Bahut door hoon par Tujhse Juda Nahi Hoon Main.....

by khwaish on February 22, 2008, 07:10:06 PM
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Bahut door hoon par tujhse juda nahi hoon main
parchai hoon teri par phir kyon tere saath nahi hoon main??..

log kahenge ke main bedard hoon, khudgarz hoon
par kya sach mein tere pyaar ke kaabil nahi hoon main??.

Jo mere khwaabo mein, socho mein, khayalo mein hai shaamil
ussi shaks se aaj puchta hoon..
"kya tera apna nahi hoon main?"

kuch jazbaat dil mein aise bhi the jo hamesha se chup rahe
par aaj unn jazbaaton ko alfaz mil gaye hai
aaj unn jazbaaton ka karzdaar nahi hoon main...

jo mohabbat ki daastaan khamoshiyon se guzre
usme bhi bahut dard aur jazba hota hai,
har panha pad liya jaye,aisi koi kitaab nahi hoon main...

Kabhi-Kabhi apne likhe hue alfaaz bhi apne hisse ki
zindagi jee lete hai
ab koi dil mein chupa hua ehsaas nahi hoon main...

jaanta hoon, aapne bhi kabhi suni hai woh dil ki pukaar ko
ab yeh na kehna ke woh awaaz hi nahi hoon main...

Har ilzam, har shikwa "khwaish" seh jayega iss jahan mein
bas...kabhi yeh na kehna ke ab tera nahi hoon main....

"KHWAISH" naam hone ki bhi ek wajeh thi is dil ke paas
par aaj...baaki koi khwaish nahi hoon main....color]
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«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2008, 07:13:05 PM »
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wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!!

Door hokar bhi koi dil ke pass gungunata hai
Parchai sa bana rooh mai basa jaata hai

Bedardi aisa, chain se kahin rahne nahi deta
Her pal yaadon mai sataye jaata hai

Kaabil hai kon kiske, ab yah sawal kaha
Dhere dheere jo nas nas main base jaata hai

Khwabo-o-khayalo per ab hai raz uska
Jo raato ki meri nindein liye jaata hai

Her Jazbaat uske se kyun mere jazbaat mil jaate hai
Yah kaya mere Ahsaaso ko, ajj hue jaata hai

Khamoshia bhi teri, de gai thi mujhko sun
Phir kyun juban per lake, bezaar hue jaata hai

Tere alfaazo main, zindagi apni najar aai
Kyun yah soch soch kar preshan hua jaata hai

Yah shikwa tera, kisi din le lega meri jaan
Bahoot door hokar bhi, koi bahoot pass hue jaata hai!!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2008, 07:29:26 PM »
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Bohot khhob...phir se Khwaish and Pooja ... ! (Par dobara kyun post kiya  Huh? pehle waala hata ke )
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2008, 08:49:32 PM »
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kyun ki galati se khwaish ji ne dard -e-shayri mai post kar diya tha aor bina puche delete bhi kar diya waha se!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2008, 08:52:17 PM »
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Oh...ok..maine thread location pe ghaur nai kiya tha Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 22, 2008, 08:57:10 PM »
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Bahut door hoon par tujhse juda nahi hoon main
parchai hoon teri par phir kyon tere saath nahi hoon main??..

log kahenge ke main bedard hoon, khudgarz hoon
par kya sach mein tere pyaar ke kaabil nahi hoon main??.

Jo mere khwaabo mein, socho mein, khayalo mein hai shaamil
ussi shaks se aaj puchta hoon..
"kya tera apna nahi hoon main?"

kuch jazbaat dil mein aise bhi the jo hamesha se chup rahe
par aaj unn jazbaaton ko alfaz mil gaye hai
aaj unn jazbaaton ka karzdaar nahi hoon main...

jo mohabbat ki daastaan khamoshiyon se guzre
usme bhi bahut dard aur jazba hota hai,
har panha pad liya jaye,aisi koi kitaab nahi hoon main...

Kabhi-Kabhi apne likhe hue alfaaz bhi apne hisse ki
zindagi jee lete hai
ab koi dil mein chupa hua ehsaas nahi hoon main...

jaanta hoon, aapne bhi kabhi suni hai woh dil ki pukaar ko
ab yeh na kehna ke woh awaaz hi nahi hoon main...

Har ilzam, har shikwa "khwaish" seh jayega iss jahan mein
bas...kabhi yeh na kehna ke ab tera nahi hoon main....

"KHWAISH" naam hone ki bhi ek wajeh thi is dil ke paas
par aaj...baaki koi khwaish nahi hoon main....color]


Wah wah khwaish ji... bahut umda likha hai aapne. maza aagaya padkar..
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2008, 09:40:39 PM »
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wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!!

Door hokar bhi koi dil ke pass gungunata hai
Parchai sa bana rooh mai basa jaata hai

Bedardi aisa, chain se kahin rahne nahi deta
Her pal yaadon mai sataye jaata hai

Kaabil hai kon kiske, ab yah sawal kaha
Dhere dheere jo nas nas main base jaata hai

Khwabo-o-khayalo per ab hai raz uska
Jo raato ki meri nindein liye jaata hai

Her Jazbaat uske se kyun mere jazbaat mil jaate hai
Yah kaya mere Ahsaaso ko, ajj hue jaata hai

Khamoshia bhi teri, de gai thi mujhko sun
Phir kyun juban per lake, bezaar hue jaata hai

Tere alfaazo main, zindagi apni najar aai
Kyun yah soch soch kar preshan hua jaata hai

Yah shikwa tera, kisi din le lega meri jaan
Bahoot door hokar bhi, koi bahoot pass hue jaata hai!!!


Wow didi kehte ho Ishq main mujhe likhna aata nahi aur
ek se badkar ek padne mil raha hai... wah keep up didi.
Pehle do line ka shuruwat hi mujhe bahut accha laga.
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2008, 09:42:02 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Roja... koi itna acha likhe to jawab apne app acha ban jaata hai!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2008, 03:44:36 AM »
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Bahot khoob kitu ji...dil ko chu gaya..
yeh lines toh ... bahot hi acha...

Bahut door hoon par tujhse juda nahi hoon main
parchai hoon teri par phir kyon tere saath nahi hoon main??..


pooja di wow kya baat hai ..really bahot acha laga...aap ki likhi huyi shayari padh ke...
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«Reply #9 on: February 23, 2008, 09:02:14 AM »
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Bohat acha likha hai khwaish ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 23, 2008, 11:20:44 PM »
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bahut hi umda likha hai khwaishji
aapki ye lins dil mein reh gayi...

"KHWAISH" naam hone ki bhi ek wajeh thi is dil ke paas
par aaj...baaki koi khwaish nahi hoon main....

bahut khoob !!!
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2008, 02:01:08 AM »
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Bohat durr hokar bhi koi kareeb lagta hai..
Kabhi kabhi tanha rehete bhi durr lagta hai

Saath jo hai tumhara to har pal suhana lagta hai
Na hoga kabhi gum aisa mujhe lagta hai

Jante to nahi hai hum ke taqdeer mein likha kya hai
Gar jo tum saath na hue to darr lagta hai

Iss paheli ko guzar jane mein ek zamana lagta hai
Sach yeh ke udaas ho tum mujh se durr hokar

Hansta chehra tumhara ek phool sa lagta hai
Bohat durr hokar bhi koi kareeb lagta hai.
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2008, 09:52:23 AM »
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wah honey kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob.... yah lines to bahoot hi achi lagi....

Jante to nahi hai hum ke taqdeer mein likha kya hai
Gar jo tum saath na hue to darr lagta hai
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2008, 04:05:28 PM »
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shukaria Punam!!
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«Reply #14 on: February 29, 2008, 09:42:10 AM »
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wah wah wah!! kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!!

Door hokar bhi koi dil ke pass gungunata hai
Parchai sa bana rooh mai basa jaata hai

Bedardi aisa, chain se kahin rahne nahi deta
Her pal yaadon mai sataye jaata hai

Kaabil hai kon kiske, ab yah sawal kaha
Dhere dheere jo nas nas main base jaata hai

Khwabo-o-khayalo per ab hai raz uska
Jo raato ki meri nindein liye jaata hai

Her Jazbaat uske se kyun mere jazbaat mil jaate hai
Yah kaya mere Ahsaaso ko, ajj hue jaata hai

Khamoshia bhi teri, de gai thi mujhko sun
Phir kyun juban per lake, bezaar hue jaata hai

Tere alfaazo main, zindagi apni najar aai
Kyun yah soch soch kar preshan hua jaata hai

Yah shikwa tera, kisi din le lega meri jaan
Bahoot door hokar bhi, koi bahoot pass hue jaata hai!!!


bahut khoob poojaji..bahut hi acha likha hai aapne..
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