh paar, akhiri padav hai ye
maano rasiya, bhool jao duniya, bahaana mera

tumne tode hain dil par pyaas bujhi kahan hogi
aao chhaliya, basta hai yahan maikhaana mera

aaj shaam jhoomenge jaise parwaana-o-shama
'Noor' ki saanson mein 'Viti,' bajta taraana mera
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 04:30:57 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob vitasta ji.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 04:31:44 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob vitasta ji.
shukriya madhuwesh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 04:33:41 AM »
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mar mitaa hai ab talak har aashiq, deewana mera
kayi zubaanon se guzra har lafz-o-afsaana mera

samajhne ki koshish na karni chaahi kisi ne lekin
kaise hua tha bairi har ik khwaab, begaana mera

maana zindagi guzaari jhoothe jalwon ki taraj par
masti mein dooba choota hai har weerana mera

han ho chali ek saanjh paar, akhiri padav hai ye
maano rasiya, bhool jao duniya, bahaana mera

tumne tode hain dil par pyaas bujhi kahan hogi
aao chhaliya, basta hai yahan maikhaana mera

aaj shaam jhoomenge jaise parwaana-o-shama
'Noor' ki saanson mein 'Viti,' bajta taraana mera


Wah... wah Bahut khoob Vitasta  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 04:34:37 AM »
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Wah... wah Bahut khoob Vitasta  Usual Smile

shukriya roja ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 04:42:44 AM »
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shukriya roja ji Usual Smile

Welcome Vitasta .... and Welcome back after a long gap  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 04:45:09 AM »
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Welcome Vitasta .... and Welcome back after a long gap  Usual Smile

thanks a lot! Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 05:18:26 AM »
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mar mitaa hai ab talak har aashiq, deewana mera
kayi zubaanon se guzra har lafz-o-afsaana mera

samajhne ki koshish na karni chaahi kisi ne lekin
kaise hua tha bairi har ik khwaab, begaana mera

maana zindagi guzaari jhoothe jalwon ki taraj par
masti mein dooba choota hai har weerana mera

han ho chali ek saanjh paar, akhiri padav hai ye
maano rasiya, bhool jao duniya, bahaana mera

tumne tode hain dil par pyaas bujhi kahan hogi
aao chhaliya, basta hai yahan maikhaana mera

aaj shaam jhoomenge jaise parwaana-o-shama
'Noor' ki saanson mein 'Viti,' bajta taraana mera



VERII NAAICE   VITASTA JI
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 05:36:00 AM »
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Aao chaliya basta hain yahan maikhana mera.....Subhan_allah ek khoobsurat peshkash bohat khoob Viti  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bujha lo apne dil ki aag, ab kya fayda iska

Sath mere jal chuka, aashiyana mera...

-SG-   

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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 05:38:15 AM »
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mar mitaa hai ab talak har aashiq, deewana mera
kayi zubaanon se guzra har lafz-o-afsaana mera

samajhne ki koshish na karni chaahi kisi ne lekin
kaise hua tha bairi har ik khwaab, begaana mera

maana zindagi guzaari jhoothe jalwon ki taraj par
masti mein dooba choota hai har weerana mera

han ho chali ek saanjh paar, akhiri padav hai ye
maano rasiya, bhool jao duniya, bahaana mera

tumne tode hain dil par pyaas bujhi kahan hogi
aao chhaliya, basta hai yahan maikhaana mera

aaj shaam jhoomenge jaise parwaana-o-shama
'Noor' ki saanson mein 'Viti,' bajta taraana mera


WAAH VITASTA JEE..

BAHUT KHOOB...
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 05:49:14 AM »
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Vitasta ji bahut khoob.. yeo hi likhte rahow.. kepp up the wonderful work

mar mitaa hai ab talak har aashiq, deewana mera
kayi zubaanon se guzra har lafz-o-afsaana mera

samajhne ki koshish na karni chaahi kisi ne lekin
kaise hua tha bairi har ik khwaab, begaana mera

maana zindagi guzaari jhoothe jalwon ki taraj par
masti mein dooba choota hai har weerana mera

han ho chali ek saanjh paar, akhiri padav hai ye
maano rasiya, bhool jao duniya, bahaana mera

tumne tode hain dil par pyaas bujhi kahan hogi
aao chhaliya, basta hai yahan maikhaana mera

aaj shaam jhoomenge jaise parwaana-o-shama
'Noor' ki saanson mein 'Viti,' bajta taraana mera

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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2009, 10:49:20 AM »
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mar mitaa hai ab talak har aashiq, deewana mera
kayi zubaanon se guzra har lafz-o-afsaana mera

samajhne ki koshish na karni chaahi kisi ne lekin
kaise hua tha bairi har ik khwaab, begaana mera

maana zindagi guzaari jhoothe jalwon ki taraj par
masti mein dooba choota hai har weerana mera

han ho chali ek saanjh paar, akhiri padav hai ye
maano rasiya, bhool jao duniya, bahaana mera

tumne tode hain dil par pyaas bujhi kahan hogi
aao chhaliya, basta hai yahan maikhaana mera

aaj shaam jhoomenge jaise parwaana-o-shama
'Noor' ki saanson mein 'Viti,' bajta taraana mera


Bohot achcha likha hai Vitasta
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2009, 12:08:40 PM »
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VERII NAAICE   VITASTA JI
thanks khamosh ji!
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2009, 12:10:00 PM »
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Aao chaliya basta hain yahan maikhana mera.....Subhan_allah ek khoobsurat peshkash bohat khoob Viti  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bujha lo apne dil ki aag, ab kya fayda iska

Sath mere jal chuka, aashiyana mera...


-SG-  


shukriya sajid ji...aapne bahut achcha jawab diya Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2009, 12:10:31 PM »
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WAAH VITASTA JEE..

BAHUT KHOOB...
shukriya pandit ji!
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