Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To Tamanna Aur Aas Hai...Shihab

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          Har Aata  Jata  Lamha  Lagta Kuch  Khas  Hai
          Jabse Dhadkano Mein  Basa Tera  Ehsaas Hai.

          Is Qadar  Mehsoos  Karta Rehta  Hoon Tujhey
          Ki  Jaise  Lagta , Har  Pal  Tu  Mere  Paas Hai.

          Mehak  Ne  Lagi  Hain  , Saanse  Bhi Sandal Si
          Jabse  Orha , Teri  Chahaton  Ka Libaash  Hai.

          Bada Hi  Lutf  Aata Hai  Hume , Aey Janeman
          Teri Yaad Mein Bhi Bas IK Ajib Si Mitthas Hai.

          Kaas Ki Kabhi Chhan Chhan Karti Aa Jao Tum
          Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To  Tamanna Aur Aas Hai.


                      ~Shihab~


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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2010, 03:43:01 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Bhaijan...Akhri line toh choo hi gayi...kay bas teri hi tamana hai aur teri hi aas hai...tu mila toh sab kuch hai warna kuch bhi nahin...Bahaut khoob...Dil ka haal likha hai apne! Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2010, 11:30:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah Shihab ji wah... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne....shabdo ka jaadu kya kota hai ye koi aapne sikhe... waah...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2010, 01:30:01 PM »
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          Har Aata  Jata Lamha  Lagta Kuch  Khas  Hai
          Jabse Dhadkano Mein Basa Tera  Ehsaas Hai.

          Is Qadar  Mehsoos  Karta Rehta Hoon Tujhey
          Ki  Jaise Lagta Hai, Har Pal Tu Mere Paas Hai.

          Mehak  Ne Lagi  Hain , Saanse  Bhi Sandal Si
          Jabse Orha , Teri Chahaton  Ka  Libaash  Hai.

          Bada Hi  Lutf  Aata Hai Hume , Aey Janeman
          Teri Yaad Mein Bhi Bas IK Ajib Si Mitthas Hai.

          Kaas Ki Kabhi Chhan Chhan Karti Aa Jao Tum
          Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To Tamanna Aur Aas Hai.


                      ~Shihab~



shihab Ji......sabhi ashaar ke khayal bahut khoob lage mujhe......very nice creation....dil se daad !

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2010, 02:20:25 PM »
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Wah wah Shihab ji,hemesha k tarah bahut baddiya aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2010, 04:20:39 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
          Har Aata  Jata Lamha  Lagta Kuch  Khas  Hai
          Jabse Dhadkano Mein Basa Tera  Ehsaas Hai.

          Is Qadar  Mehsoos  Karta Rehta Hoon Tujhey
          Ki  Jaise Lagta Hai, Har Pal Tu Mere Paas Hai.

          Mehak  Ne Lagi  Hain , Saanse  Bhi Sandal Si
          Jabse Orha , Teri Chahaton  Ka  Libaash  Hai.

          Bada Hi  Lutf  Aata Hai Hume , Aey Janeman
          Teri Yaad Mein Bhi Bas IK Ajib Si Mitthas Hai.

          Kaas Ki Kabhi Chhan Chhan Karti Aa Jao Tum
          Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To Tamanna Aur Aas Hai.


                      ~Shihab~



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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2010, 12:35:07 PM »
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Majid Bhai,Aap Jab Bhi Kuch likhte Ho,Dil se likhte ho..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2010, 12:39:58 PM »
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          Har Aata  Jata Lamha  Lagta Kuch  Khas  Hai
          Jabse Dhadkano Mein Basa Tera  Ehsaas Hai.

          Is Qadar  Mehsoos  Karta Rehta Hoon Tujhey
          Ki  Jaise Lagta Hai, Har Pal Tu Mere Paas Hai.

          Mehak  Ne Lagi  Hain , Saanse  Bhi Sandal Si
          Jabse Orha , Teri Chahaton  Ka  Libaash  Hai.

          Bada Hi  Lutf  Aata Hai Hume , Aey Janeman
          Teri Yaad Mein Bhi Bas IK Ajib Si Mitthas Hai.

          Kaas Ki Kabhi Chhan Chhan Karti Aa Jao Tum
          Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To Tamanna Aur Aas Hai.


                      ~Shihab~



Shihab Bhai Adaab Arz hai, janab kya khubshurti se ehsaas ko utara hai, Subhanallah! bahut khoob....tahe-dil se daad hazir karta hun kabool farmayen..

Allah pak se duwa karta hun ki aapko hamrsha khush rakhe, Aameen....
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2010, 02:16:37 PM »
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Aik dil ko chhoo lene waali tehreer hai janab Shihab Sahe ye aapki. Aik aik satar mithaas se pur hai. Isi liye to filbadeeh ye kahna paRa:

KahiN to sheereeN si kuchh aas paas hai saheb
Isi liye to satar meiN mithaas hai saheb

Daad qubul kijiye

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          Har Aata  Jata Lamha  Lagta Kuch  Khas  Hai
          Jabse Dhadkano Mein Basa Tera  Ehsaas Hai.

          Is Qadar  Mehsoos  Karta Rehta Hoon Tujhey
          Ki  Jaise Lagta Hai, Har Pal Tu Mere Paas Hai.

          Mehak  Ne Lagi  Hain , Saanse  Bhi Sandal Si
          Jabse Orha , Teri Chahaton  Ka  Libaash  Hai.

          Bada Hi  Lutf  Aata Hai Hume , Aey Janeman
          Teri Yaad Mein Bhi Bas IK Ajib Si Mitthas Hai.

          Kaas Ki Kabhi Chhan Chhan Karti Aa Jao Tum
          Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To Tamanna Aur Aas Hai.


                      ~Shihab~



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«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2010, 04:25:00 PM »
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Oh My My Kya Baat Hai Yaar
Itna Bhi Mittha Koi Likhta Hai Kya
Tumhari Yeh Likhwata Dil Mein Ghar Kar Gayi
Yeh Waali Main Jarur Teri Bhabhi Ko Sunaunga
Bohat Hi Pyaara Likha Hai Yaar
Teri Sadgi Tere Shabdon Mein Jhalakti Hai
Tere Shabdon Ki Mitthas Mujhe Yahan Mehsoos Hui
Bohat Hi Achhey.

ALLAH Pak Tumhe Khush Rakhe.
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2010, 02:58:35 AM »
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Wakayi kaabil-e-taarif rachna hai shihab ji...bahut hi umda...Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2010, 06:34:13 PM »
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Bahot khoob Shihab Bhai, bahot behtreen takhleeq hai ye aapki. Padhkar bahot achha laga. Marhaba.
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«Reply #12 on: August 02, 2010, 10:11:41 AM »
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          Har Aata  Jata Lamha  Lagta Kuch  Khas  Hai
          Jabse Dhadkano Mein Basa Tera  Ehsaas Hai.

          Is Qadar  Mehsoos  Karta Rehta Hoon Tujhey
          Ki  Jaise Lagta Hai, Har Pal Tu Mere Paas Hai.

          Mehak  Ne Lagi  Hain , Saanse  Bhi Sandal Si
          Jabse Orha , Teri Chahaton  Ka  Libaash  Hai.

          Bada Hi  Lutf  Aata Hai Hume , Aey Janeman
          Teri Yaad Mein Bhi Bas IK Ajib Si Mitthas Hai.

          Kaas Ki Kabhi Chhan Chhan Karti Aa Jao Tum
          Bakhuda Ik Teri Hi To Tamanna Aur Aas Hai.


                      ~Shihab~




bht pyaare ehsaas shihab ji...
bht late ye thread dekha...aur dekhkar dil khush ho gaya...

aapki shayri me ek mitha sa ehsaas hota hai jo dil ko chhu jata hai..ise hamesha banaye rakhiyega...

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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2010, 10:12:13 AM »
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Shihab Bhaa'ii:

AOA!

kaise hai.n aap? baRe dino.n baad yahaa.n aanaa huaa! aur aapki koShiSh par merii nazar paRii.. koShiSh umdaah rahii.n.. ehsaaso.n ko ba-Khoobee se aapne peSh kiyaa haii.. liKhate rahe.n aage bhee.. mere dil se Dhero.n saarii mubaaraqbaad..!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

Khudaa Haafiz

aapka

~Dhaval

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«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2010, 10:07:08 PM »
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Bohat accha likha hain ShihabJi...beautiful
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